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1Lucien Creed, The Darkness of Sin. Empty Lucien Creed, The Darkness of Sin. Wed Jun 18, 2014 6:45 pm

Lucien Creed

Lucien Creed

Lucien Creed, The Darkness of Sin. Mayuri.Kurotsuchi.314043
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Name(s): Lucien Creed
Nickname(s): Sin, Son of Satan.
Age: 18
Sex: Male
Birthday: 9-10-x762
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Class: Mystic
Alignment: Chaotic Evil
Rank: D-rank
Guild: Phantom Lord
Guild Tattoo: Dark Purple, left hand.
Face Claim: Mayuri- Bleach

II. APPEARANCE

Height: 5’7”
Weight: 150
Hair: purple
Eyes: Eyes
General Appearance: His appearance has a skeletal-like look to it with a skull-like visage. His face is painted entirely white with the inner portion of his face painted black with the exception of his nose. His eyes are a golden color and he constantly bares his teeth giving the appearance of him constantly smiling. Both his ears are seemingly replaced with stubbed golden cones. His fingernails are blue and, with the exception of the fingernail on his right middle finger, are all short. The one long fingernail is as long as the finger itself. He also wears a white hat with two ends that point to his right and a large purple scarf around his neck. His whole body, even his face and hands, has been painted black and white. He repaints his make-up every morning, as he always removes it before going to bed.

Without his makeup, Lucien has blue hair and honey gold eyes. He has small, slatted portcullises with multiple earrings in place of where his ears would be, and his body is covered in scars.
Extra: n/a

III. PERSONALITY

Personality: The worst person you will ever meet, Lucien is the man who plots from behind the scenes, gains millions of follows… aaaaaaaaand kills most of them. He is the kind of person who looks at a man who is begging him for help, stab something into him, then sit back and watch him die for fun. It is hard for him to make friends, not that he wants to, do to his arrogant, aloof, greedy, perverted, and murderous personality. He often looks down on those weaker than him, and will not hesitate to kill them if they agitate him.

He is the man who many fear, and in combat is like an assassin, unnoticed until it is too late. BUT his strength does not lie in his combat expertise, but his charisma. He is able to recruit millions to his side, being the man you want giving the speech and being in charge of recruiting people. Though they are loyal followers, Lucien sees them as merely pawns, and nowhere near above him. He is also very different around a girl he is attracted to, being nice to her in his own creepy way. This could be him giving her flowers, and if she says she doesn't like colorful things, sucks the life out of then till they wither out.

Likes:

  • Torture
  • others dying
  • murder
  • sweets
  • girl who murder lots and lots of people

Dislikes:

  • Spicy food
  • Sea food
  • being weak
  • people not knowing their place

Motivations:

  • Thrill-  the feeling of adrenaline,
  • Pleasure- his own pleasure (in both clean and dirty ways.) He wants to enjoy his life, and is wants women, and every comfort in the world.
  • pretty much his own desires- he wants to get everything that is finer in life.

Fears:

  • Death
  • those who are more powerful than them.

Positive Traits:

  • Alertness (+2): You have finely tuned senses.
  • Daunting Presence (+2): You are skilled at inducing fear in your opponents.
  • Deceitful (+2): You have a knack for disguising the truth. Your lies are difficult to distinguish from the truth.
  • Diehard (+2): You can remain conscious after attacks that would fell others.
  • Persuasive (+2): You have a way with words and body language. Somehow you manage to persuade weaker minded people easily.
  • Fortitude (+3): You are tougher than normal. You can take more hits than the regular Joe.
  • Swift (+3): You are fleet of foot. When running, you move three times your normal speed.
  • Stealthy (+3): You are particularly good at avoiding notice. You could be sitting somewhere in a thread at a bar and people wouldn't even notice that you were there.


Negative Traits:

