Name: Rose Dragon's Roar
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 5
Requirements: Ruby Dragon Slayer Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Ruby
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: Amalia positions her hands around her mouth like a trumpeter before exhaling a storm of pure ruby shards. The shards form a five meter tornado that extends out five meters. Anything caught in the storm of shards will be cut on impact.

Name: Ruby Fists of the Caverns
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 5/5
Requirements: Ruby Dragon Slayer Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Ruby
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: Until Dismissed
Effect: Amalia claps her hands together and surrounds both her hands with six, four inch shards of ruby crystal. From that point forward anyone that is hit by her fists will be cut by the ruby shards.

Name: Octavia's Encasing Crystal
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 5
Requirements: Ruby Dragon Slayer Magic
Class: Defensive
Element: Ruby
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: Amalia forges a layer of three foot thick ruby around her body that deflects either 2 D rank spells or 1 C rank spell.

Name: Ruby Dragon's Brilliant Crystal
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 5
Requirements: Ruby Dragon Slayer Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Ruby
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: Amalia creates a small ruby in between her hands before tossing it towards her target. The ruby will expand out like a rose until it is five meters large towards the target up to five meters away. Anything hit by the ruby will be cut by the crystal.

Name: Ruby Dragon's Spiral Storm
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 15
Requirements: Ruby Dragon Slayer
Class: Offensive
Element: Ruby
Cooldown: 3 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: Amalia pushes her hands straight forward at her target which creates a storm of large rubies. The storm blasts forth in a spiraling motion that reaches in a radius of ten meters and can extend out ten meters. Anything hit by the storm will have deep bruising and cuts on their body.

Hello Amalia,

I'll be reviewing your application. I only spot two minor problems. These two problems are:

a.) State the maximum size that your rose can expand to.

b.) State the radius of the storm. How big is it?

After that, I believe it will be ready. If you have questions or concerns, please do feel free to contact me! I look forward to reading your edits.

Yours,

Alyssa

All the edits have been made.

Due to Octavia's Encasing Crystal being a defensive spell, it should have the capability of deflecting 2 D rank spells or 1 C rank spell.

Edited.

Approved and added to profile.