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1Ace's Character Empty Ace's Character Tue May 20, 2014 5:24 am

Ace

Ace
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Name(s): Ace Sato
Nickname(s): Phantom Blade.
Age: 17
Sex: Male
Birthday: 28/2/X763
Sexuality: Straight
Class:Cleric.
Alignment: Neutral Good.
Rank: D
Guild: Phantom Lord
Guild Tattoo: Huge on his chest.
Face Claim: Vergil - DMC

II. APPEARANCE

Height: 6'2
Weight: 69kg
Hair: Snow White
Eyes: Blue Grey eyes.
General Appearance: Ace has tan skin with pale, platinum blonde hair that is often mistaken for White. His hair sways back over his head giving a clean look but at the same time having minor spiky edges over his head representing his personality. He wears a long black coat with a sharp tail on his right side with the left being shorter however the left side makes up with a longer collar then the right. On his right upper arm, he has a small Phantom Lord patch sewing with purple threads, coating it with a slightly darker black then the coat. Under his black coat, Ace wears a black long sleeved, thin baseball shirt. Ace also wears white gloves that cover his hands at most times and often gets rid of them in battle. For his lower half, Ace wears black slacks with leather pointy's. When in public, Ace often hides his facial features, including his platinum gold hair with a black hood to match the coat.
Extra: Both Aces ears are pierced with cross ear rings. He also wears half of his deceased mothers pendant around his neck. The other half remains unknown.

III. PERSONALITY

Personality: Ace is calm, intelligent, respectful, and polite however Ace also has a darker side that often appears at random times like mood swings. His darker side is much more ruthless, cold and heartless. When he is his self, he will always put others before himself making sure they are safe at all times. When he is in his darker side, he wont hesitate to use others to achieve his goals and aspirations; whatever the cost. He seeks nothing but power and believes that all of the world should unite as one under one leader; being him. When his lighter side is active, he would always be more then willing to help out new members of the guild and do a lot of good deeds for people; even strangers.
Likes:
Lighter Side


  • Swords
  • Positive vibes
  • Peace
  • Silence
  • Youth
  • Guilds people.


Darker Side


  • Power
  • Money
  • Killing
  • Deaths

Dislikes:
Lighter Side


  • Negativity
  • Loud Mouths
  • Cockiness
  • Giving up
  • Disrespectful


Darker Side


  • Stronger Mages
  • Authority
  • Taking Orders
  • Peace

Motivations:
1) His deceased Mother's dreams to become the best Mage.
2) Hope to find his long lost twin.
Fears:
Lighter Side


  • His Deceased Mother. (Photos, videos, illusions etc..)
  • Guild being destroyed.


Darker Side


  • Dying
  • Losing to nobodies


Positive Traits:

  • Alertness (+2): You have finely tuned senses.
  • Blindsight (+4): Using senses such as acute hearing and sensitivity to vibrations, you detect the location of opponents who are no more than five feet away from you. Darkness and Invisibility are irrelevant, though you cannot detect non corporeal beings.
  • Swift (+3): You are fleet of foot. When running, you move three times your normal speed.
  • Stealthy (+3): You are particularly good at avoiding notice. You could be sitting somewhere in a thread at a bar and people wouldn't even notice that you were there.

Negative Traits:

  • Compulsive Honesty (-2): You cannot tell a lie, nor can you behave in a deceitful fashion. You tend to be blunt rather than tactful, even if it means insulting someone who you and your companions are trying to impress. This occurs more when Ace is in his darker personality.
  • Greedy (-1): Money makes your eyes light up with joy. The more, the merrier, as long as it spends. Once in a while, whenever you're divvying up shares of the loot, being offered a hefty bribe, or catching wind of some fabulous treasure, the flaw can to convince you to grab for as much money as possible. This occurs more when Ace is in his darker personality.
  • Harbinger of Ill Omen (-1): You seem to be cursed to forever bump into a specific person, time and time again. Each time you do, something bad happens not long afterward. This person in no way does this purposefully, it just happens with alarming frequency. In roleplay terms, this can be reflected through utilizing a specific instance of the Misfortunate flaw when the Harbinger pops up, or simply be some creatively hindering roleplay situation.
  • Intolerance (-1): You have an irrational dislike of a certain thing. It may be an animal, a class of person, a situation, or just about anything at all. Note that some dislikes may be too trivial or ridiculous to count--a dislike of Bavarian-crème-filled donuts or mechanical pencils, for example, has no real dramatic value and will not be allowed. This shows when someone bad mouths his deceased mother.
  • Judgmental (-1): You form opinions quickly and change them very slowly. You also have a tendency to judge people on their appearance. A man dressed as a pirate, no matter how gentlemanly, is a scoundrel and a dog as far as you is concerned. A man covered in mud is a peasant, and a woman wearing revealing clothing is a prostitute.
  • Misfortunate (-1): Lucky breaks are something that happen to other people. Your luck isn't terrible; you wouldn't have survived as long as you have if it were. It just isn't very good. Look at it this way: if you need some blind luck to get you out of a sticky situation, expect to be sticking around for a while.
  • Overconfident (-1): Nothing is beyond your capabilities. If you wanted, you could defeat the best swordsman in the world; you just haven't had any reason to do so yet. And surely that chasm isn't too wide for you to leap across.
  • Short Attention Span (-1): You have little patience, causing you to have difficulty concentrating on repetitive tasks.
  • Shy (-1): You are distinctly ill at ease when dealing with people, and you try to avoid social situations whenever possible. When you become the center of attention you freeze. Don't expect to make any public speeches.
  • Trusting (-2): You don't like to believe that other people are capable of misleading and lying to you. After all, people are basically good, right?


