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1Noah Starrk's Spells for Training Empty Noah Starrk's Spells for Training Sat Dec 28, 2013 6:12 pm

Inzei Mishima

Inzei Mishima
Name: Light of the Holy Dragon
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: Holy Dragon Slayer Magic
Class: Supplementary
Element: Light
Cooldown: 1
Duration: Until dismissed
Effect: The user snaps his fingers, and emits a white light from his hand. This spell acts like a lantern for the user, and is not used for combat purposes, but rather practical purposes. The user can fluctuate the amount of light he wants to emit. At full power, the user will be able to see 3 meters from his hand is.

Name: Stomp of the Holy Dragon
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: Holy Dragon Slayer Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Light
Cooldown: 3
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user imbues his foot (left or right) with light, and charges at the target, dealing some light damage to the opponent. Upon impact, the opponent will be sent back 5 meters. If they're easily injured, then they might sustain some bruises.

Name: Claw of the Holy Dragon
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 20
Requirements: Holy Dragon Slayer Magic
Class: Supplementary
Element: Light
Cooldown: 5
Duration: 4
Effect: The user gathers light in their hand and fires it at their opponent, engraving a stigma into their skin, thus restricting their movement. The opponent's speed will be reduced by 10 percent. The stigma will burn away after 4 posts.

Name: Barrier of the Holy Dragon
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 20
Requirements: Holy Dragon Slayer Magic
Class: Defensive
Element: Light
Cooldown: 3
Duration: Until dismissed or destroyed
Effect: Manipulating the light around him, the user creates a barrier formed out of light. It is capable of deflecting projectiles by opponents. It can deflect 4 D rank spells, 2 C rank spells, or one B rank spell, before being destroyed.

Name: Roar of the Holy Dragon
Rank: B
Magic Cost: 30
Requirements: Holy Dragon Slayer Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Light
Cooldown: 3
Duration: Instant
Effect: The White Dragon Slayer's exclusive Dragon's Roar, incorporating the element of light. The user releases a tornado of light from their mouth to attack the target. The destructive power of this spell is high, being able to damage buildings, should the hit be direct. A direct hit from this spell can cause minor internal bruises, and fractures to the bones. It is a stronger variant of Howl of the Holy Dragon. The tornado of light is 2 meters in width. It's range is twenty meters.

Name: Sanctuary of the Holy Dragon
Rank: B
Magic Cost: 30
Requirements: Holy Dragon Slayer Magic
Class: Supplementary
Element: Light
Cooldown: 4
Duration: Until dismissed.
Effect: The user manipulates the light around him, causing their hands to glow a bright white color. The user can then put their hands over another person's wound. The wound will then be healed. At B-Rank, the spell can heal some deep bruises, and may help some small fractures, and while it may not be able to heal broken bones, it may be able to numb some of the pain. The user cannot use heal himself with this spell.

Name: Holy Breath
Rank: A
Magic Cost: 40
Requirements: Holy Dragon Slayer Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Light
Cooldown: 3
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user quickly gathers and releases a large quantity of light from their mouth, firing it at an opponent. The size of the spell is slightly more sizable than of Roar of the Holy Dragon's, at 2.5 meters in width. This spell is very similar to 'Roar of the Holy Dragon', the only difference being Holy Breath deals more damage, causing more serious fractures and deep internal bruises. The spell's range is 30 meters, substantially greater than that of 'Roar of the Holy Dragon'. It's blast radius is 5 meters, making it a good spell for taking out several enemies at a time.

Name: Judgement of the Holy Dragon
Rank: A
Magic Cost: 40
Requirements: Holy Dragon Slayer Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Light
Cooldown: 4
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user enters a crouched stance, gathering light in their hands. Shortly thereafter, the user opens their hands, releasing 100 beams of light, inflicting a substantial amount of damage to the target. It can cause some serious fractures, and deep internal bruising upon impact. This spell can also be used to hit more than one opponent at a time. It's range is 25 meters.



Last edited by Noah Starkk on Mon Jan 06, 2014 5:27 pm; edited 6 times in total

2Noah Starrk's Spells for Training Empty Re: Noah Starrk's Spells for Training Mon Dec 30, 2013 3:10 pm

Sayuri

Sayuri
Light of the Holy Dragon: This is approved.

