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Maddox Ryuho · 1 Maddox Ryūho's Starter Spells Sat Jan 10, 2015 12:49 pm

Maddox Ryuho

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Elemental Martial Art: Huolong

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Name: Dispel Flames
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 15
Requirements: Elemental Martial Art: Huǒlóng
Class: Supplementary
Element: Fire

Cooldown: 2 Post Interval

Duration: Instant

Effect: Maddox clasps his hands and stretches them to the side in the face of incoming fire. This produces the effect of dispelling the oncoming flames to the sides with his own fire, diverting them from him and diminishing the risk of being burned. The arms can be employed in a circular motion to quell the flames to let them die. This can be done up to B-Rank Fire-element spells. This spell can also be performed with one hand/arm should the situation call for it

Name: Fire Stream
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 5
Requirements: Elemental Martial Art: Huǒlóng
Class: Offensive
Element: Fire
Cooldown: 1 Post Interval

Duration: Instant

Effect: Maddox simply strikes forward with a fist, kick or other strong direct body gesture to produce a 5x5 meter stream of blue fire which causes severe first degree burns and causes a 5x5 meter explosion upon hitting a target, as per the nature of Elemental Martial Art: Huǒlóng. It advances at 5m/s

Name: Flame Jab
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 5
Requirements: Elemental Martial Art: Huǒlóng
Class: Offensive
Element: Fire

Cooldown: 1 Post Interval

Duration: Instant

Effect: Maddox, whilst performing jabs and punches, produces miniature 1x1 fireballs and 1x4 missiles of flame, which deal severe first degree burns and 5x5 meter explosions upon impact. Up to five can be fired at once, each one counting as 1/5 of a D-Rank, or one singular jab can be launched

Name: Rage Flame
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 5
Requirements: Elemental Martial Art: Huǒlóng
Class: Offensive
Element: Fire

Cooldown: 1 Post Interval

Duration: One post charge before usage

Effect: Maddox makes an "X" formation with his arms and releases blue fire from his body outwards for five feet in all directions before spending an entire post increasing their heat and compressing their size to form back to his right or left arm. After a post he strikes forward to a target, releasing a 1x1 meter blast of blue fire which actually creates a 10x10 meter explosion and severe first degree burns. Heavy fatigue is the consequence of such a skill

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Name: Wanyudo
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 5
Requirements: Elemental Martial Art: Huǒlóng
Class: Offensive
Element: Fire

Cooldown: One Post Interval

Duration: Instant

Effect: Should for some reason Maddox gets his opponent's body airborne, he himself will ascend into the air and spin around in half a second before stopping where his feet are pointed towards the target, launching a massive 5x5 meter fireball that has a 5x5 meter explosion upon impact. Severe first degree burns follow

Aoi Mitsurugi · 2 Re: Maddox Ryūho's Starter Spells Wed Jan 14, 2015 3:37 pm

Aoi Mitsurugi

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Maddox Ryūho's Starter Spells Box210

Hello Madox, I'll be grading your magic!

So for Dispel Flames, you will need to edit the spell to only be able to affect C rank or lower flames as it's supplementary, not defensive. Please also increase the cooldown to a 3 post interval.

For Fire Stream, just add the distance in which this spell goes.

Flame Jab seems alright.

Rage Flame I will need you to add a speed to this spell, a primary distance the spell travels, and add this spells "charging" can be stopped if hit by a spell. Add a speed to this spell and the distance of 5 meters.

If Wanyudo is a spell you plan to solely use on someone in th air, you will have to add that to the requirements. Otherwise I suggest you make it a flashy spin and just launch the flames in said direction. Like the others, add a speed to this spell and the distance of 5 meters.

Bump when edited.

1 Maddox Ryūho's Starter Spells Sat Jan 10, 2015 12:49 pm

Maddox Ryuho

2 Re: Maddox Ryūho's Starter Spells Wed Jan 14, 2015 3:37 pm

Aoi Mitsurugi

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