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1Extra rank spells Empty Extra rank spells Mon Aug 04, 2014 8:33 am

Masuke Kagami

Masuke Kagami
Rank extra Spells

Name: Poison blade
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10 mp and 5mp for extra posts
Requirements: Poison Dragon Slayer
Class: offensive
Element: Poison
Cooldown: 3 posts
Duration: Sustained for up to 2 posts
Effect: The user covers one of the user's arms in poison extending out with a sharp point similar to that of a blade. The arm can be used to cut and slice the opponent, and must be sustained by the user. The blade is 1 foot extended from the user's arm. The blade can deals average cuts and slices to the body, but nothing major.

Name: Poison Kick
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10 mp
Requirements: Poison Dragon slayer
Class: Offensive
Element: Poison
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user creates a foot generating from their leg made from poison, and uses the foot to strike the opponent dealing bruises to the opponent, and knocking the opponent back by a meter. It is two meters in length.

Extra rank spells Poison_Dragon%27s_Scale
Name: Poison Shots
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 20 mp
Requirements: Poison Dragon slayer
Class: Offensive
Element: Poison
Cooldown: 3 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user's arms becomes scaly like a poison dragon, and the user claws to generate rapid firing shots in the shape of scales at the target. They are 2 feet in height as well as width. They can travel up to five meters before dispersing, and when all of the shots hit they cause deep bruises on impact. When all the shots hit they also cause a C rank strength Debuff for 2 posts. 10 shots are fired in one instant.

Name: Hike!
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 20 mp
Requirements: Poison Dragon slayer
Class: Offensive
Element: Poison
Cooldown: 3 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user gets in a football position like a quarterback, covers their entire body in poison magic, and then propels themselves at the target with their fist out striking the target. It deals deep bruises and the user can travel up to four meters before it dispels. The target receives a C rank speed Debuff for 2 posts.

Name: Poison Wave Fist
Rank: B
Magic Cost: 30 mp
Requirements: Poison Dragon slayer
Class: Offensive/Supplementary
Element: Poison
Cooldown: 4 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user covers both their fists in poison magic, and charges at the opponent with their fists attacking in a fast barrage. The fists deal minor fractures as well as internal bruises to the opponent when they all connect. The target is struck 30 times by the fists, and when the target is hit by all of them, the target receives a B rank sight debuff for 2 posts.

Name: Poison Mist
Rank: B
Magic Cost: 30 mp and 15mp for extra posts
Requirements: Poison Dragon slayer
Class: Supplementary
Element: Poison
Cooldown: 3 posts
Duration: Up to 2 posts sustained
Effect: The user releases a mist from their mouth that stretches over 20 meters, it causes a B rank smell debuff. It can disorientate the victims, distract them, or even irritate them. The user is not, however, affected by the mist.

Name: Poison Dragon's destruction Roar
Rank: A
Magic Cost: 40 mp
Requirements: Poison Dragon slayer
Class: Offensive
Element: Poison
Cooldown: 4 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user concentrates an intense amount of poison into both of their arms, and brings them together near his mouth to create a large concentration of poison magic. The user blasts the potent blast at the target from his mouth, and when it strikes it causes deep internal bruising as well as serious bone fractures. It is ten feet in every dimension concerning size. The target receives a A rank endurance debuff for one post.

Extra rank spells Poison_Dragon%27s_Guard
Name: Poison Defense
Rank: A
Magic Cost: 40 mp
Requirements: Poison Dragon slayer
Class: Defensive
Element: Poison
Cooldown: 6 posts
Duration: Sustained up to 5 posts
Effect: The user conjures from their body a large shield to defend against attacks that stays in front of him until destroyed. It can be destroyed by 1 s rank, two A rank, and so on. The shield is sustained by the user, and is eleven feet in every dimension concerning size. The user can create the shield up to 25 meters away.



Last edited by Masuke Kagami on Tue Aug 05, 2014 7:11 pm; edited 4 times in total

2Extra rank spells Empty Re: Extra rank spells Mon Aug 04, 2014 8:34 am

Masuke Kagami

Masuke Kagami
bump ready for review

3Extra rank spells Empty Re: Extra rank spells Tue Aug 05, 2014 1:27 am

Jabo Devine

Jabo Devine
Poison Blade: Bump cooldown up to 3. How much damage does the blade do? Specify if it will create one or two blades.

