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1Kain Tatsuke Empty Kain Tatsuke Tue Dec 31, 2013 6:34 am

Kain Tatsuke



   (Kain Tatsuke Kain_zps6cdad2db)
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   "A Person who deserves my loyalty receives It"
   

Name(s): Kain Tatsuke
Nickname(s): The Mysterious Scholar
Age: 16
Sex: Male
Birthday: 28 August X764
Sexuality: Straight
Class: Scavenger
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Rank: D
Guild: Blue Pegasus
Guild Tattoo: Located near the heart
Face Claim: Ciel Phantomhive- The Black Butler

II. APPEARANCE

Height: 5'6 Feet
Weight: 67 Kilogram
Hair: Kain has a short styled hair that reaches to his ears and kinda has a bit of messy edge touch to his hair to looks kinda evil to everyone. He often keep his hair unkempt like that  as he feel more easier and suit his style rather than he has to comb it up like a nerdy although he is kinda nerdy with all the book he carried around with him.
Eyes: Kain has a slightly big hazel brown mixture with with a shade of green eyes that can make any kind of girls in their adolescent stages melt to their heart. It looks very innocent and heart warming to those who sees it. His looks can give anyone the warmth feeling of spring but beware these two innocent eyes can be decent enough to be deadly.
General Appearance: Kain has the average height of a 16 years old teenage boys so he wouldn't be considered tall nor short. He has more of a lean body structure and appears visually not to have much muscle. Although, he does. Kain has this type of body that would make any kind of girl to fall for. He prefer to wear darker color such as the black robe that he always wore. He not a fan into fashion that much and has quite an eccentric taste in fashion as everyone who sees him would be afraid of his dark-ish clothes and he is very noticeable in a large crowd. He likes his clothes not too be heavy as he probably need some space in moving  around especially in combat apart from his black robe.
Extra: Often seeing wearing dark-ish clothing theme and wearing black robe or coat with books in the pocket apart from having an eye patch on his left eye.

III. PERSONALITY

Personality:  Kain can be a quiet young man who is quite shy and bit mysterious to some people. As shy as he is, Kain rarely talk to anyone but he is surely trying to and slowly but surely, he is becoming more and more a open toward other kind of people. Kain is not a type of guy who would flip off again something so small, unlike any others, Kain always keep his cool and tries to solve the problem calmly and rationally, though it may not turn out as he wants it, eventually but he will solve the problems. He tries to stay out of people's business as to focus on his own life ahead of him even though most of the time he always ended up helping them anyway as deep inside him, he still have a sense of justice and kindness although he is less likely to shown those traits especially in front of other people as he do not wanna be considered weak by them.

Most of the time, Kain likes to be alone as he more to a intellectual type of guy instead of the athletic one. He likes to study and do research about something unnatural as he finds that is very amusing. Kain also likes to keep a journal of himself as his hobbies about his studying and experiences as he find that the journal could be useful for others in the near future. He also can spent hours and hours of reading in his room alone and writing journal. Kain passion for knowledge and books surpasses all that he always carried around his little handbook and books everywhere he goes up to some point even in combat.
Likes:

  • Tea- There is nothing Kain loves more than having a cup of tea while watching the great view of sunset over the horizon on the evening


  • Animals- Kain has always been a animal lover since he was a kid. His lack of social with other people has made him quite a friend to other animals


  • Books- Kain always love books since he was kid. Growing up with them and studying them as become a part of Kain somehow.


  • Night- Kai loves the atmosphere he feels at night with a blanket of stars all over him in the horizon as he can see.

Dislikes:

  • Crowd- Kain is not into a place where the place is crowded as he finds that is really irritating, maybe for him it is just because he did not used to it but he really just really hate it.


  • Betrayal- For Kain the act of betrayal is the worse thing that can happen as he experiences that a lot during his past. For Kai once you have done it you will truly become a man that is nothing but a demon.


  • Bully- Kain just hate it to see when people got bullied especially when a stronger one bullied the weak one. For Kai that is a coward move that can be done by such people.


  • Weak People- Kai just does not like to see weak people as he feels that people should be stronger to protect the one they loves.

Motivations:

  • Become Stronger- There is no other goal than to become stronger than he is now so that he can protect his friends although in most cases he is the type who would deny his loves for his friends and never will admit it when actually he do.


