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1Akira Sendo Empty Akira Sendo Mon Jul 07, 2014 1:50 pm

Akira Sendo

Akira Sendo

   Akira Sendo 2h5tdlx
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   "Like any weak flame, your life can be extinguished. Prepare to Burn!"
   

Name(s): Akira Sendo
Nickname(s): Kira - The Burning Maiden
Age: 17
Sex: Female
Birthday: 18/September/763
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Class: Mystic
Alignment: Lawful Evil
Rank: D
Guild: Phantom Lord Guild
Guild Tattoo: Her left cheek bone.
Face Claim: Celestia Ludenberg - Danganronpa

II. APPEARANCE

Height: 5' 9"
Weight: 138lbs
Hair: Black
Eyes: Red
General Appearance:
Appearance:
Extra: -

III. PERSONALITY

Personality:
Personality:
Likes:

  • Fire
  • Power
  • Resolve
  • Knowledge
  • Maturity

Dislikes:

  • Water
  • Weakness
  • Immaturity
  • Stupidity

Motivations: The need for Power and Purpose in life.
Fears:

  • Bugs
  • Water(She can't swim/She works with Fire)

Positive Traits:

  • Acrobatic (+3): You have excellent body awareness and coordination.
  • Agile (+3): You are particularly flexible and poised.
  • High Society (+2): You know good manners and were trained to handle social interactions in noble circles. This is useful in requests involving members of the highest levels of society, such as monarchs, nobles, courtiers, lords and ladies, and high-ranking clerics.
  • Daunting Presence (+2): You are skilled at inducing fear in your opponents.

Negative Traits:


  • Overconfident (-1): Nothing is beyond your capabilities. If you wanted, you could defeat the best swordsman in the world; you just haven't had any reason to do so yet. And surely that chasm isn't too wide for you to leap across.
  • Arrogant (-1): You firmly believe that you are better than anyone else is. Your ideas are the best, your clothes are the most stylish, and you have to let everyone else know how much better you are. Once in a while you openly show contempt or disdain for someone else.
  • Cruel (-1): You have a sadistic streak that causes you to perform acts of cruelty for no good reason. Of course, this doesn't endear you to others. Most times you are prudent enough to carry out your cruelties on those under your thumb, rather than those you see as equals. However, you carry a constant social stigma, as rumors have their way of getting around.
  • Curiosity (-1): You're a naturally curious person and you find mysteries of any sort irresistible. In most circumstances, alas, your curiosity overrides your common sense. This forces you to investigate something unusual, even if it looks like it might be dangerous.
  • Dependent (-3): You have a ward or charge that depends on you, usually a young child or elderly relative that needs you to provide for them and devote at least part of your time to them. In money terms, this will cost you five percent of your jewels a month. You may also be required to stay near home often in case you are needed.(Her nephew has lost his family in a village raid. She provides for him as if he were her brother)
  • Intolerance (-1): You have an irrational dislike of a certain thing. It may be an animal, a class of person, a situation, or just about anything at all. Note that some dislikes may be too trivial or ridiculous to count--a dislike of Bavarian-crème-filled donuts or mechanical pencils, for example, has no real dramatic value and will not be allowed.(She will not tolerate bugs, and at the first sight of one she will burn them to ash if not stopped.)
  • Bravado (-2): You are rash in combat, refusing to show weakness by falling back from your enemies' blows. You either face it and stop it, or get hit in the progress. In addition, you cannot fight defensively.


IV. MAGIC

Magic: Flames of Rage
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: A Massive dark purple fire ball created in the palm of the hand. It starts out the size of a candle flame, but get's bigger upon usage of forming of what the user wants. The eerie light purple smoke it creates will possibly be used for smoke balls in the future. It can be manipulated shape and size wise, and will be the base for future spells.
Strengths: The Flames of rage is a shape-able dark purple flame. It has high speed, and can be manipulated in any way. Forming weapons and such is easy, the more simpler things faster. Whips and Bows are a common use for her.
Weaknesses: Water will destroy her magic completely, in addition, distracting her, or breaking any part of the fire connections will cause the magic to dissolve.

V. HISTORY

History:
History:



Last edited by Akira Sendo on Mon Jul 07, 2014 7:22 pm; edited 2 times in total

2Akira Sendo Empty Re: Akira Sendo Mon Jul 07, 2014 7:04 pm

Warren Dent

Warren Dent
Adorable character, I hope you allow me to take her virginity IC, offscreen of course. Let's begin the review.

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Excellent first attempt at creating an application.

I need you to state what your intolerance and your dependant are in brackets, similar to this example below.

Intolerance (-1): You have an irrational dislike of a certain thing. It may be an animal, a class of person, a situation, or just about anything at all. Note that some dislikes may be too trivial or ridiculous to count--a dislike of Bavarian-crème-filled donuts or mechanical pencils, for example, has no real dramatic value and will not be allowed. [Information Here]

Other than that your magic description, the strengths, and the weaknesses need to be fixed.

Everything needs more detail, in regards to the magic. You may wish to look at other applications and see how they structured their magic. The temperature of the flames also doesn't matter because your spells determine how much damage the ball of fire will do. You also might want to add that you can manipulate the shape and size of the flame as well as use it as a catalyst for your stronger spells.

3Akira Sendo Empty Re: Akira Sendo Mon Jul 07, 2014 9:13 pm

Warren Dent

Warren Dent
Approved under special circumstance.

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