  • Aloof (-1): Your manner is cold and unapproachable, distancing you from friends and strangers alike. Your preternatural intelligence lends itself to viewing others as slow-witted and a waste of your precious time. Your charisma is lowered.
    Explanation: You can't act nice to people and you can't make friends easily.
  • Arrogant (-1): You firmly believe that you are better than anyone else is. Your ideas are the best, your clothes are the most stylish, and you have to let everyone else know how much better you are. Once in a while you openly show contempt or disdain for someone else.
    Explanation: You must at least act arrogant one out of five posts.
  • Bad Reputation (-1): You have a reputation that angers or frightens people. Examples include being unlucky, petty, or cruel. The rep may or may not be accurate, but in either case, word travels faster than you do.
    Explanation: You can't communicate easily with non player characters. Somehow they've heard of you and the things they've heard weren't too good. [he is cruel..and well..because it's true, he even admits it when not too many people are around.]
  • Branded (-2): You have fled for a crime committed and now have a prominent brand. You may have been a criminal, a slave, or some other such illicit individual. The brand is such that it cannot be easily covered, and a cursory search reveals it each time. Law enforcement agents of any lawful land will immediately take you into custody if they see the mark, for extradition or imprisonment. It is your choice as to whether or not you were falsely accused of the crime.
    Explanation: You have a visible sign on your body that can not be hidden. This sign reveals itself clearly when you are in the presence of Rune Knights which will allow them to freely arrest you. Every time you get arrested you must pay a fine to the local authorities to get out. Resisting arrest will result into a larger fine. [left lower arm]
  • Bravado (-2): You are rash in combat, refusing to show weakness by falling back from your enemies' blows. You either face it and stop it, or get hit in the progress. In addition, you cannot fight defensively.
    Explanation: You can't create any defensive spells. Offensive spells are made to inflict damage while defensive spells do not inflict any damage at all and are made to prevent damage.
  • Cruel (-1): You have a sadistic streak that causes you to perform acts of cruelty for no good reason. Of course, this doesn't endear you to others. Most times you are prudent enough to carry out your cruelties on those under your thumb, rather than those you see as equals. However, you carry a constant social stigma, as rumors have their way of getting around.
    Explanation: You must perform an act of cruelty one out of five posts.
  • Daredevil (-2): You only really feel alive when you're staring death in the face. Your character is addicted to the thrill of death-defying stunts, pushing themselves to the limit at every available opportunity.
    Explanation: You can't refuse the opportunity of engaging into combat with anyone or anything that is stronger than you. You also always volunteer and perform tasks that have a risk attached to them when you are in a group.
  • Greedy (-1): Money makes your eyes light up with joy. The more, the merrier, as long as it spends. Once in a while, whenever you're divvying up shares of the loot, being offered a hefty bribe, or catching wind of some fabulous treasure, the flaw can to convince you to grab for as much money as possible.
    Explanation: You may act differently when money comes into play.
  • Lecherous (-1): You have a lusty nature and a tendency to pursue the pleasures of the flesh. A woman or a man (however your tastes run) is an almost irresistible temptation to you. You give in to these temptations easily.
  • Overconfident (-1): Nothing is beyond your capabilities. If you wanted, you could defeat the best swordsman in the world; you just haven't had any reason to do so yet. And surely that chasm isn't too wide for you to leap across.
  • Proud (-1): You don't like accepting help from others. If a gift or offer of aid smacks of charity or pity even the slightest bit, you grow indignant and refuse it.
  • Extravagant (-2): You enjoy living in the lap of luxury. Ale is never good enough if you can get fine wine instead. You aren't happy with anything less than the finest room in the inn. In addition, any equipment or services you purchase cost 10% more than the standard rate for the locale you are currently in. The best of the best always costs more, after all.
    Explanation: You will always pay 10% more when purchasing something.
  • Colorblind (-2): Though this is a misconception, for roleplay purposes, you see everything in black, white, and shades of gray.
    Explanation: You can't see colors. You can therefore never refer to colors in your roleplays and everything that requires you to see a color can't be done by you.
  • Harbinger of Ill Omen (-1): You seem to be cursed to forever bump into a specific person, time and time again. Each time you do, something bad happens not long afterward. This person in no way does this purposefully, it just happens with alarming frequency.
    Explanation: You will have character assigned to you by roleplay department of staff who will enter you threads randomly from time to time. When this happens, staff will change the conditions of your thread against you. Such as heavy storm, avalanches or beasts catching onto your smell.


IV. MAGIC

Magic: Darkness Magic
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: Darkness Magic is a type of Magic which allows users to manipulate and control destructive Dark Magic. This Magic has a physical form used for destroying objects, blocking enemies' attacks and picking up objects. The color of the Magic varies depending on the caster (red, purple, black, green, etc.). Users typically shape their attacks into the form of ghostly apparitions, which they can use in various ways. The malefic nature of this Magic tends to complement the sinister nature of its users, and it is known to make people physically ill and cold in nature..

