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1~Rin Moriyama~ Empty ~Rin Moriyama~ Thu Apr 28, 2016 8:17 pm

Rin Moriyama

Rin Moriyama

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“Who said you could talk to me, you stupid dog!!.”

GENERAL INFORMATION

Name(s): Rin Moriyama
Nickname(s): None
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Birthday: June 7th
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Rank: D
Guild: Guildless
Tattoo: Upper left outer thigh
Face Claim: Rin Tohsaka - Fate/Stay Night
Reference: N/A

APPEARANCE

Height: 5'7"
Weight: 135 lbs
Hair: Raven black
Eyes: Dark Aqua Blue
Description:
Rin is a lovely and beautiful girl. Silky raven colored hair that reaches her waist, gem like aqua blue eyes that sparkle in the sun and moon, soft light skin that looks so perfect, slender arms and legs, and dainty hands. Her chest is well endowed and her face is small. Its no wonder she's the daughter of a goddess. Her normal attire usually consists of a red tight-fitting long sleeve shirt with a silver cross embroidered over her chest, a short black pleated skirt, sheer black thigh highs and a pair of polished black loafers. On other days, she changes her attire to a lovely long knee length pure white dress made of silk, with a royal blue sash around her waist and a baby blue cashmere cardigan with a pair of light blue flats. Rin adorns her neck with a lovely blue pendant that she never takes off.

PERSONALITY

Personality:
Rin can be described in the following words; selfish, friendly, sweet(when she wants to be), caring(again, when she wants to be), and violent. Rin hates doing anything that requires hard physical labor and will normally shuck it onto someone else to do. She does not work well with others typically and can be somewhat of an ice princess to those who do not pique her interest. However, to those that do, she will give them the "privilege" of speaking to her. Being born the child of the goddess, Hera, Rin believes she is above all others in status, looks and etc. Therefore she feels she's entitled to be treated like she better than everyone else. She believes she is in a sense a princess and should be treated like one by those she is fond of. She is spoiled, and thinks mostly of herself. Only those she is extremely close to will she show her caring side to. Even then, she acts like a spoiled brat who demands to be put on a pedestal and treated like royalty. She doesn't tend to give a rat's ass about what others think of her. She only cares about the opinions of those she's close towards and even that is rare for Rin. This girl has a super short fuse, say the slightest thing that pisses her off and she will be beating on you like donkey kong. When it comes to her true feelings on most matters, she tends to be a complete tsundere. Her actions often contradict her words, and when people point this out to her, she will snap and lash out in an embarrassed anger showing no mercy. Rin can be sweet but only if the conditions are right, that, and if she's in a good mood. Otherwise she can be a bit bitchy. Not really caring if she hurts people's feeling with her icy words. Despite all this, she always acts with grace and sometimes tact.

Motivations:
-Surpassing the gods
Rin wishes to surpass all the gods, mainly her mother Hera. She wants to prove they were wrong for casting her aside
Fears:
-Dying Alone
Rin fears dying all alone without anyone who would mourn her death.
-Lightning
Rin has a fear of lightning due to a scar she received on her back from the god, Zeus, struck her with a small and not very powerful bolt of his lightning when she tried to stop the gods from casting her from their world.
-Thunder
Every time Rin hears thunder it reminds her of the time back in the realm of the gods when Zeus scarred her back.

Likes:
-Being treated like a royalty
Rin LOVES being treated like a princess by the person she is fond of. It gives her a sense of fulfillment.
-Sweets
Rin loves anything with sugar in it; candy, cakes, just straight up sugar, you name it. If it IS sugar or has any sugar in it, Rin will devour it.
-Shiny Things
Rin loves anything that sparkles or that shines.
Dislikes:
-Being Treated like a lesser person
Luna HATES being treated like she's beneath someone else. Being born of the goddess Hera. She feels she needs to be treated like royalty and when someone treats her less, it really sets her off.
-Bitter Foods
Due to her love of sweets, she absolutely cannot stand foods that are bitter.
-Ugliness
She can't stand things that are obscene or ugly in the slightest. They completely disgust her.
-Gods
Rin has a pure hatred for her own mother, Hera as well as all gods. She hates them for casting her from their world and she despises her mother for not protecting her when Rin needed her.
Positive Characteristics:

  • High Society (+2): You know good manners and were trained to handle social interactions in noble circles. This is useful in requests involving members of the highest levels of society, such as monarchs, nobles, courtiers, lords and ladies, and high-ranking clerics.
    Explanation: You are capable of having threads with nobles. Those without this feat cannot.
  • Appraise Magic Value (+4): Your ability to determine an item's worth and your knowledge of magic allow you to determine the exact properties of a magic item.
    Explanation: 10% discount at any item crafter.
  • Diligent (+2): Your meticulousness allows you to analyze minute details that others miss.
    Explanation: Reduces training cost of spells by 10% in word cost.