Stomp of the Holy Dragon: This is approved.

Claw of the Holy Dragon: The stigma can be burned away with 4 D or 2 C or higher spell.
Or: Add a duration of 4 posts, after 4 posts the stigma will fade away.

Barrier of the Holy Dragon: It can deflect 4 D or 2 C.

Roar of the Holy Dragon: "being able to destroy even buildings" not destroy, of course you can damage them.
Leave out the tornado part and leave the laser part, you can not alter the trajectory of the laser.

Sanctuary of the Sky Dragon: This spell is denied.

Holy Breath: Change the radius of the Holy Breath. The lenght can be max. 30 meters, the width 5 meters.

Judgement of the Holy Dragon: How many homing beams of light? All together they will deal A-class damage.

3Noah Starrk's Spells for Training Empty Re: Noah Starrk's Spells for Training Tue Dec 31, 2013 7:37 pm

Inzei Mishima

Inzei Mishima
Edited accordingly.

4Noah Starrk's Spells for Training Empty Re: Noah Starrk's Spells for Training Mon Jan 06, 2014 2:09 pm

Kazuki Kobayashi

Kazuki Kobayashi
Alright Noah, I'll be taking over for Mrs. Eve from here. Let's get going:

Claw of the Holy Dragon: Raise the Cooldown to 5 posts. Change the classification of the spell to Supplementary.

Barrier of the Holy Dragon: State that this can also stop 1 B rank spell. Change the word 'reflect' to 'deflect'.

Roar of the Holy Dragon: Please state how big this roar is.

Sanctuary: State that this cannot heal you.

Holy Breath: State how big this spell is.

Judgement: Reduce the sum. Be realistic. Keep in mind they only do A rank damage if they all hit. Also, take out the homing part. This implies this spell is undodgable. Reduce the range to 25 meters.

Bump when done!

5Noah Starrk's Spells for Training Empty Re: Noah Starrk's Spells for Training Mon Jan 06, 2014 3:14 pm

Inzei Mishima

Inzei Mishima
I edited everything except the one with Sanctuary. Does 'can't heal you' mean that it can't heal anybody, or does that only mean that I can't use it on myself?

6Noah Starrk's Spells for Training Empty Re: Noah Starrk's Spells for Training Mon Jan 06, 2014 3:17 pm

Kazuki Kobayashi

Kazuki Kobayashi
As a DS, you can only heal others. A GS can do both.

7Noah Starrk's Spells for Training Empty Re: Noah Starrk's Spells for Training Mon Jan 06, 2014 4:34 pm

Inzei Mishima

Inzei Mishima
Ah, didn't know that. Edited.

8Noah Starrk's Spells for Training Empty Re: Noah Starrk's Spells for Training Mon Jan 06, 2014 5:22 pm

Kazuki Kobayashi

Kazuki Kobayashi
If you're far enough in the series...

Spoiler:

White Dragon's Roar: Still need to state how large the roar itself is. I.E. 2m tall, 2m wide, etc...this also goes for the Holy Breath.

Rest is good to go. Bump when done.

9Noah Starrk's Spells for Training Empty Re: Noah Starrk's Spells for Training Mon Jan 06, 2014 5:28 pm

Inzei Mishima

Inzei Mishima
Alright, this should be good enough. And yeah, I've caught up in the series (besides the last 5 or so manga chapters), though I didn't remember that bit.

10Noah Starrk's Spells for Training Empty Re: Noah Starrk's Spells for Training Mon Jan 06, 2014 5:29 pm

Kazuki Kobayashi

Kazuki Kobayashi
Alright man, looks good! Approved for le trains! Link back when done!

11Noah Starrk's Spells for Training Empty Re: Noah Starrk's Spells for Training Thu Jan 16, 2014 2:51 pm

Inzei Mishima

Inzei Mishima
http://www.natsudragneel.com/t960-double-dragons-training-noah

Trained.

12Noah Starrk's Spells for Training Empty Re: Noah Starrk's Spells for Training Mon Jan 20, 2014 5:46 pm

Sayuri

Sayuri
Training accomplished, your spells have been added to your profile.

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