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1Hakai Mikoto Empty Hakai Mikoto Sat Jan 04, 2014 12:22 pm

Hakai Mikoto

Hakai Mikoto

      Hakai Mikoto 1705122-8-1378145844908
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       "Well... um... uh... WHAT AM I SUPPOSED TO SAY AGAIN??"
       

 

Name(s): Hakai Mikoto
Nickname(s): Six
Age: 16
Sex: Male
Birthday: January / 1 / X764
Sexuality: Straight!
Class: Mystic
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Rank: D
Guild: Eisenwald
Guild Tattoo: Just above the V- line
Face Claim: Rin Okumura - Ao No Exorcist

II. APPEARANCE

Height: 5'10
Weight: 176 lb
Hair: Blue
Eyes: Blue
General Appearance: Hakai has short ruffled black hair, and a slim body. He's quite average height and weight for his age, and is often called 'Handsome' by others. He wears a shirt, and a tie with slacks and regular sneakers often, or a black kilt, but other times he can be seen in a nice buttoned shirt, and jeans, or T-shirt and jeans. He also wears sandals from time to time but when it starts getting colder, he often wears combat boots, or snow boots, even thick sneakers. His style can be defined as "The usual" or "Regular" meaning his style isn't really unique or different.
Extra: Hakai has a tail and pointy ears, a long with unusually pointed fangs (for a human) nobody knows why...for now


III. PERSONALITY

Personality:
Hakai, Hakai, Hakai. This young man is a very lazy person who would disagree on any activity that includes walking, running, jumping, or even moving. He only does what he is basically forced to do, or what he wants to do. Hakai wouldn't even mind sleeping for a whole day or two. He is stubborn, hotheaded, and does things his own way. He usually refuses to listen to other people, and only wants to 'follow the wind.' He is a very independent person always trying to have everyone rely on him, and due to that part of his personality he often tries extra hard to never fail. Quiet is not the option for him, he always has something to say and he always has to have the last word, and a trait like that can get him in a lot of trouble if he doesn't learn to control it.

Other than some of his bad traits, Hakai very carefree, but a surprisingly caring person as well. Hakai hates when people close to him doubt themselves or others, so he often encourages and helps the people that are deemed important to him. Hakai loves seeing the ones he care about the most, in a good mood. Hakai is a very outgoing and funny guy, who doesn't have a problem with just sitting around and making jokes or killing a random person, he loves to chill and loves a good time, and that is why he's known as "The Party Animal", in his guild.  Although Hakai has been through a lot, he does not bring it out on anybody and isn't one to take anger out on his friends.

Likes:


  • Money


  • Fighting


  • Dragons/Reptiles


  • Cake


   Dislikes:


  • Bugs


  • Vegetables


  • Feet


  • Magic Council


Motivations:
Hakai wants to be noticed. He doesn't want anyone to ignore him, or disrespect him ever again, for everyone to respect him whether it be fair or love. He wants the world to see him for him no matter the consequence, if it means destroying the world, and forcefully conquering it, that is what he will do, there is no end to his thirst to become the almighty, and the greatest there is. He will stop at nothing to get his wish. He hates being deemed by others, he despises not getting the respect he deserves, so insetad of him fitting in, he'd rather everyone fit his needs.

Fears:

  • Dying: It's an obvious fear, nobody wants to die, and if Hakai dies then his wish to become the all powerful dies too. Dieing is not an option in Hakai's mind. He can't and he won;t die. He will do everything in his power to stay alive, even if that means sacrificing others for the sake of his own life.


  • Bugs/Rodents: Bugs, roaches, rodents, little animals with ugly faces or bugs that are slimy and make weird noises are disgusting, please do not bring them anywhere near Hakai, he will either scream at the top of his lungs, or demolish you, and the dirty creature that you scared him with.


Positive Traits:

  • Daunting Presence (+2): You are skilled at inducing fear in your opponents.


  • Zealot (+4): This person has trained themselves to wield a specific type of weapon. This weapon can be mentioned behind the Zealot feat within brackets to claim it upon approval : Sword


  • Stealthy (+3): You are particularly good at avoiding notice. You could be sitting somewhere in a thread at a bar and people wouldn't even notice that you were there.


Negative Traits:

  • Arrogant (-1): You firmly believe that you are better than anyone else is. Your ideas are the best, your clothes are the most stylish, and you have to let everyone else know how much better you are. Once in a while you openly show contempt or disdain for someone else.


  • Derangement/Insanity (-3): Due to circumstances beyond your control, you are permanently insane. You may have a congenital brain disorder, or perhaps you saw something mortals were never intended to lay eyes upon, and it drove you mad.
    Choose a Derangement/Insanity for your character from the lists below. Though the list is by no means exhaustive, the following options are ones that have been presented in game terms and that have definable--and most times numerical--penalties.
    Bipolar Mood Disorder: The character oscillates between the mood states mentioned above, sometimes staying in one mood for weeks at a time, sometimes rapidly switching from one to another. Also known as manic depressive.


