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1Jace hiragana Empty Jace hiragana Sun Oct 19, 2014 9:55 pm

Jace Hiragana

Jace Hiragana

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   "There's no need to fight, I'm here to set things right."
   

Name(s): Jace Hiragana
Nickname(s): Earth boy
Age: 17
Sex: Male
Birthday:X764
Sexuality: Bi-sexual
Class: Mystic
Alignment:Neutral
Rank: D-class
Guild: Fairytail
Guild Tattoo: Right shoulder-Dark green in color
Face Claim: Jace-Drawing

II. APPEARANCE

Height: 6-5
Weight: 167 pounds
Hair: Long and darkish green.
Eyes: Green
General Appearance: Jace is a slim built person. He wears a brown trench coat over a white tee shirt. He also wears a pair of glasses which are prescription. He wears a pair of brown and green tennis shoes, and ankle high socks. He also wears light brown pants. Jaces usually walks calmly and taking his time, even when he should hurry. But when he finds a reason worthy of walking urgently he takes long strides. His jacket has a few patches and is a button up jacket. Jace has Green hair and he usually combs it to a neat fashion.
Extra: a extra pair of glasses.

III. PERSONALITY

Personality: Jace has a unique personality built up from long times of being with the father he was raised by. He has a outstanding amount of patience, and can sit for hours watching this go on, or sit of days on end waiting for something to happen. He also has a tendency to fall asleep at a moments notice.  His patience helps him control his emotions, though being able to not get as easily as upset.  It takes a lot of patience and determination to make Jace mad, or to even annoy him. The only known trigger for his anger is when some one is injured. He usually has a happy face to him and is talkative, he even talks in his sleep.  Though that, he can also hear and understand people though his sleep allowing for communication. This is caused by his mind when he is asleep is still conscious, but more so to the point in which people think he might be awake. He also can remember everything he dreams about. He is also not easy to scare, unless you put him over the air or sea.  When it comes to other people Jace can be a bit talkative and seems to speak to much when with new people. This is a habit that was produced when he learned about other people. He is polite to strangers and friends alike.
Likes:

  • solid ground


  • snow


  • plant


  • underground

Dislikes:

  • the sea


  • flying


  • violence


  • impatience

Motivations: Jace wants to explore the world and solve the problems of nature, as well as helping keep the peace between people.
Fears:

  • the ocean


  • flying

Positive Traits:

  • animal affinity:+2:Self explanatory.


  • Breath control:+3:You may hold your breath for 3 posts


  • diligent:+2:Reduces training cost of spells by 10% in word cost.

Negative Traits:

  • hydrophopia(phobia of water):-3:Character is unable to face anything that has it's fear. If you're afraid of spiders and someone uses spider magic, you flee.


  •  Aviophobia:-3:Character is unable to face anything that has it's fear. If you're afraid of spiders and someone uses spider magic, you flee.


  • intolerance:-1:You must act very disgusted and displeased when your dislike comes into play.{Impatient people}


  • Trusting (-2): You don't like to believe that other people are capable of misleading and lying to you. After all, people are basically good, right?


  • Tongue-Tied (-1): This disadvantage comes up whenever you try to discuss anything of importance and relay pressing information and such. You have the tendency to incorrectly state facts, forget or mix up names, and generally say the wrong thing.
    Explanation: Every time you try to explain something to someone, you mix up names, leave things out, and jump around the timeline of how things happened.


IV. MAGIC

Magic: Earth dragon slayer
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: earth dragon slayer magic is a lost magic allowing the user to posses the abilities of a earth dragon.Channeling the earth into his body, a Jace can manipulate it and Cover his body with it. He can also make earth work on his favor, making pillars of walls. He can also control sand. He eats earth to replenish vitality.
Strengths: coverage of body. Ability to form pillars or walls, also able to be breathed out as rocks or dirt and sand. Earth dragon slaying magic is strong and helps keep the user safe as well as the users friends. The spells used are not common to most earth users, for they can breath sand and rock, as well as form structures and other things from the earth it self. Most who have seen a earth dragon slayer don't believe it till they use there magic. The earth is very common so it's easy to replenish them selves.
Weaknesses: earth dragon slayer magic comes with the elemental weakness. Earth magic is slower but stronger than regular earth magic. It is sturdier than most earth magic but a water Mage that knows how to use there magic effectively can take down a earth wall, and a water dragon slayer can cut though it like it was paper. The earth magic is easy to get around as well because it's not infinite. The sides of a wall can be scaled as well as used as a weapon for opponents.Is naturally weak Against water and air.

V. HISTORY

History: For what Jace was concerned, the dragon was his father. The dragon found Jace when he was around 5 years old. After starting at the boy for a few hours he turned and left, leavening the boy to fallow if he desired. The boy during these hours was terrified, a giant scaly beast starting at him, piecing his mind together as he fallowed the dragon. He didn't understand why, it was terrifying!  As the dragon neared it's cave, which sunk older ground, Jace stopped and stared at the opening gasping as he tried to see all the way down. The dragon turned and looked at him and then continued down. The boy took that as a invitation to fallow him into his home. As they descended the cave became steeper and steeper. Intill he was sliding down the side almost passing the dragon as it walked.

