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1[B-1] Shadow Dragon Starter Spells Empty [B-1] Shadow Dragon Starter Spells Wed Oct 29, 2014 8:43 am

Peter Endless

Peter Endless
Shadow Pull:
Name: Shadow Pull
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10 MP
Requirements: None
Class: Supplementary
Element: Shadow
Cooldown: 1 post
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user creates a "soft" shadow in the shape of hand that can travel over distances (5 meters) to retrieve targets and bring them back to the user. The size of the hand depends on the size of the object. If it was a small box then the hand is just big enough to engulf it. The spell can only retrieve objects or living organisms that are 7 ft. x 7 ft. x 7 ft. or smaller.

Shadow Dragon’s Slash:
Name: Shadow Dragon’s Slash
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10 MP
Requirements: None
Class: Offensive
Element: Shadow
Cooldown: 2 post
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user covers his arm in shadows then punches their target. Thin wisps of shadow (4 in total) can also divide from the arm to strike at the enemy if left uninterrupted, though they can be batted away like swatting at smoke or mist. The tendrils of shadow at their maximum range, if the target moves back to dodge, is 3 meters. The spell deals light bruises upon impact.

Shadow Dragon’s Crushing Fang:
Name: Shadow Dragon’s Crushing Fang
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10 MP
Requirements: None
Class: Offensive
Element: Shadow
Cooldown: 2 post
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user covers his hand in shadows then launches a shadow that takes form in  dragon’s head with 4 fangs (two at top and two at bottom) at his target and engulfs them, leaving light bruises across their body as if they were chewed up. Its maximum range is 5 meters and can be stopped by D-Rank or higher spells.

Shadow Dragon’s Eruption:
Name: Shadow Dragon’s Eruption
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10 MP
Requirements: None
Class: Offensive
Element: Shadow
Cooldown: 2 post
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user gathers energy in the palm of his hand then launches a shadow sphere at the target’s feet, imploding in itself to create a geyser which throws the target up in the air by 3 to 5 feet. The damage done to the body are light bruises. Its maximum range is 5 meters and can be stopped by D-Rank or higher spells.

Shadow Dragon’s Scales:
Name: Shadow Dragon’s Scales
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 20 MP
Requirements: None
Class: Offensive
Element: Shadow
Cooldown: 2 post
Duration: Instant
Effect: This spell is cast from the user’s hand, gathering energy at the palm of his hand then letting out a torrent of shadow spheres (6 in total) at the target. Each sphere is about the size of a baseball ball with a circumference of nine and a half inches and three inches in diameter. Their maximum range is 5 meters and upon contact, they deal deep bruises. They can be stopped by C-Rank or higher spells.



Last edited by Peter Endless on Wed Oct 29, 2014 11:37 pm; edited 2 times in total

2[B-1] Shadow Dragon Starter Spells Empty Re: [B-1] Shadow Dragon Starter Spells Wed Oct 29, 2014 9:56 am

Kazuki Kobayashi

Kazuki Kobayashi
Hello, I'll be grading your spells!

Shadow Form: This is too powerful to be a D Rank spell, and will have to be remade at S Rank.

Shadow Pull: Approved.

Shadow Bind: All spells have a set duration, there is no until dismissed. Please see the magic rules. Since this counts as a speed debuff, please see the debuffing section for amount, and duration. Also state that this can be broken by a D Rank spell or higher.

Shadow Dragon's Claw: Remove the speed from this. State how many wisps this produces.

Shadow Dragon's Scales: Remove the speed from this. State how many their are. State that these can be stopped by a C Rank or higher.

Bump when edited.

3[B-1] Shadow Dragon Starter Spells Empty Re: [B-1] Shadow Dragon Starter Spells Wed Oct 29, 2014 12:02 pm

Peter Endless

Peter Endless
Shadow Form: Replaced with "Shadow Dragon's Crushing Fang."

Shadow Pull: Approved.

Shadow Bind: Replaced with "Shadow Dragon's Eruption."

Shadow Dragon's Claw: This is actually "Slash" and not "Claw," but I've removed the speed and specified that there are now 4 wisps.

Shadow Dragon's Scales: As requested, I have removed the speed and stated that there are a total of 6 shadow spheres. I have also added in that it can be blocked or destroyed by C-Rank or higher spells.

Anyways, bump.

4[B-1] Shadow Dragon Starter Spells Empty Re: [B-1] Shadow Dragon Starter Spells Wed Oct 29, 2014 10:58 pm

Kazuki Kobayashi

Kazuki Kobayashi
Shadow Dragon’s Crushing Fang: D Rank spells can stop a D Rank attack. Change this please.

Shadow Dragon’s Eruption: D Rank spells can stop this still, if spells were to clash. Please change this.

Bump when edited! (Sorry for confusing your Slash)

5[B-1] Shadow Dragon Starter Spells Empty Re: [B-1] Shadow Dragon Starter Spells Wed Oct 29, 2014 11:38 pm

Peter Endless

Peter Endless
No problem. Edited.

6[B-1] Shadow Dragon Starter Spells Empty Re: [B-1] Shadow Dragon Starter Spells Thu Oct 30, 2014 12:40 am

Kazuki Kobayashi

Kazuki Kobayashi
Approved. Go blow shit up!

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