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1Ice Make: 3x C-Spells (Instant) Empty Ice Make: 3x C-Spells (Instant) Tue Dec 09, 2014 9:40 pm

Sammey White

Sammey White
Name: Ice Clone
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 20 Mp
Requirements: Ice Make
Class: Offensive
Element: Ice
Cooldown: 4 post
Duration: 5 post 
Effect: The user creates a copy of themselves made out of ice. This spell can be used to avoid attacks or to create a distraction for a surprise attack. The clone can be destroyed by 1 B-rank and up spell, 2 C-rank spells, or 4 D-rank spells.

Name: Ice Roses
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 20 Mp
Requirements: Ice make
Class: Offensive
Element: Ice
Cooldown: 3 post
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user creates giant roses and spiked branches, made out of ice, that surround the target and attack them with thorns doing C-rank damage. The roses are 3x3 and the spiked branches come out to 1 feet long. The vines are 3 feet all around when at full use it is about the size of a full size van.

Name: Ice floor
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 20 Mp
Requirements: Ice Make
Class: Supplementary
Element: Ice
Cooldown: 4 post
Duration: 2 post
Effect: A spell in which the user slams a hand on the floor, creating a slippery 2 in's layer of ice over the floor. The user can also freeze the surfaces of bodies of water with this spell and slide on the resultant floor.



Last edited by Sammey White on Wed Dec 10, 2014 1:32 pm; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : Fixing :3)

2Ice Make: 3x C-Spells (Instant) Empty Re: Ice Make: 3x C-Spells (Instant) Wed Dec 10, 2014 12:28 pm

Elizabeth Silvershield

Elizabeth Silvershield
Ice Clone:

- If this is a sustained spell, it would take 20 MP. Nothing else.
- Please state that the spell lasts 5 posts.
- Please remove the sentence in which you state that your clone can use spells of your rank. Your clone would be able to deal C Ranked damage.
- State the amount of hits your clone can take before getting destroyed.
- State that the clone is a clone of yourself.
- Please make it an offensive spell, not an ''offensive, deffensive and supplementary'' one. As stated below, multipurpose spells are not allowed.

Ice Roses:

- Please state the size of the roses and everything else. Don't foget to state the overall size.
- Please remove the sentence in which you state that it can bind an enemy. That would make it a multipurpose spell, as it would combine damage and binding, which is not allowed.
- State that it deals C Ranked damage.

Unnamed Spell:

- Your spell doesn't have a name. Please correct that.
- More than it being an offensive, deffensive and supplementary spell, it is a supplementary spell. Besides, as mentioned above, multipurpose spells are not allowed.
-Please state the thickness of the layer of ice.
- If you make this spell instant, then the ground will freeze just for a few seconds, then dissapear again. Please state a duration if you want it to last more.
- Please remove the part in which you can freeze the legs of people. That would be a speed debuff, so please remove that.

Bump when corrected.

3Ice Make: 3x C-Spells (Instant) Empty Re: Ice Make: 3x C-Spells (Instant) Wed Dec 10, 2014 1:21 pm

Sammey White

Sammey White
ok i fixed tham...maybe :3

4Ice Make: 3x C-Spells (Instant) Empty Re: Ice Make: 3x C-Spells (Instant) Wed Dec 10, 2014 1:29 pm

Elizabeth Silvershield

Elizabeth Silvershield
Decrease the overall size in the Ice Roses spell and you'll be good to go.

5Ice Make: 3x C-Spells (Instant) Empty Re: Ice Make: 3x C-Spells (Instant) Wed Dec 10, 2014 1:32 pm

Sammey White

Sammey White
OK is a full size van ok? :3

6Ice Make: 3x C-Spells (Instant) Empty Re: Ice Make: 3x C-Spells (Instant) Wed Dec 10, 2014 1:36 pm

Elizabeth Silvershield

Elizabeth Silvershield
Approved.

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