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1Ren Shikami Empty Ren Shikami Sat Nov 01, 2014 3:17 am

Ren Shikami

Ren Shikami

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   "Can it be shocking that I would be using lighting?"
   

Name(s): Ren Shikami
Nickname(s): Renny
Age: 16
Sex: Male
Birthday: X765
Sexuality: Stright
Class: Scout
Alignment:Chaotic neutral
Rank: D-Class
Guild: Raven Tail
Guild Tattoo: Back of the neck, Dark blue in color
Face Claim: Jace Shikami-Drawing

II. APPEARANCE

Height: 6'4
Weight: 173pounds
Hair: Dark blue
Eyes: Dark blue
General Appearance: Ren has a body set up like a regular student that goes to school. His body is not finely toned. His body is quite fit though, even though it dosn't show it. His body structure is long a thin. His hair is thick and finely combed. His clothing is like a school students, a dress shirt with jeans and a tie. He also wears a diffrent out fit from time to time, which is a dress shirt jeans and a Black jacket. His clothing don't change if weather where to hit, the most he does if it rains is pull out an umbrella. His strides while walking are long and rushed, like he is in a hurry.
Extra: nothing

III. PERSONALITY

Personality: Ren is a impatient boy who has a strike for telling lies and being a thief. He finds excitement in stealing, though he usually gives it back by saying" I found some one selling this and I believe it is yours." Ren is a nice boy over all though, usually skirting around the truth as he lies, trying not to tell the whole truth when he is forced to. He also try's not to lie about things he has done in the past, thought this causes some trouble. He dose lie about his past though, especially his dark secret. His ability to lie is stronger than he thinks of it. He also has a powerful ability to skirt the truth of his lies. He can also Interrogate people with a surprising efficiency, and he can find truth in others lies. He is also impatient, in which his magic shows is influence. Influenced by his magic he can have a complete personality change going form his usual self to a never forgiving, cruel fool. When he is like this he is usually more likely to shoot before he asks questions. This can be caused by anyone bringing his past to the present, and his powers seem more wild when he is in this state.
Likes:

  • the dark



  • excitement


  • curry



  • Rain

Dislikes:

  • Cake[


  • Being bored


  • His past


  • Snowy days

Motivations: Ren's past drives him to not fail, as well as his sister who is in need of being cured.Fears:

  • Failing his sister, by not helping find her a cure


  • His past catching up to him.

Positive Traits:

  • Agile (+3): You are particularly flexible and poised.
    Explanation: You can dodge an attack up to B Rank, so long as it is feasible for you do to so (AoE excluded). Usable once per thread.


  • Deceitful (+2): You have a knack for disguising the truth. Your lies are difficult to distinguish from the truth.
    Explanation: Players must roll a bronze die. Failure to land on a number results in inability to detect the lie.


  • Nimble Fingers (+2): You are adept at manipulating small, delicate objects. This involves things such as a small mechanics and locks.
    Explanation: Capable of picking all locks except magically sealed items.


  • Stealthy (+3): You are particularly good at avoiding notice. You could be sitting somewhere in a thread at a bar and people wouldn't even notice that you were there.
    Explanation: You are able to blend into a crowd, and those entering threads cannot initiate conversation with you until you speak or state your presence in an obvious matter by doing something that draws the attention of others.

Negative Traits:

  • Curiosity (-1): You're a naturally curious person and you find mysteries of any sort irresistible. In most circumstances, alas, your curiosity overrides your common sense. This forces you to investigate something unusual, even if it looks like it might be dangerous.
    Explanation: You will walk deeper into the forest you have never been before. You won't turn around from the castle that you have never seen. This can result into getting you into very dangerous situations.


  • Bad Reputation (-1): You have a reputation that angers or frightens people. Examples include being unlucky, petty, or cruel. The rep may or may not be accurate, but in either case, word travels faster than you do.
    Explanation: You can't communicate easily with non player characters. Somehow they've heard of you and the things they've heard weren't too good. (Thievery.)


  • Branded (-2): You have fled for a crime committed and now have a prominent brand. You may have been a criminal, a slave, or some other such illicit individual. The brand is such that it cannot be easily covered, and a cursory search reveals it each time. Law enforcement agents of any lawful land will immediately take you into custody if they see the mark, for extradition or imprisonment. It is your choice as to whether or not you were falsely accused of the crime.
    Explanation: You have a visible sign on your body that can not be hidden. This sign reveals itself clearly when you are in the presence of Rune Knights which will allow them to freely arrest you. Every time you get arrested you must pay a fine to the local authorities to get out. Resisting arrest will result into a larger fine.( mark is on he back, and is 3 inches in length and height.


  • Dark Secret (-1): You have some sort of secret that, if revealed, would make you an outcast amongst your society and companions. While this secret is on your mind at all times, it will come up in topics only once in a while, but when it does, watch out!
    Explanation: You must think about your dark secret at least one out of ten posts. When things that are relevant to the dark secret are brought up you can't stop thinking about it.( murdered a couple for no apparent reason)


  • Dependent (-3): You have a ward or charge that depends on you, usually a young child or elderly relative that needs you to provide for them and devote at least part of your time to them. In money terms, this will cost you five percent of your jewels a month. You may also be required to stay near home often in case you are needed.
    Explanation: You will be placed on a list and at the end of the moment five percent of your jewels will be deducted.