Poison Kick: Take out the spell speed.

Poison Shots: Change the duration of the spell to instant. You will not be able to fire 40 projectiles with a C-Rank spell, let alone on two different occasions with the ability to change the direction of said projectiles. That would be defeating the purpose of having a cooldown in this particular case. Take out the spell speed. State an exact amount of shots that would be fired.  ALL of the shots have to hit to do a full C-Rank debuff as well as deep bruises, add that in there. How long does the debuff last?

Hike!: Increase the cooldown to 3. Take out the spell speed. How long does the debuff last?

Poison Wave Fist: Take out the spell speed. If you want to use this for more than one post then the duration wouldn't be instant. How many punches are in the barrage? State that they receive the Debuff after you're completely done with the barrage. All of the punches would have to hit for the full effect of both the debuff and damage to be applied. How long does the debuff last?

Poison Dragon's destruction Roar: Take out the spell speed. How long does the debuff last?

Poison Defense: How long can the spell be sustained? 'Magics weak to the poison will require 2 S rank and three A rank to destroy the shield.' take that out. How far away from the user can the shield be created?

4Extra rank spells Empty Re: Extra rank spells Tue Aug 05, 2014 6:55 am

Masuke Kagami

Masuke Kagami
bumpe edited for review

5Extra rank spells Empty Re: Extra rank spells Tue Aug 05, 2014 6:12 pm

Jabo Devine

Jabo Devine

Poison Shots: State an exact amount of shots that would be fired. They must all be fired in one instance.

Hike!: Take out the spell speed.

Poison Wave Fist: 'and 15mp for extra posts' take that out.

Poison Defense: Bump the cooldown up to 6.

6Extra rank spells Empty Re: Extra rank spells Tue Aug 05, 2014 6:47 pm

Masuke Kagami

Masuke Kagami
bump completed again

7Extra rank spells Empty Re: Extra rank spells Wed Aug 06, 2014 5:18 pm

Jabo Devine

Jabo Devine
Approved.

8Extra rank spells Empty Re: Extra rank spells Wed Aug 06, 2014 9:47 pm

Masuke Kagami

Masuke Kagami
training for poison dragon's destruction roar
http://www.natsudragneel.com/t2565-a-poison-dragon-slayer-s-roar-training-private#15085

9Extra rank spells Empty Re: Extra rank spells Sat Aug 09, 2014 9:47 am

Scarlet Thunder

Scarlet Thunder
Training of the Poison Dragon's Destruction Roar has been approved.

10Extra rank spells Empty Re: Extra rank spells Sat Aug 09, 2014 6:30 pm

Masuke Kagami

Masuke Kagami
training for poison Wave fist and Hike

http://www.natsudragneel.com/t2567-poison-dragon-s-power-training-solo#15142



Last edited by Masuke Kagami on Sun Aug 10, 2014 9:58 am; edited 1 time in total

11Extra rank spells Empty Re: Extra rank spells Sun Aug 10, 2014 9:48 am

Kazuki Kobayashi

Kazuki Kobayashi
Denied for the second training. All training must be completed within the same thread, and the spell must be used.

12Extra rank spells Empty Re: Extra rank spells Sun Aug 10, 2014 9:54 am

Masuke Kagami

Masuke Kagami
fixed

http://www.natsudragneel.com/t2565-a-poison-dragon-slayer-s-roar-training-private#15176

13Extra rank spells Empty Re: Extra rank spells Sun Aug 10, 2014 10:01 am

Kazuki Kobayashi

Kazuki Kobayashi
Added Hike and Poison Wave Fist to your profile. Continue your training.

14Extra rank spells Empty Re: Extra rank spells Thu Aug 21, 2014 1:36 pm

Masuke Kagami

Masuke Kagami
training for poison mist
http://www.natsudragneel.com/t2565-a-poison-dragon-slayer-s-roar-training-private

15Extra rank spells Empty Re: Extra rank spells Thu Aug 21, 2014 1:38 pm

Ardere Kasai

Ardere Kasai
approved and added

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