  • Knowledge- The world is vast and full of many ancient magical knowledge that he want to discover as he is so passionate to read books and uncover many secrets and untold mysteries to this world.


  • Solving His Past- When he was a kid, Kain has experienced a lot of bad past that he sometimes wishes that he should just forget about it and try to live to the fullest but he also wanna to solve it. The feeling of wanted to know about the truth to his past.

Fears:

  • Losing Friends- Kain maybe a loner and always end up alone but deep in his heart there is slight happiness that he felt when he is beside a company of his friends although that there is no chance that he will admit it, he just do not wanna lose them.


  • Clown- If there is one thing that is scarier than monsters for Kain that is clowns as he finds that clowns is very frightening and irritating. He always have this creeps feeling whenever clowns is near him that he shivers.

Positive Traits:

  • Animal Affinity (+2): You are good with animals.


  • Swift (+3): You are fleet of foot. When running, you move three times your normal speed.


  • Daunting Presence (+2): You are skilled at inducing fear in your opponents.


  • Alertness (+2): You have finely tuned senses.


  • Stealthy (+3): You are particularly good at avoiding notice. You could be sitting somewhere in a thread at a bar and people wouldn't even notice that you were there.


  • Breath Control (+3): You enjoy an almost legendary ability to master the air in your lungs. You may hold in your breath for multiple posts.


  • Diligent (+2): Your meticulousness allows you to analyze minute details that others miss.


Negative Traits:

  • Shy (-1): You are distinctly ill at ease when dealing with people, and you try to avoid social situations whenever possible. When you become the center of attention you freeze. Don't expect to make any public speeches.


  • Disfigurement (-2): A hideous disfigurement makes you ugly and easy to notice—-and easy to remember. Whatever your particular choice of disfigurement, it has to be something blatantly obvious to a casual glance. In addition, as it is a birth deformity, it cannot be healed, though you could employ magics to cover it via illusions in some instances, and perhaps utilize high level magics to transform yourself into a more pleasing form for the duration, though you'll always have the lingering fear of it being dispelled.


  • Phobia:Spider (-3): A character afflicted by a phobia persistently fears a particular object or situation. She realizes that the fear is excessive and irrational, but the fear is disturbing enough that she avoids the stimulus. Kain have an phobia of spiders whenever this creatures are around him he can feel a bit disturbed and odd. Kain first got his phobia when he was little where his little brothers used to put prank on him that one time they had put spiders on his bed where he was asleep. Since then, he has hate spiders and got a phobia of them.


  • Dark Secret:Cursed Eye (-1): You have some sort of secret that, if revealed, would make you an outcast amongst your society and companions. While this secret is on your mind at all times, it will come up in topics only once in a while, but when it does, watch out! Kain have a dark cursed left eye that he always covered with an eye patch. He never wanted anyone to discover this condition of his and always afraid of it that someone might. Kain does not know how he got them but he surely knows that he got them that night. The night where his family was murdered. Kain sometimes feel a twitching at his left eye but he nwvwe now yet what is the eye for.


  • Compulsive Honesty (-2): You cannot tell a lie, nor can you behave in a deceitful fashion. You tend to be blunt rather than tactful, even if it means insulting someone who you and your companions are trying to impress.


  • Bad Reputation (-1): You have a reputation that angers or frightens people. Examples include being unlucky, petty, or cruel. The rep may or may not be accurate, but in either case, word travels faster than you do.


  • Aloof (-1): Your manner is cold and unapproachable, distancing you from friends and strangers alike. Your preternatural intelligence lends itself to viewing others as slow-witted and a waste of your precious time. Your charisma is lowered.


  • Cautious (-1): You are uneasy engaging in behavior that carries a chance of failure. You must spend twice as long performing any skill that requires an action. For example, deciphering a page of text would take 2 minutes for you instead of 1.


  • Merciful (-1): For a villain, you have a terrible weakness--you don't like to hurt people. Given the choice, you'd rather exile your deposed brother to another country than do him in. Whether this is because you want him to live knowing that you beat him, or whether you just have a small soft spot down in your heart somewhere, the result is the same: your enemies keep coming back again and again.


  • Ambitious (-1): You crave power. Money is nice, but being in charge of other people is your favorite thing. You are likely to be brought down by attempting a risky grab for power and failing. Even when deals are risky you will give in and agree most of times.


