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1Old App Empty Old App Fri Feb 12, 2016 6:39 pm

Valiance Ayatsu

Valiance Ayatsu

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   "So it begins."
   

GENERAL INFORMATION

Name(s): Aknaid Kuraikage
Nickname(s): "The Insect"
Age: Unknown
Gender: Male
Birthday: October 31
Sexuality: Straight
Rank: D
Guild: Ellipse Haven
Tattoo: Back of head
Face Claim: N/A

APPEARANCE

Height: 5'10"
Weight: 163lbs
Hair: N/A
Eyes: Red/Black
Description: Scaly yet metallic. Aknaid's skin and composure is that of a beetle or a snake. It is something reflective yet matte. It is an armor made and grown to protect the heart that Aknaid reveals to those close to him. His hands have something of claws or knives for fingers. However, in spite of this they do not cut or slice those that Aknaid himself does not wish to harm.

PERSONALITY

Personality: Aknaid is a silent type of creature. He prefers to watch and observe before going out to explore. When encountered he appears to be a rather threatening thing with spikes and other intimidating things on his body. In reality he is a kind soul who wants nothing more to learn. He will gladly read a book to you if you asked. Because of this, he is known as "Father Aknaid" to some. When in battle he is seen as a blood thirsty mutant would would gladly rip your spine from your body if he got the chance. He will do anything to ensure the safety of his family and his friends. He can be very insensitive, he doesn't know when to stop joking but he usually doesn't mean what he says about you. But when he gives you a compliment he really means it. He thinks that when you say something good about someone you better mean it. But saying bad things should be a joke unless that person deserves it. And he is misunderstood because of this, he is thought to be evil even. In battle, he does his best to stay levelheaded. Though, much to his displeasure when people point it out, Aknaid can get reckless. He prefers to fight alone though will give little or no protest to someone who joins in with him. Despite enjoying to be dominant, battle is one of the few places where he highly doesn't mind nor care about being the leader. He does mind being pushed to the sidelines somewhere and would protest loudly against it. If he feels that his opponent has no sense of battle rules in their mind, he'll do her best to not follow the rules of battle also. He'd like the battlefield to be fairly even, but even Aknaid knows that can not be possible all the time.
Motivations: Aknaid wants to protect those that see that the world is corrupt and will fight to cleanse the world.
Fears:
- Dirt, he fears germs and disease.
- Ignorance, he finds it both insulting and fearsome. For it is those that have no education that submit themselves into the darkness
Likes:
- Food
- Ramen
- Reading
- Quiet places

Dislikes:
- Chaotic Villains
- Fourth Horseman (Rival)
- Chaotic Heroes
- Loud places
Positive Characteristics:

  • Regeneration (+4),
  • High Society (+2),
  • Alertness (+2),
  • Blindsight (+4),

Negative Characteristics:

  • Branded (-2),  
  • Judgmental (-1),
  • Intolerance (-1), [Rudeness]
  • Harbinger of Ill Omen (-1), [???]
  • Disfigurement (-2),
  • Insanity:Generalized Anxiety Disorder (-3),
  • Dark Secret (-1), [His past]
  • Amnesia (-1)


MAGIC

Magic: Art of Mummification
Type: Caster
Element: N/A
Description: Aknaid had been taught a skill of preserving bodies for later use in the future with Necromancy. After years upon years of preserving bodies, he learned how to preserve his own. Through this he watched mages grow skilled in elements, while his own magic grew stronger in its own way.

The Art of Mummification is based on the sudden alteration of Aknaid's body. What it does it manipulate, create and destroy his very being. It could extend his reach to far distances, but however would tear his arm off in the process. He could create tentacles from his chest, at the cost of exposing his vital organs. The magic is what makes Aknaid appear non-human, and in many ways less-than or even more-than human. This magic is how he earned the name "Aknaid" a shortened title of the spider species.


HISTORY

History: Aknaid was born into life where his end, nor beginning was defined. This is had become a fact due to a mishap with a mage who controled time travel. His father was known to many, both the living and the dead as "The Demon of Life". His father's children all grew to fill his role in some way, shape, or form. Aknaid was known as the "Demon of Time." He earned this name by growing up without ever really knowing his father. In his world, the Demon of Life died when he was just a child. After years upon years of research, Aknaid found a way to go back in time... to save his father from his demise... Only then did he learn what his father died protecting... him and his mother. After he suffered the wounds from the same thing that killed his father, the time's paradox trapped Aknaid within his own past. Because of this, his past self was wiped from existence, and his present self took the child's place. This is how he lost his childhood.

But despite being called Demons, (of both time and life) he is not a demon. Aknaid's father was a Possessed Spirit, and his mother the daughter of the Sun God. Because his father was born a human, but later changed into a spiritborn, and his mother that of a god, Aknaid was born a human, but after discovering his own magic, became the first full "Fallen Spirit". By being a fallen spirit, Aknaid is as equal unholy as holy. He is both devil and angel, dead and living. He is the equal being, both of light and darkness. This does not change who he is on the inside, it only effects how he is seen by the gods and demons of the world. He is simply just a boy... with a family that has one hell of a reputation.

So Aknaid met his father for the first real time in his life. He smiled to his mother who was much younger than he remembered. And his father told him, "Just as you have saved me, I will save you." His father told him a great deal of stories and myths about his family. It was the first time Aknaid ever spoke with him, so he listened inventively. "There was a land called Fiore, it was there I met your mother, and found myself. I think you would find a great story to tell if you ever go there." Aknaid took his father's words to heart. He wasn't sending him away, but rather wished he could have given him a childhood worth telling. Aknaid knew this, and asked for the location of the world. His father handed him a medallion from that world, and told him that he would find his way with that. Aknaid took up the time portal again and passed through it.


And with this he traveled into a new world... one that his father remembers but does not live.

The world of Fiore.



Last edited by Valiance Ayatsu on Sun Feb 14, 2016 5:58 pm; edited 3 times in total

2Old App Empty Re: Old App Fri Feb 12, 2016 6:47 pm

Naga


Since this has no work in progress tag I shall give it a quick review:

  • Please get an appearance image
  • You may only use up to twelve points for positive characteristics
  • Question: So your magic is a body modification magic and its weakness is exposing certain parts of your body while modifying other parts?

3Old App Empty Re: Old App Fri Feb 12, 2016 6:54 pm

Valiance Ayatsu

Valiance Ayatsu
I only put that image up temporarily while I edited.

I think my points are fine now, but I may have miscounted.

And the magic is kind of like take over, only that if leaves the body damaged after use, and weakens the area between the transformed, and nontransformed area. (Leading to the "disfigured" trait)

4Old App Empty Re: Old App Fri Feb 12, 2016 7:32 pm

Valiance Ayatsu

Valiance Ayatsu
Nvm, going to make a different character instead of using my old one. Going to edit this later.

5Old App Empty Re: Old App Sat Feb 13, 2016 1:15 pm

Hikaru Nakamura

Hikaru Nakamura
Is this finished? Or a WIP?

6Old App Empty Re: Old App Sun Feb 14, 2016 5:58 pm

Valiance Ayatsu

Valiance Ayatsu
Just archive this please, or do whatever.

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