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1Senbonzakura Magic Spells (Starters) Empty Senbonzakura Magic Spells (Starters) Wed Jul 30, 2014 6:12 am

Alexander Ligutan

Alexander Ligutan
Name: Vibrant Display of a Cherry Blossoms (Level 1)
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: Senbonzakura Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: N/A
Cooldown: 2
Duration: Instant
Effect: : At this level of the magic, Alex produce 20 Cherry Blossoms in his hands that attack the opponent. The petals travel to the opponent up to 5 meters and a width of 1 meter thick. And bruise light in every impact  of the petals. [while using this spell, the attack is looks like KAME HAME WAVE but the use is petals]


Name: Petal (Level 1)
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10, 5 SUSTAINED
Requirements: Senbonzakura Magic
Class: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Cooldown: 3
Duration: 1
Effect: In this spell, Alex turns in many petal and his speed goes up by 25% than normal speed (THE SPEED IS 10 m/s). But it's not so very fast so it can be catch up by the opponent


Name: Shikai (Level 1)
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: Senbonzakura Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: N/A
Cooldown: 2
Duration: Instant
Effect:: Upon release, 20 petals produced by Alex and shape as 2 apples that is height of 15 cm and 8 cm width that attack the opponent. It cause a little damage. It travels to the opponent in just 5 meters away and a bruise light upon impact.


Name: Petal Defense (Level 1)
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10, 5 SUSTAINED
Requirements: Senbonzakura Magic
Class: Defensive
Element: N/A
Cooldown: 3
Duration: 2
Effect: This spell can allowed Alex to form all of the Petals to a Ref shape that covers his body. This spell can destroyed by 2 D-Rank Spells or 1 C-Rank Spells. And it stands in last 2 post if not being destroyed


Name: Vibrant Display of a Cherry Blossoms (Level 2)
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 20
Requirements: Senbonzakura Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: N/A
Cooldown: 3
Duration: Instant
Effect:  At this level of the magic, Alex produce 30 Cherry Blossoms in his hands that attack the opponent. The petals travel to the opponent up to 10 meters and a 2 meters thick. And bruise light in every impact  of the petals. [while using this spell, the attack is looks like KAME HAME WAVE but the use is petals]
JUST LIKE THIS - just look at the pink one
Senbonzakura Magic Spells (Starters) 9k=



Last edited by Alexander Ligutan on Tue Aug 19, 2014 3:00 pm; edited 8 times in total

2Senbonzakura Magic Spells (Starters) Empty Re: Senbonzakura Magic Spells (Starters) Wed Jul 30, 2014 6:16 am

Alexander Ligutan

Alexander Ligutan
Finished Now!!

- Ready for Checking

3Senbonzakura Magic Spells (Starters) Empty Re: Senbonzakura Magic Spells (Starters) Tue Aug 05, 2014 12:18 am

Jabo Devine

Jabo Devine
Vibrant Display of a Cherry Blossoms (Level 1): Duration would be instant. Take out the word, 'can'. How big are the petals? Bring the distance down to 5 meters. By everywhere do you mean 5 meters in every direction starting from your hands? Or did you mean 5 meters in a linear pattern from your hands? Elaborate on that. Take out any mention of speed.  It would be collective damage, so it would take all 20 petals to hit for there to be significant damage. What are the dimensions of the petals?

Cherry Blossom's Scent: Specify a range for the scent. Honestly, it would be easier for you to just generate the scent from your hand instead of having to produce flowers for this spell. If you don't decide to do this, then elaborate on what the flowers actually do when they come out of your hands. Do they stay in your palm, travel a few feet and fall to the ground or spread over an area? Elaborate on what 'a little' damage is. You'd want to produce them from your hands not in them.

Shikai (Level 1): Again, the duration would be instant. Take out the word 'can' makes it seem as if you have control over how many flowers would be intially produced. You don't need to state how many petals are in each ball, but it isn't necessary to remove. Where are the petals produced? Can they be produced within 5 meters away or is it from your hands? State that it would take both balls to hit for them to cause bruises upon impact. What are the dimensions of the basketball shaped projectiles?

Petal Defense (Level 1): Add in a sustain cost. It can be destroyed by 2 D-Rank spells OR 1 C-Rank spell.

Vibrant Display of a Cherry Blossoms (Level 2):  Duration would be instant. Take out the word, 'can'. How big are the petals? By everywhere do you mean 10 meters in every direction starting from your hands? Or did you mean 10 meters in a linear pattern from your hands? Elaborate on that. Take out any mention of speed.  It would be collective damage, so it would take all 30 petals to hit for there to be significant damage. Bring the distance down to 5 meters. What are the dimensions of the petals?