  • Bipolar Mood Disorder (-3): The character oscillates between the mood states mentioned above, sometimes staying in one mood for weeks at a time, sometimes rapidly switching from one to another. Also known as manic depressive.


IV. MAGIC

Magic: Mist Magic
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: He can emit mist from every part of his body, and this mist can again take shape of everything that he can imagine, he can use the mist to create  cover from enemies or even use it as for offensive instead by conjuring the mist into animated things like wolf or even sword itself. Unlike other air based magic this magic does not focus much healing abilities. The user can also change their bodily part to the same as the mist and manipulating the element to their will.
Strengths:
This magic is a free will magic that balance between support,defense and offensive as it got many use able technique to suit its user style and very versatile. It is a magic which allow the user to change their bodily part like hands to attack the enemies and even manipulating the mist itself. It also can be use as support to cover the battlefield and sight of the enemies.
Weaknesses:
As  it says the biggest counterpart for mist is air itself. The  mist magic is kinda have biggest rivalry against any other air based magic as air magic can cancel mist out with their air based spells and disperse the mist with ease. Other than that, mist can also be easily disperse by the use of water when it is raining. Mist may not be as destructive as other magic such as fire or wind as it more to support as well and not just offensive.

V. HISTORY

History:
Raised in a noble family of Smith as Kai Smith. He lives with his two brothers alongside his parent.Having no friends like any other kids, he likes to spent most of his time reading books  in the big old mansion with his father working as one of the town most famous mage. Kai's family was the richest in the town, getting known and respected by the townspeople. Everything was fine until that day.

Kai was asleep when that happened, when suddenly something woke him up from his sleep. It was a bickering noise. Kai's other two brothers were still asleep when that happened. He got up from his bed and went to see what going on outside of his house but what he saw was dark mages raiding his house. The dark mages begun putting fire into his house. Kai felt dangerous is coming into their ways and tried to wake his brother up but before he could do so he heard footsteps coming into the direction of his room. Afraid of his live, he go on and hid in the nearest closet while peeking a little through it.He saw two dark mages approaching toward his brothers. For that moment he felt very afraid for the first time that he cannot move. The dark mages tried to hold captives of his brothers but his brothers resisted which lead to their apparent death. Kai sees his two brothers got killed in front of his own eyes without being able to do anything about it.

Kai felt very afraid that tears started running in his eyes. The pirates keep on checking the room noticing that there is 3 beds in the room, "There is three bed here,so wheres the damn another kid?" said one of the dark mages.
"Dunno maybe...." reply the other dark mages whispering something into his friend. They the walked on slowly to the closet while shouting "Hey there little boy where are you??? heheh" said the dark mages in sarcastic manner possible while casting fire spells and started to burn the room all around. Then suddenly, "Arrrghhhh" shouted the dark mages at the closet next to the closet he is in. "Huuh??" ,Then the pirates started to check on each closet until it comes to the one Kai was in. The dark mages was about to open the door when suddenly Kai heard a cry for help, "Heeeey guys,come here for the best part" shouted the dark mages with a happy tone. The dark mages then slowly walked away from the room leaving Kai feeling relieved but still quite scared. "Let go of me!!!", Somehow Kai can heard his parent's voice resisting the pirates, he ran down stairs to help his parent but saw that no one was there except his parent.

Kai tried to untie the rope they use to keep his parent because there is one there when he came. Suddenly, "HAHAAHAH,One little Tiny Hero go for a rescue AHAHAHA,That ticks me everytime" said one of the dark mages which supposedly to be the dark mages' boss. The dark mage boss ordered his minion to held Kai together and then after torturing his parent endlessly in front of him with many kind of dark spell, he kill both of them with a very strong spell. The last word that came from his parent was, "Run away my child, Live, We Love You" with a very subtle smile on their face before they are dead. With his parent death, Kai become enraged and lose from the dark mages that try to held him, he charged toward to the dark mages boss  before "Baaaang" a shot of light from behind directly into his back and he fall to the ground. Before he completely lose himself, he could hear and see a bit, "HAHAH,you gotta be careful next time you know Wicked Jager" said this shady character "HAAHA, Thanks for the help Takashi or should i said Mage Takeshi HAHAHA......." said the dark mages boss before he completely lose  himself.