As they reached the bottom Jace was panting his arms and legs bleeding and his cloths tattered form being ripped by rocks and sand. At that moment the dragon took the child in, making him the dragons child. As Jace grew up the dragon taught him how to speak read and write. Taught him patience and wisdom, and after a few years of teaching the boy everything he could, the dragon vanished. Jace spent a year waiting for the dragon to come back. He ate berries rabbits as he waited, he also studied the remains of the dragons book collection. After the year Jace decided to leave, in search for others like him.

A few years of traveling and getting to know the forests, he finally found a town. The town seemed to have people in it and something called a wizard guild. At this point Jace was 14 and was believe in nothing could stop him. He found out that a guild was a place where strong wizards would go and get jobs for money to buy cloths and other things. After a year of hanging around the town, being a farmer boy on the out skirts, Jace finally decided to go to the guild. This guild was......Fairy Tail.

When he first joined he was frightened, so many people able to use magic, and no one to control them. It was overwhelming him, the caos and the noise. He got so used to the wild and the peaceful sound of nature. Humans are a interesting species for sure. Jace decided that the inky way to fit in was to earn there respect, so he tried to take on a mission and sadly had to come back after barely complete ing a D-Class mission.



Last edited by Jace on Wed Oct 22, 2014 4:41 pm; edited 8 times in total

2Jace hiragana Empty Re: Jace hiragana Mon Oct 20, 2014 9:28 am

Elizabeth Silvershield

Elizabeth Silvershield
Hello, Jace. All the corrections you need t o do in your app can be found in the following list;


  • Please expand your Personality. The minimum amount of words you must have is 200, and you currently have 188.
  • Bulletpoint each of your Likes, Dislikes, Motivations, Fears, Positive and Negative traits individually, please.
  • Explain each of your positive and negative traits. The explanation of each you can find here.
  • In your magic's description, you state that you consume earth in order to replenish mana. Please replace Mana with Vitality. Here, Slayers can't consume their element in order to replenish their mana.
  • Please expand your history. The minimum amount of words you must have is 400, and you have 359.


Bump when corrected.

3Jace hiragana Empty Re: Jace hiragana Mon Oct 20, 2014 7:45 pm

Jace Hiragana

Jace Hiragana
Fixed it. Hope it's ok.

4Jace hiragana Empty Re: Jace hiragana Tue Oct 21, 2014 8:12 am

Elizabeth Silvershield

Elizabeth Silvershield
Still a few corrections need to be made. As before, you can find them in the list below;


  • Please bulletpoint your Likes, Dislikes, Fears, Motivations and Special Characteristics using the code.
    Code:
     [list] [*] [/list]
  • Please use the explantion provided for the special characteristics right here.


Bump when completed. Also, your username will be changed to Jace Hiragana once you get approved, since your username must fit your character's name.

5Jace hiragana Empty Re: Jace hiragana Tue Oct 21, 2014 10:29 pm

Jace Hiragana

Jace Hiragana
Bump bump bump

6Jace hiragana Empty Re: Jace hiragana Wed Oct 22, 2014 7:52 am

Elizabeth Silvershield

Elizabeth Silvershield
Still a few more thinga that require treatment.


  • I don't want to sound picky or anything, but you can still make your list code better. You are doing this;

    Code:
     [list]

     [*]
     Plants

     [/list]

    I suggest you do this;


    Code:
    [list]

     [*] Plants

     [/list]


  • In Your Negative Traits; Multiple fears Count as -3 still. Not as -6. And please put the name of the actual special characteristic, which is Phobia in this case. You can keep your 2 phobias, but you have to add another negative trait.

  • State what your character is intolerant towards in your negative traits.

7Jace hiragana Empty Re: Jace hiragana Wed Oct 22, 2014 4:34 pm

Ardere Kasai

Ardere Kasai
Throwing my two cents in here if you dont mind Lizzy.

-Add a bit more to your appearance.

-Earth magic is weak to water and air.

Bump when done :P

8Jace hiragana Empty Re: Jace hiragana Wed Oct 22, 2014 4:42 pm

Jace Hiragana

Jace Hiragana
Bump bump bump

9Jace hiragana Empty Re: Jace hiragana Wed Oct 22, 2014 4:44 pm

Ardere Kasai

Ardere Kasai
Looks good, approved.

10Jace hiragana Empty Re: Jace hiragana Sat Nov 01, 2014 12:56 pm

Kazuki Kobayashi

Kazuki Kobayashi
In accordance with the rules, you cannot have limited magics on two accounts. You have been caught trying to do this. You are blacklisted from a limited magic until you have the 2,500 points it costs to remove you from said list.

Change your magic.

11Jace hiragana Empty Re: Jace hiragana Sat Jan 10, 2015 3:49 am

Elizabeth Silvershield

Elizabeth Silvershield
Hello, you have Two weeks to complete or bump this app before it is archived.

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