Like other elemental Magic, this Magic includes body transformation. Users such as Simon control the surrounding darkness and shadow, engulfing others and the immediate vicinity into its pitch-black darkness, themselves included..
Strengths:
+ very destructive
+ cancels Holy/Light magic (if same ranks)
+ Can be used for offensive and supplementary purposes.
Weaknesses:
- Holy/Light magic cancels it (if same ranks)
- do to Bravado, no defensive spells
- Darkness Dragon Slayers

V. HISTORY

History:

Lucien was born in a unknown village, in an area that was quite a bit away from an area known as Oak, to the Creed family. There he was raised, never leaving the village limits. As a kid he was kind, loving, and at his core the EXACT opposite of what he is now. He was always bullied as a kid, which normally led to fist fights. One day, the fight went too far, Lucien picked up a lead pipe killing all three bullies. This unlocked his love for killing. Later on in life, around the age of 15 he got in another fight and found out he had Darkness Magic. With this he killed the bullies, and do to it being in self defense, was not found guilty of murder. Afterwards he left his village, but not after burning down his family, his family’s house, and making it look like it was an accident. He then traveled the world, not much exiting happening except for learning a few new spells, and killing a few people, but not enough.

However, in his travels, his lust for blood and craving for destruction grew and grew until he was unable to contain his own want to destroy. Suddenly at the age of 17 he slaughtered the entire village he was in, clamming he needed to be sedated. Unluckily for Lucien a D-rank member of the Rune Knights saw him, and tried to arrest him. Lucien of course resisted his arrest, to which the man said “THEN PAY WITH YOUR BLOOD!” The battle went on for a few good minutes, of course the end result being the guard dying. The guard then placed a brand on him during his last few moments of life, not that Lucien cared at all. Lucien then left, and about half a year later, he found a new village being ruled by a power obsessed mage. Lucien then killed the man, taking some jewels with him, but sadly had his eyes damaged in the fight. After days of healing, he was unable to see colors anymore. After murdering the doctor as “punishment”, though he really only did this out of boredom, he left again, putting his sights on the guild of Phantom Lord. It took one year, at the age of eighteen, to get to Oak, and he is now a soon to be D-rank Phantom Lord member.


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Last edited by Lucien Creed on Fri Jun 20, 2014 9:27 pm; edited 7 times in total

2Lucien Creed, The Darkness of Sin. Empty Re: Lucien Creed, The Darkness of Sin. Fri Jun 20, 2014 6:31 pm

Jabo Devine

Jabo Devine

Coding - Please use the proper coding for your positive and negative traits.
Birthday -The year you'd put 762 unless you wanted him to be 28.
Alignment - From what I read in the personality something this character would be more fitted as Chaotic Evil or maybe Neutral Evil. By definition give in alignments this character wouldn't be chaotic neutral.
Guild Tattoo - Fill this portion in.
Extra - Just put, "N/A" as someone's eyes being closed wouldn't be considered extra.
Personality - You are 7 words short.
Motivations - Elaborate upon your motivations, please.
Negative Characteristics - State why you have a bad reputation. Include where your branding is. I'm going to have to ask you to take righteous out and fill it in with another characteristic.
Magic - You cannot control shadow as that is a completely different magic. Take out, "never runs out." from the strengths. Take out, "(What are the strengths of your magic? Be sure to list the honest strengths here, otherwise we might deny future spells if they weren't mentioned before as capabilities of your magic.)" Take out, "not many defensive spells though.", "No secondary Magic" and add in legit weaknesses please.

3Lucien Creed, The Darkness of Sin. Empty Re: Lucien Creed, The Darkness of Sin. Fri Jun 20, 2014 8:03 pm

Lucien Creed

Lucien Creed
changed his FC. Okay I fixxed most of it...since this is his version Darkness magic (cause apparently everyone's differ), would the fact that his bravado cuts him off from defensive spells count as a drawback?

4Lucien Creed, The Darkness of Sin. Empty Re: Lucien Creed, The Darkness of Sin. Fri Jun 20, 2014 8:55 pm

Jabo Devine

Jabo Devine
Sure that would be fine if you put that you couldn't use defensive class spells as a weakness, but if you do then the whole versatility strength wouldn't be acceptable.

5Lucien Creed, The Darkness of Sin. Empty Re: Lucien Creed, The Darkness of Sin. Fri Jun 20, 2014 9:19 pm

Lucien Creed

Lucien Creed
fixxed, aka BUMPED

6Lucien Creed, The Darkness of Sin. Empty Re: Lucien Creed, The Darkness of Sin. Fri Jun 20, 2014 9:27 pm

Lucien Creed

Lucien Creed
FINISHED, DONE, WHY DO I NEED THREE WORDS HERE XD

7Lucien Creed, The Darkness of Sin. Empty Re: Lucien Creed, The Darkness of Sin. Fri Jun 20, 2014 9:30 pm

Jabo Devine

Jabo Devine
Approved.

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