The next three days in the morning he woke up in a hospital with his wound being bandaged. He finds out that he had being asleep for straight three days and cannot remember anything about that night. He has been rescued and brought here to the hospital by the townspeople after they  found him under the rubble in the morning after the fire had gone down. They said that they could not found his family as like they just vanished in the fire. Kai was at first a bit confused but sometimes later after a  night in his room where he look at a candle he  begin to remember everything about the night,about his family massacre.

Kai has thought that he had seen that face before and heard that name before, the name Mage Takeshi lingered around his head as he keep thinking about it. Kai then began forcing through his way on his father files and document that had been partially burned and found the name. Mage Takeshi was his father best friend when he father was a mage. Kai felt furious as like he was betrayed and swore that he will find the man. Kai do not know why but but he will find it. After he recovered from his wounds, Kai decided to venture to find the man while hiding himself as the man thought that he had died after been left in the fire. Kai do not know why he still survived but there must be a reason behind this. Kai eventually started to going from town to town and even changed his identity to hide himself from the world. Kai even tried get rid off his past by changing his name to Kain Tatsuke and  started to learn magic.



Last edited by Kain Tatsuke on Mon Jan 06, 2014 7:33 am; edited 7 times in total

2Kain Tatsuke Empty Re: Kain Tatsuke Tue Dec 31, 2013 11:23 am

Kain Tatsuke


BUMP finished maybe lol

3Kain Tatsuke Empty Re: Kain Tatsuke Thu Jan 02, 2014 11:24 am

Sayuri

Sayuri
Hello, Kain.


  • You find the alignments here: https://fairytailrequiem.rpg-board.net/t227-08-alignments
  • Please fill in your general appearance, you can add the description about the hair and eyes within the general description of the appearance.
  • Use the list code to fill in the Positive and Negative Traits. Also add the description of the trait.
  • Magic: Leave out the part "create mirages, illusions", elemental magics are based on manipulating an element to their will or changing bodily parts into that of their element.

4Kain Tatsuke Empty Re: Kain Tatsuke Fri Jan 03, 2014 2:13 am

Kain Tatsuke


BUMP fixed

5Kain Tatsuke Empty Re: Kain Tatsuke Fri Jan 03, 2014 6:15 am

Alyssa Strauss

Alyssa Strauss
Hello Kain,

So I still see a few problems with your application before it goes to the administrators for approval. The most prominent one being that the amount of points spent in your negative traits are not in balance with the amount of points spent in your positive traits. Right now, you have 17 points in Negative Traits and 15 points in Positive Traits. In addition to that, you probably want to include that Phobia and Bipolar Disorder falls under the category of Derangement/Insanity and is indeed a (-3) trait. The second and last thing I would like to ask you to do is to include what your character's phobia and dark secret is. Other than those two main points, just a few grammatical issues here and there. Do your best to edit them and make sure that the tenses agree with one another. For example, do not switch between past and present as you did in your likes section. In addition to that, avoid run on sentence by adding punctuation. It makes it a lot easier for readers to understand.

After you have fixed these, contact me through chatbox, PM, or skype and I will review it once again.

Yours,

Alyssa

6Kain Tatsuke Empty Re: Kain Tatsuke Sat Jan 04, 2014 7:27 am

Kain Tatsuke


SECOND BUMP

7Kain Tatsuke Empty Re: Kain Tatsuke Sat Jan 04, 2014 9:56 am

Alyssa Strauss

Alyssa Strauss
Hello Kain,

There are still some edits that need to be made. These edits involve elaborating on your phobia/dark secret. How did your character acquire them and how does it affect your character?

When you're done, bump again!

Yours,

Alyssa

8Kain Tatsuke Empty Re: Kain Tatsuke Sat Jan 04, 2014 11:00 pm

Kain Tatsuke


BUMP AGAIN

9Kain Tatsuke Empty Re: Kain Tatsuke Sun Jan 05, 2014 5:44 am

Alyssa Strauss

Alyssa Strauss
Hello Kain,

Sabertooth hasn't been opened yet. You are presented with two options, you may either wait until Sabertooth does become open or you may choose a guild that is currently open.

Yours,

Alyssa

10Kain Tatsuke Empty Re: Kain Tatsuke Mon Jan 06, 2014 7:42 am

Kain Tatsuke


BUMP

11Kain Tatsuke Empty Re: Kain Tatsuke Mon Jan 06, 2014 8:24 am

Alyssa Strauss

Alyssa Strauss
Hey Kain,

I deem this application, approved. Congratulations and well done.

Yours,

Alyssa

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