Negative Characteristics:

  • Greedy (-1): Money makes your eyes light up with joy. The more, the merrier, as long as it spends. Once in a while, whenever you're divvying up shares of the loot, being offered a hefty bribe, or catching wind of some fabulous treasure, the flaw can to convince you to grab for as much money as possible.
    Explanation: You may act differently when money comes into play.
  • Proud (-1): You don't like accepting help from others. If a gift or offer of aid smacks of charity or pity even the slightest bit, you grow indignant and refuse it.
    Explanation: You win 10% less jewels from wheel spins.

  • Judgmental (-1): You form opinions quickly and change them very slowly. You also have a tendency to judge people on their appearance. A man dressed as a pirate, no matter how gentlemanly, is a scoundrel and a dog as far as you is concerned. A man covered in mud is a peasant, and a woman wearing revealing clothing is a prostitute.
    Explanation: You must act very disgusted and displeased when your dislike comes into play.

  • Intolerance (-1): You have an irrational dislike of a certain thing. It may be an animal, a class of person, a situation, or just about anything at all. Note that some dislikes may be too trivial or ridiculous to count--a dislike of Bavarian-crème-filled donuts or mechanical pencils, for example, has no real dramatic value and will not be allowed.
    Explanation: You must act very disgusted and displeased when your dislike comes into play.
  • Arrogant (-1): You firmly believe that you are better than anyone else is. Your ideas are the best, your clothes are the most stylish, and you have to let everyone else know how much better you are. Once in a while you openly show contempt or disdain for someone else.
    Explanation: You must at least act arrogant one out of five posts.
  • Night Blindness (-2): Your night vision isn't worth squat, due to a physiological deficiency. This is due to a birth defect, and therefore cannot be healed by any means.
    Explanation: During night time in threads, or facing someone who uses Dark Magic, you have a hard time seeing more than 10 meters in front of you.
  • Overconfident (-1): Nothing is beyond your capabilities. If you wanted, you could defeat the best swordsman in the world; you just haven't had any reason to do so yet. And surely that chasm isn't too wide for you to leap across.
    Explanation: You are easily goaded, and anyone attempting to taunt you will succeed.


MAGIC

Magic: Evocatio Cristallum Magic
Type: Caster
Classes: Offensive, Defensive, Supportive
Element: Multiple Elements
Description:
Evocatio Cristallum Magic is a summoning magic, in which the mage makes a contract with the spirits of the different crystal and gem realms. These contracts that are made between mage and spirit, give the contractor the power to summon those spirits to help aid them in any situation, combat or non combat.

The spirits are summoned by the contractor by writing runes either in the air, or on the ground. For the stronger spirits, the contractor must recite a short incantation while drawing the runes in order to invoke the contract and activate it.

Each spirit that is contracted to the mage, has a different power as well as some using different elements, making this magic very powerful and versatile.
Weaknesses:
-Incantations for higher ranked spirits leave caster open to enemy attack
-Weak against; earth and metal.
-If incantation is stopped somehow, the higher ranked spirits will not be summoned


HISTORY

History:
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2~Rin Moriyama~ Empty Re: ~Rin Moriyama~ Thu Apr 28, 2016 11:29 pm

Adlet Brave

Adlet Brave
Hey, I love your FC and your app is really amazing. A couple things.

-The color of you guild tattoo


-Also I am unsure about the multi element for your magic. All beginner magics are 1 element. But let me make sure on that

3~Rin Moriyama~ Empty Re: ~Rin Moriyama~ Fri Apr 29, 2016 2:18 am

Sayuno

Sayuno
Hey there, Yuno here.

First of all, Multi Elements Magics are indeed not a thing. According to the description of your magic, your element would only be "Crystal" anyways, so please change that. Also don't forget to take the multi elemental part out of your description.

Also "Supportive" is not a magic class. We have either Healing or Supplementary - it's gotta be one of those two. Please choose!

Furthermore, you have the trait "Intolerance" - I need you to state behind the trait in brackets what your character is intolerant towards!

As for the whole half god thing, we never had that case yet so idk how that will work and if it will work. If its not a problem I'll inform you soon! Until now, please make all the changes and bump your app when finished.

Edit: You can only be human, sorry. So you gotta change your whole history for that.

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