IV. MAGIC

Magic: Sword Magic
Caster or Holder: Holder
Description: A Magic which, as the name itself suggests, is focused around the use of swords, with those weapons acting as mediums for the user to perform particular attacks. Many of such moves are shown capable of going past the physical reach of the blade employed in their use, threatening foes at short-to-mid range. A number of different blades can be employed for such Magic, with the most recurring ones being longswords and katana. In some cases, certain moves might even involve the change of the sword's properties, such as its length.
Strengths:

  • Change the properties of the sword/s. The max length being 1.5m(Nodachi) and max weight being 20kg.
  • Able to manipulate multiple swords at once depending on the spell. The swords basically vanish after 1 post and the max swords controlled increase depending on the rank(Starts at 8 and Goes up in 2's.)
  • Able to manipulate Swords for supplementary uses likes domes and such depending on the spell.

Weaknesses:

  • The swords can only be used for 1 action before vanishing so if you use it to strike then it vanishes after the strike. If you use it to block then it will vanish after the block etc..
  • Ineffective for long ranged capabilities.
  • Can lose control of the blades if his Attention is deeply distracted.


V. HISTORY

History: Seventeen years ago, a pair of twins were born. One being Sato and the other being Ace. They were both identical but at the same time had unique attributes that could distinguish the two brothers a part; one being the hair color. During the birth of the twins, their mother wasn't able to make it and sadly died from the loss of blood. They tried a lot of ways to keep her alive like blood transplants but nothing worked. Their father was yet another hit and run that left when the mother died. He wanted nothing to do with the twins so he left. The twins were now left with no parents and were forced to go into orphanage homes however none would accept the twins as a 'pair' forcing the two too split up. Destiny was to bring them together sooner or later but as for now, they must go their separate paths.

Growing up, Ace found a rather strange liking in swords, blades and other kinds of sharp objects at a very young age. He would often watch one of the older boys in the home practice his Katana skills with a wooden blade. As he grew older, he would then carry on the other boys legacy and practice and soon craft his skills using a sword. It was then when the boy was taught Sword magic by one of the retired men that would often visit the orphanage giving weekly gifts. It was the same man that would later move on to give Ace his first real blade made of actual metal. When Ace was old enough he would learn about his past from one of the orphanage owners and decide that he wanted to somehow reunite with his older brother thus leading him to join a mage guild known as the 'Phantom Lords'. This is where his adventure would truly begin.....



Last edited by Ace on Thu May 22, 2014 5:03 am; edited 2 times in total

2Ace's Character Empty Re: Ace's Character Tue May 20, 2014 9:34 pm

Ace

Ace
Bumpz

3Ace's Character Empty Re: Ace's Character Thu May 22, 2014 2:33 am

Warren Dent

Warren Dent
Only Minor Issues.

Name
Add a last name, they are mandatory. It can be a fake last name that your character doesn't use.

Personality
Must have at least two motivations, add the second.
Copy and past the traits in as we have written them, add in your own comments that you made in brackets at the end of our given descriptions.

Magic
Take out the multiple element factor, this is not an viable option for any magic currently.
You need a even amount of weaknesses and strengths.

4Ace's Character Empty Re: Ace's Character Thu May 22, 2014 4:06 am

Ace

Ace
Edited.

5Ace's Character Empty Re: Ace's Character Thu May 22, 2014 4:10 am

Warren Dent

Warren Dent
Some Sword Magic techniques seem to involve the use of elements commonly found employed by elemental forms of Magic, such as Fire Magic. <--- Must of forgot to remove this eh? Its your last edit.

6Ace's Character Empty Re: Ace's Character Thu May 22, 2014 5:04 am

Ace

Ace
Edited. Sorry lol i didn't know you meant that since i just copied it from the Wiki.

7Ace's Character Empty Re: Ace's Character Thu May 22, 2014 5:07 am

Warren Dent

Warren Dent
Yeah, anything that has something against what we allow has to be changed, even if its from the wiki. xD Just for future reference.

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