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1Aster Starjun's Starter Spells Empty Aster Starjun's Starter Spells Sun Mar 23, 2014 3:41 pm

Aster Starjun

Aster Starjun

Aster Starjun's Starter Spells Lupus12

Name: Lupus
Meaning: The Wolf
Rank: A
Magic: Lightning Magic
Gender: Male
Appearance: Lupus at first glance does look like a normal human but under his hood are two wolf ears. He is wearing a black hooded jacket and always unbuttoned all the time. His hood is usually hiding his wolf ears. He has a long silver white hair that hides his yellow wolf -like eye. Tattooed on his body is a blue image. On his both wrist there is also a flame like tattoo colored with blue and black. He is wearing a dark brown pants partnered with a loose belt with metal plates hanging.
Personality: Lupus has a rather odd personality. He is fairly relaxed and calm but also arrogant. He likes to be the general lone wolf and fight alone, while arrogantly mocking his opponents. Even so he has a different feeling with Aster, because he and Aster's father were close he tries his best to motivate him even if it doesn't seem like it. He tends to lazily not listen to Aster because he feels he doesn't quite understand fighting as much as he does and often works on his own will. He usually keeps a moderately wicked grin on his face and a strong intimidation.
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Aster Starjun's Starter Spells Pmh3

Name: Capricornus
Meaning: The Sea Goat
Rank: D
Magic: Water-Make Magic
Gender: Female
Appearance: Capricornus at first glance seems to be an ordinary dark skinned girl, until you see her horns. She has light blue horns that are moderately hidden by her medium length short white hair. She has a kind face with bright orange eyes. She wears an open sleeved white vest with a gold cut around the edges, with a tan-brown shirt underneath with three blue claw marks. Over her upper clothes she wears a light blue cloth that wraps around her under side and goes down to her lower thigh. Under the cloth, she wears white pants with the gold cut at the end, which is mostly covered with her brown boots going a bit above her ankle. She also wears accessories such as earrings  on her horns and a brown scarf with a necklace and gloves.
Personality: Capricornus is a very kind and happy celestial spirit. She always keeps a smile on here face and puts other people before herself, often getting her hurt in the outcome. She is very loyal to Aster and always try to assist him with all of her strength and has become a sort of mother like figure on him, making sure he is always keeping on his training, hygienics  and manners, along with giving him motherly advice. Even though she is kind hearted she will do anything to protect the ones she cares about, most in particularly Aster. She can get rather caught up with things and often overact over small things and start crying. Besides her motherly personality to Aster she is still friendly to all of the other spirits as well, even though she doesn't like Lupus much because of his attitude, often they are found arguing over nothing. Will she is not physically strong in battle she uses more of a defensive and supplementary magic to help out, while trying her best to stay out of close combat.
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Last edited by Aster Starjun on Sun Apr 06, 2014 6:57 am; edited 1 time in total

2Aster Starjun's Starter Spells Empty Re: Aster Starjun's Starter Spells Mon Mar 31, 2014 2:07 am

Aster Starjun

Aster Starjun
Bump!

3Aster Starjun's Starter Spells Empty Re: Aster Starjun's Starter Spells Sun Apr 06, 2014 6:29 am

Inzei Mishima

Inzei Mishima
Lupus the Wolf:
- For Electro Boost, you say that the duration lasts 2 posts, but in the description, you say that it works for one post. Correct this.

- Mention that Pulsar Wave causes 'deep bruises' on impact.

Capricornus:
- State that the barrier (Water-Make: Safeguard) can withstand 1 C-Rank and 2 D-Rank spells before being destroyed. Also remove the 'normally high strength' part.

- For your Water-Make: Safeguard spell, put the duration as ''until dismissed or destroyed,''

- Do the same for your whip.

Bump when edited.

4Aster Starjun's Starter Spells Empty Re: Aster Starjun's Starter Spells Sun Apr 06, 2014 6:57 am

Aster Starjun

Aster Starjun
Bump

5Aster Starjun's Starter Spells Empty Re: Aster Starjun's Starter Spells Sun Apr 06, 2014 7:01 am

Inzei Mishima

Inzei Mishima
Approved. I apologise that you had to wait so long. Your spells have been added to your profile.

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