4Senbonzakura Magic Spells (Starters) Empty Re: Senbonzakura Magic Spells (Starters) Fri Aug 08, 2014 6:09 am

Alexander Ligutan

Alexander Ligutan
BUMP


READY FOR CHECKING AGAIN. :)

5Senbonzakura Magic Spells (Starters) Empty Re: Senbonzakura Magic Spells (Starters) Fri Aug 15, 2014 8:44 pm

Alexander Ligutan

Alexander Ligutan
Can I bump twice? I dont know if this is Legal bcuz i've been waiting for a week there is no reply. come on!!

So BUMP PLS

6Senbonzakura Magic Spells (Starters) Empty Re: Senbonzakura Magic Spells (Starters) Fri Aug 15, 2014 9:34 pm

Ardere Kasai

Ardere Kasai
Since it's been a while, I'll take over.

-Still gotta give a size of the spell, like 5 m long and 1 meter thick.

-It cant heal and make an opponent fall asleep, you'd have to pick one. But a spell of that rank would make the opponent drowsy, or heal a D rank wound. So pick one of those. (Just scratch the 5% and substitute it with drowsiness, unless you go with healing)

-Again, how big is the ball?

-Approved.

-How thick is the formation of petal? Basically the same thing as before.

7Senbonzakura Magic Spells (Starters) Empty Re: Senbonzakura Magic Spells (Starters) Mon Aug 18, 2014 2:39 am

Alexander Ligutan

Alexander Ligutan
BUMP

8Senbonzakura Magic Spells (Starters) Empty Re: Senbonzakura Magic Spells (Starters) Mon Aug 18, 2014 3:57 am

Ardere Kasai

Ardere Kasai
-Approved

-Where did you get the 5% thing? I'm just curious? o.o

-So I guess these are apple sized, yeah?

-Approved

-Approved

9Senbonzakura Magic Spells (Starters) Empty Re: Senbonzakura Magic Spells (Starters) Mon Aug 18, 2014 4:12 am

Alexander Ligutan

Alexander Ligutan
BUMP


To the 5% - It's debuffing

10Senbonzakura Magic Spells (Starters) Empty Re: Senbonzakura Magic Spells (Starters) Mon Aug 18, 2014 12:59 pm

Ardere Kasai

Ardere Kasai
Making someone fall asleep isnt a debuff. You cant have debuffs that are D ranks anyways.

Check it at the second post to the bottom of this http://www.natsudragneel.com/t4-02-magic-rules

So I'd just suggest changing the spell entirely. Everything else is fine though.

11Senbonzakura Magic Spells (Starters) Empty Re: Senbonzakura Magic Spells (Starters) Tue Aug 19, 2014 2:35 am

Alexander Ligutan

Alexander Ligutan
Bump


I change it into PETAL

12Senbonzakura Magic Spells (Starters) Empty Re: Senbonzakura Magic Spells (Starters) Tue Aug 19, 2014 4:13 am

Ardere Kasai

Ardere Kasai
Those are the old debuff rules, the magic rules should have the new one where you run at like 10 m/s and can dash at 12 m/s. Recheck the link I might be wrong, but once you fix that I'll approve it, and we'll be done :D

13Senbonzakura Magic Spells (Starters) Empty Re: Senbonzakura Magic Spells (Starters) Tue Aug 19, 2014 4:52 am

Alexander Ligutan

Alexander Ligutan
Nope. It'd the right Link.

So What Now?

14Senbonzakura Magic Spells (Starters) Empty Re: Senbonzakura Magic Spells (Starters) Tue Aug 19, 2014 12:52 pm

Ardere Kasai

Ardere Kasai
No no xD It says right in the buffing rules: D rank: Run at 10 m/s. Dash at 12 m/s. Can only dash once.

15Senbonzakura Magic Spells (Starters) Empty Re: Senbonzakura Magic Spells (Starters) Tue Aug 19, 2014 3:00 pm

Alexander Ligutan

Alexander Ligutan
BUMP

16Senbonzakura Magic Spells (Starters) Empty Re: Senbonzakura Magic Spells (Starters) Tue Aug 19, 2014 3:34 pm

Ardere Kasai

Ardere Kasai
It doesnt require a percent, just the 10 m/s but screw it. Approved. I'm not gonna hold you up any longer, it's fine bro.

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