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1Kyo's Other Spells [Done] Empty Kyo's Other Spells [Done] Fri Oct 17, 2014 2:12 pm

Kyo Nullbuild

Kyo Nullbuild
Name: Manticore
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 20mp to activate. 10mp per post to maintain.
Requirements: Manticore soul
Class: supplementary
Element: none
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: 3 posts
Effect: Kyo's arm becomes covered in golden fur and his hands become tipped with claws capable of dealing C-rank damage. In this form Kyo's strength is increased to C-rank.

Name: Tekkai
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 20mp
Requirements: Golem soul. Golem form must be active.
Class: defensive
Element: iron
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: instant
Effect: Kyo holds his golem fists up in front of an incoming attack and remains perfectly still just before impact. This allows for Kyo to use his arms like a shield against any attack up to 1 B-rank spell.

Name: Golem
Rank: B
Magic Cost: 30mp to activate. 15mp per post to maintain.
Requirements: Golem Soul
Class: Supplementary
Element: iron
Cooldown: 3 posts
Duration: 4 posts
Effect: Kyo's arms transform into giant metal hands that Kyo can use for offense as much as defense. The transformation reaches up to his shoulders and his extended palms measure out to just over 4 ft. in length. In this form Kyo's endurance is increased to B-rank.

Name: Cursed Form
Rank: B
Magic Cost: 30mp to activate. 15mp per post to maintain
Requirements: Nullbuild Curse
Class: supplementary
Element: non3
Cooldown: none
Duration: Until the bracelet is put back on or until magic pool is depleted.
Effect: Upon having his bead bracelet removed, Kyo undergoes an extremely painful, disgusting and involuntary transformation that affects his only his arms at this point. Once the transformation is complete, Kyo's speed is increased to B-rank and his hands are now tipped with large claws capable of dealing up to B-rank damage.



Last edited by Kyo Nullbuild on Sat Nov 01, 2014 3:15 pm; edited 2 times in total

2Kyo's Other Spells [Done] Empty Re: Kyo's Other Spells [Done] Thu Oct 23, 2014 10:00 am

Kazuki Kobayashi

Kazuki Kobayashi
These have not been forgotten, and will be reviewed once your Starter Spells are approved!

3Kyo's Other Spells [Done] Empty Re: Kyo's Other Spells [Done] Fri Oct 31, 2014 8:31 am

Kazuki Kobayashi

Kazuki Kobayashi
Hi, I'll be grading your spells!

Durations: Please see the buffing section of the magic rules for durations. Every sustain has a set duration based on the rank of the spell. The only exception to this rule is ReQuip (which has no sustain cost) and Dragon Force.

Frogman: C Rank spells cannot grant a B Rank speed buff. Please fix this. Please see the rules for Take Over, as C Rank Take Over spells only allow the transformation of a single full limb. Two feet count as two separate limbs.

Tekkai: There are no differences, i.e. You can't use a C Rank spell to block up to B Rank damage of an A Rank attack and still take B Rank damage. C Rank barriers / shields cannot stop an A Rank attack. Please fix this.

Golem: Please state exactly how big these hands are. This spell also seems to be granting two buffs at once. Please choose either a strength buff or an endurance buff.

Cursed Form: Approved.

Bump when edited.

4Kyo's Other Spells [Done] Empty Re: Kyo's Other Spells [Done] Fri Oct 31, 2014 6:11 pm

Kyo Nullbuild

Kyo Nullbuild
Bump! Thanks for your help!

5Kyo's Other Spells [Done] Empty Re: Kyo's Other Spells [Done] Sat Nov 01, 2014 10:53 am

Kazuki Kobayashi

Kazuki Kobayashi
Your durations are still broken. Please see the magic rules, and look under the buffing magic section. All spells have a set duration based on rank, and "until dismissed" is not allowed.

6Kyo's Other Spells [Done] Empty Re: Kyo's Other Spells [Done] Sat Nov 01, 2014 3:17 pm

Kyo Nullbuild

Kyo Nullbuild
Alright I think I got it. Let me know what else needs to be changed! Bump!

7Kyo's Other Spells [Done] Empty Re: Kyo's Other Spells [Done] Sat Nov 01, 2014 3:19 pm

Kazuki Kobayashi

Kazuki Kobayashi
Approved for training. Link back when complete.

8Kyo's Other Spells [Done] Empty Re: Kyo's Other Spells [Done] Sat Nov 15, 2014 2:19 pm

Kyo Nullbuild

Kyo Nullbuild
http://www.natsudragneel.com/t3029-the-beast-and-the-dragon-training-kyo
Trained!

9Kyo's Other Spells [Done] Empty Re: Kyo's Other Spells [Done] Sat Nov 15, 2014 3:46 pm

Ardere Kasai

Ardere Kasai
Your training is approved

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