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1Poison Dragon Slayer Magic starter magic Empty Poison Dragon Slayer Magic starter magic Thu Nov 06, 2014 3:59 pm

Ben Willows

Ben Willows
Name: Poison Kick!
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: Poison Dragon slayer magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Poison
Cooldown: 2
Duration: Instant
Effect: Poison surrounds the user  left or right leg. He then lungs himself at his opponent and does a devastating D-rank damage blow to the chest. Poison does no damage.

Name: Poison bite!
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: Poison dragon slayer magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Poison
Cooldown: 2
Duration: Instant
Effect: Poison fangs appears around his teeth, he then bites his opponent. The damage is D-rank and poison doesn't do damage.


Name: Boost of the poison dragon
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: Poison dragon slayer magic
Class: Supplementary
Element: Poison
Cooldown: 4
Duration: Instant
Effect: A magic circle appears beneath his feet. A poison blast boosts him 5 meters into the air. He's jumping 5m/s.

Name: Poison blast!
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: Poison dragon slayer magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Poison
Cooldown: 3
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user aims his hand at his target. The poison beam then blasts at his opponent coming at 10m/s doing D-rank damage. The beam is 1 meter in length and 2 meters in width.

Name: 5 hit combo
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 20
Requirements: Poison dragon slayer magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Poison
Cooldown: 3
Duration: Instant
Effect: Poison magic covers both of his legs and arms. He rapidly hit his opponent with a 5 hit combo. After he is done with the combo, the C-rank damage is now in affect. Any hit below 5 results in D Rank damage.



Last edited by Ben Willows on Thu Nov 06, 2014 8:04 pm; edited 5 times in total

Kazuki Kobayashi

Kazuki Kobayashi
I'll be grading these!

First off, you only get 4D and 1 C for starter spells. Any booster spells you may have for reaching B rank are to be done after your initial Starters are approved for use and in a separate topics.

Make those edits for further instruction. Bump when you have done so.

Ben Willows

Ben Willows
Edit it bump

Kazuki Kobayashi

Kazuki Kobayashi
Alright. Please take a look at the rules found here. They will help you with the changes requested.

Poison Kick: Please state that this does D Rank damage at most. Also state that the poison does no additional damage.

Poison Bite: Please state that this does D Rank damage at most. Please state that the poison does no additional damage.

Flight of the poison dragon: Note that this is not a flight spell, and cannot be maintained. Flight is an A Rank ability. State how fast this raises you into the air.

Yummy: Read over the Slayer Rules found here. This spell is not needed.

15 hit combo: 15 hits is too much for a C Rank ability. Please low the number. Additionally, note that combo blows like this do not do spell rank damage with each hit, as a full hit (all hits of the combo) results in the overall damage equaling the spell rank.

Bump when edited.

Ben Willows

Ben Willows
Edit it bump

Kazuki Kobayashi

Kazuki Kobayashi
Boost of the poison dragon: Remove the duration, and make it instant. Also change it from MPH to m/s, or rather, meters a second.

Poison blast!: State how big this blast is. Also change the speed same as the previous correction.

5 hit combo: State that any hit below 5 results in D Rank damage.

Bump when edited!

Ben Willows

Ben Willows
Edit it bump

Kazuki Kobayashi

Kazuki Kobayashi
Boost of the poison dragon: The duration still needs to be lowered to instant. Also, 15 m/s is too fast for a D Rank spell. Lower it.

Bump when edited!

Ben Willows

Ben Willows
Edit it bump

Kazuki Kobayashi

Kazuki Kobayashi
Boost of the poison dragon The max distance of a D Rank is 5 meters. Please lower it to this, as well as the speed to 5 m/s. Bump when edited!

Ben Willows

Ben Willows
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Kazuki Kobayashi

Kazuki Kobayashi
Looks good. Starters approved.

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