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1Akira's Flame Magic(Done) Empty Akira's Flame Magic(Done) Tue Jul 08, 2014 2:48 am

Akira Sendo

Akira Sendo
Name: Blaze Bow
Class: D
Range: 5 meters
Speed: 1-4 m/s
AoE: 1x1 meter
Type: Offensive
Cooldown: 2 posts
Magic: Flames of Rage
Element: Fire
Effect: The user creates an eerie purple flame, and forms it into a bow and arrow. The bow is around the size of a regular Longbow, and flames at the tips. The arrows travel about the speed of 1-4 m/s. Upon contact the arrows perice skin If it goes farther than 1x1 meters, the magic dissolves. The arrows are solid, and have the shape of a normal arrow.
Points:

  • Damage: 2
  • Defense: 0
  • Speed: 2
  • Size: 2
  • AoE: 0
  • Range: 1
  • Duration: 2


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Name: Flame Whip
Class: D
Range: 15 Max Meters
Speed: -
AoE: -
Type: Offensive
Cooldown: 3 posts
Magic: Flames of Rage
Element: Fire
Effect: User creates a thrity-six inch whip from an dark purple flame. It is hedl in the hand, but doesn't burn the user. It is sharp, and will burn almost anything it touches. The whip speed depends on the user, as does the accuracy. In skilled hands it could be deadly. The whip can't be severed, but like a candle the flame can be doused and blow out by water or wind magic.
Points:

  • Damage: 2
  • Defense: 0
  • Speed: 0
  • Size: 1
  • AoE: 0
  • Range: 3
  • Duration: 3


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Name: Raging Fire Claw
Class: D
Range: 5m Max
Speed: 4-8m/s
AoE: -
Type: Offensive
Cooldown: 3 posts
Magic: Flames of Rage
Element: Fire
Effect: User creates lengthened nails on both hands created by eerie purple flame. This is magic mixed with physical combat, therefore it has more power. The user can viciously claw and burn the user at the same time, causing cuts and scrapes along with burns where ever scratched. The nails can also reach out, but only one at a time, binding the opponent for just enough time to reel them in, but can be easily escaped. The nails are about 2 inches.
Points:

  • Damage: 3
  • Defense: 0
  • Speed: 2
  • Size: 0
  • AoE: 0
  • Range: 1
  • Duration: 3


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Name: Blaze Kick
Class: D
Range: Self
Speed: -
AoE: 1x1 meter
Type: Offensive
Cooldown: 1 post
Magic: Flames of Rage
Element: Fire
Effect: The user engulfs their foot in flames, kicking with all their might, causing a minor burn that should heal within a day. The foot tip of the toes are engulfed in a baseballl sized fire ball, purple in color. Touching the ground with this foot destroys the flame, so it must be used from the air.
Points:

  • Damage: 3
  • Defense: 0
  • Speed: 2
  • Size: 1
  • AoE: 1
  • Range: 0
  • Duration: 2


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Name: Blaze Scythe
Class: C
Range: -
Speed: -
AoE: 1x1 meter
Type: Offensive
Cooldown: 4 posts
Magic: Flames of Rage
Element: Fire
Effect: The user creates an eerie purple flame scythe that can only be used with two hands. The flame will solidify where the blade is located, but the handle will remain gas. It is semi-weightless blade, making it faster and easier to use. Upon contact with skin or fabric, the blade will cut deep, and when withdrawn burn marks can be seen inside the skin. The blade is around the circumference of a basket ball, while the handle is just the size of the shoulder to the elbow.
Points:

  • Damage: 3
  • Defense: 0
  • Speed: 3
  • Size: 2
  • AoE: 1
  • Range: 0
  • Duration: 3



Last edited by Akira Sendo on Thu Jul 10, 2014 8:16 pm; edited 7 times in total

2Akira's Flame Magic(Done) Empty Re: Akira's Flame Magic(Done) Tue Jul 08, 2014 2:50 am

Koloktos Ghirahim

Koloktos Ghirahim
You get another D-ranked spell and a C-ranked spell.

3Akira's Flame Magic(Done) Empty Re: Akira's Flame Magic(Done) Tue Jul 08, 2014 3:14 am

Akira Sendo

Akira Sendo
And edited. Thanks for your help! :D

4Akira's Flame Magic(Done) Empty Re: Akira's Flame Magic(Done) Wed Jul 09, 2014 7:38 am

Akira Sendo

Akira Sendo
Bumping the thread~

5Akira's Flame Magic(Done) Empty Re: Akira's Flame Magic(Done) Thu Jul 10, 2014 4:53 pm

Warren Dent

Warren Dent
See the guide section for durations, look at new template, add in cooldown section.

Name: Blaze Bow
Yeah it can't melt armor with a damage of 2. Damage is what regulates what it does, not the properties of the magic itself. Hence why a lava spell also would not melt armor. You can say it will melt the armor of weaker npcs however. State if it fires a standard sized arrow or not.

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Name: Flame Whip
Usually no points into size are for buffing spells or healing spells. Your spell would need at least one point normally however as it is a whip I shall allow it as is. Clarify that instant burn.

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Name: Raging Fire Claw
With a Defense of 0 they can be broken rather instantaneously. Approved however after you add in the length of the nails.

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Name: Blaze Kick
Yeah... no burn marks for life unless its on a weaker npc.
Doing WAAAAAAY too much for a D-rank. Tone it down by a shitload. Remove parts of this. This is like a A-rank spell, you have to remember that D-ranks are considered weaker beginner spells haha. So fix this entire spell.

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Name: Blaze Scythe
Give more info on the dimensions and specs of the weapon that is made and this is approved.

6Akira's Flame Magic(Done) Empty Re: Akira's Flame Magic(Done) Thu Jul 10, 2014 8:16 pm

Akira Sendo

Akira Sendo
I think I've made the necessary edits.

7Akira's Flame Magic(Done) Empty Re: Akira's Flame Magic(Done) Thu Jul 10, 2014 8:35 pm

Warren Dent

Warren Dent
Very odd last spell. Anyway, you're ready to ave my char's child. Approved.

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