  • Merciful (-1): For a villain, you have a terrible weakness--you don't like to hurt people. Given the choice, you'd rather exile your deposed brother to another country than do him in. Whether this is because you want him to live knowing that you beat him, or whether you just have a small soft spot down in your heart somewhere, the result is the same: your enemies keep coming back again and again.
    Explanation: You are unable to ever kill someone, NPC or otherwise. This means Requests that specifically request slaying a beast or person cannot be done by you.


  • Star-crossed (-1): You keep falling in love with the wrong people. You're the common soldier who falls in love with the king's daughter at first sight, or the hero who falls for the villain's daughter without knowing who she is.
    Explanation: You fall in love with every enemy you meet (that's your specie).

IV. MAGIC
Magic: Lighting Dragon Slayer
Holder or Caster: Caster
Description: Ren's magic courses though his body, allowing his to manipulate lighting and give him self buffs from the lighting. A aura can be formed to a speed buff. The magic helps allow the user control lighting and it can be formed to anything he needs to use. His powers can be wild, and is not accurate but is powerful. The magic is able to absorb other lighting sources that then can be launched back, or it can be stored to revitalize his own ability's. The magic can be charged up and released to hit a larger target.
Strengths:Can be applied as buffs to the user, and can be shot out like a bullet from the casters hands. It can also take forms in a variety of ways. This magic can be redirected as well, or channeled though objects. Highly effective against water.
Weaknesses: lighting can be countered by earth and rubber. Any thing that can help nullify electricity can be used against the user of this magic, it can also be stopped if the user is un able to think straight since the magic needs the users concentration In order to redirect the wild burst of power. The magic is also difficult to channel and usually harms the user.
V. HISTORY
History: As a young boy Ren was given as a sacrifice to the lightning dragon, who was feared by a village, because of ancient legends. The dragons power over lighting scared the villagers and they made the decision to give they baby over to the dragon, and two years later they gave another child up as a sacrifice to the dragon. The children where kept alive somehow by the dragon. As the children grew the dragon nurtured them.

At the age of 10 the dragon taught the children all he could before he had to leave, and he left at the break of dawn, leaveing the children asleep. Though in the time the children grew, the dragon taught them both some magic, he taught Ren how to channel Lighting, and the Girl how to summon and control lighting. Ren showed promise with his magic but the dragon payed more attention to the girl. It would sit there observing the girl all day during there training sessions. Ren was so obsessed for trying to become the best to gain the dragons attention, back then, but when he woke up and the dragon was gone, he realized just oh much he was being thought of, it was just the girl was younger.

Ren and the girl set off to explore when the dragon never came back. They wanted to see the world, and be able to help others, and to make a living. They knew what to do when they grew older, they both would become powerful wizards in a guild. The two practiced every day when they explored, but then one day the girl got sick. Ren not knowing what to do, grabed her and slung her over his back to take her to the nearest village. When he got the village he rushed to the hospital crying and shouting for help. The girl he now thinks of as a sister was sick and he needed to save her. Sadly he was broke though, but the hospital kept the girl alive but never finished the treatment. Instead they wanted the jewels to pay for the rest of the procedure. In order to do this Ren decided to go steal from the Rune Knights, try to steal a set of rune knight armor and a few of there weapons I order to sell them for money. As he attempted this though he was caught and was branded after fighting back killing 2 Citizens. The brand now burn on his skin, and his thievery never stopped. He continued to steal, but only from nobles. From this he has a past he never wants to know, and after killing a mother and a child to escape from the Rune Knights. He was branded a criminal and was never allowed to join a guild.

After six years of thievery and dishonesty, Ren found a guild he could join, a illegal guild, one that was not bound by the contracts the legal guild where bound by. This guild was Raven Tail. From this guild Ren has Vowed to save his sister and to erase his past by becomeing the most famous thief the world has every known.



Last edited by Karlgv on Sat Nov 01, 2014 10:49 am; edited 2 times in total

2Ren Shikami Empty Re: Ren Shikami Sat Nov 01, 2014 10:24 am

Elizabeth Silvershield

Elizabeth Silvershield
Hey there Ren. All edits that need to be made you can find in the list below.


  • Your first image is broken. Please fix that.
  • Fix your birth year. If you want to be 16, you should change your birth year to X765.
  • Expand your personality, please. The minimum amount of words you must have is 200 and you have 100.
  • In your Negative Traits; Please state what is your character's bad reputation.
  • State what is your brand in your negative traits.
  • State which is your secret.
  • Please expand your magic description, and explain more in depth what it consists of exactly.



Bump when corrected. And by the way, you wrote Raven Tail with an accent mark.

3Ren Shikami Empty Re: Ren Shikami Sat Nov 01, 2014 10:53 am

Ren Shikami

Ren Shikami
Super bumping man!

4Ren Shikami Empty Re: Ren Shikami Sat Nov 01, 2014 11:00 am

Elizabeth Silvershield

Elizabeth Silvershield
Well done. I'll get an admin to change your username so it can fit your character's.

Approved.

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