  • Short Attention Span (-1): You have little patience, causing you to have difficulty concentrating on repetitive tasks.


  • Reckless (-1): You lack the emotion of fear. Unfortunately, it is often an important cue that keeps men from doing foolhardy things. Sure, you don't flinch at the sight of even the most hideous monster, but neither do you feel the need to run away when outclassed.


  • Branded (-2): You have fled for a crime committed and now have a prominent brand. You may have been a criminal, a slave, or some other such illicit individual. The brand is such that it cannot be easily covered, and a cursory search reveals it each time. Law enforcement agents of any lawful land will immediately take you into custody if they see the mark, for extradition or imprisonment. It is your choice as to whether or not you were falsely accused of the crime.


  • Amnesia (-1): You are unable to remember anything about your past, yourself, or your family. Your life is a blank slate. However, your past may someday come back to haunt you.
    The rest of the flaws you pick are unknown to your character; over the course of your progress, your character will slowly discover them


IV. MAGIC

Magic: Unholy : Demonic Darkness
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description:
Demonic Darkness is a magic that originates from hell, yes, I said it. The user utilizes Bergandy, Black, green, purple, or blue colored Dark energy, in Hakai's case it's blue Darkness, that often gets mistaken as "Blue Fire" that can be generated from his/her body. The user has to be related to Satan, or a Demon Lord somewhere down the line, it is the only way to inherit this magic. The Demonic Darkness can be used to heal, or be used to attack with, and it is cold upon contact. Along with that, the Demonic Darkness (if strong enough) can engulf enemies, thus freezing them, or (if strong enough) give enemies frost bites by decreasing the temperatures in the dark energy.
Strengths:
Hakai can use this magic anywhere since it does not need oxygen, along with that, this magic is caster, meaning that it comes from the user, and the user doesn't need any specific tool to aid him when in need to use his magic. This magic also does not affect Hakai, and only affects those that he sees as "Enemies". This magic can give opponents frost bites, or freeze upon contact, rendering opponents useless.
Weaknesses:
Dark/Lich Dragon slayer is a weakness to this magic, due to it being a from of Darkness magic, Fire Dragon Slayers can eat it, rendering the spells useless. Another weakness is the element Light. Light magic can overpower Hakai's spells, but as it stands, it can be the other way around. Hakai in terms of Defense spells will have a hard time, considering this magic is very offensive.  


V. HISTORY

History:
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Last edited by Hakai Mikoto on Sun Jan 05, 2014 4:58 pm; edited 14 times in total

2Hakai Mikoto Empty Re: Hakai Mikoto Sat Jan 04, 2014 12:49 pm

Kazuki Kobayashi

Kazuki Kobayashi
Alright Hakai, I'll be looking over your app. Let's get started:

GENERAL APP

You need to add a year for your birthdate.

There seems to be some formatting issue for your General Appearance. it's shifted to the left and out of alignment with the rest of the app. Fix that please.

Remove the list formating from the Extra under the General Appearance. Also this is out of alignment as well.

There's a formatting error under Personality as well, where the text is shifted to the left. This seems to be the trend all the way down, through your weaknesses. Please fix!

Please put a space between Likes and your first listed Like, as well as your Dislikes so that it looks like this:

Likes:

AWESOME STUFF!

As opposed to:

Likes:
AWESOME STUFF!

Remove the winky face from cake!

Your Magic:

Fire Dragon Slayers can eat all fire EXCEPT God Slayer fire. It seems that this is supposed to be a type of dual element magic. For a starter, please pick one or the other: Either it freezes or it burns.

Make these corrections, and bump when done!

3Hakai Mikoto Empty Re: Hakai Mikoto Sat Jan 04, 2014 1:32 pm

Hakai Mikoto

Hakai Mikoto
BUMP

4Hakai Mikoto Empty Re: Hakai Mikoto Sat Jan 04, 2014 1:38 pm

Kazuki Kobayashi

Kazuki Kobayashi
Under fears, put a space before the list starts.

Fears:

ALL THE THINGS!

Bump when done!

5Hakai Mikoto Empty Re: Hakai Mikoto Sat Jan 04, 2014 1:56 pm

Hakai Mikoto

Hakai Mikoto
DONE

BUMP!

6Hakai Mikoto Empty Re: Hakai Mikoto Sat Jan 04, 2014 2:09 pm

Kazuki Kobayashi

Kazuki Kobayashi
Alright, everything looks to be in order now! Placing this forward for Admin approval!

7Hakai Mikoto Empty Re: Hakai Mikoto Sat Jan 04, 2014 3:14 pm

Sayuri

Sayuri
Hello, Hakai.


  • Fears: Change 'dieing' into to 'dying'.
  • "This magic takes a bit more concentration then other magics, thus being weaker if the user is not 100% focused." Leave out this part, this is way too easy. Think of a good weakness.

8Hakai Mikoto Empty Re: Hakai Mikoto Sat Jan 04, 2014 7:30 pm

Hakai Mikoto

Hakai Mikoto
Bump

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