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Shinzo Tama

Shinzo Tama
Name: Hikin Kasai (Simple fire)

Rank: D

Appearance: This weapon takes the form of a hiltless katana, the blade it's self is 73cm long, single edged and weighs only 1.2 kilograms even with the addition of a gun mechanism. The back of the blade is dark red whist the front is a orangey red reminiscent of fire. It has a long, but slim barrel down each side which is loaded just above the handle.
Spells:
Name: Echo bullet
Class: D
Range: Max 10m
Speed: 4-8 m/s
AoE: 3x3 m2
Type: Offence
Magic: Requip
Element: Fire
Effect: Shinzo fires two bullets from the gunblade, these two bullets quickly replicate to cover a wide area , it covers 1 m2 after 1.5 meters, 2 m2 after 3 meters and 3 m2 after 4 meters. However, the bullets themselves are only capable of causing mild cuts and bruises on the enemy.
Cooldown: 1
Points:9


  • Damage: 1/5
    Speed: 2/5
    Size: 1/5
    AoE: 3/5
    Range: 2/5
    Duration: 0/5


Name: The fiery trio
Class: D
Range: Self
Speed: No speed
AoE: 0
Type: Supplementary
Magic: Requip Magic
Element: Fire
Effect: Hikin is set ablaze with with two jets of fire emitting from the hilt at 20 degree either side of the blade. These jets of fire can cause second degree burns but are incapable of doing anything else
Cooldown: 4
Points:9


  • Damage: 3/5
    Speed: 0/5
    Size: 3/5
    AoE: 0/5
    Range: 0/5
    Duration: 3/5



Name: Fire jumper
Class: D
Range: 5 meters
Speed: 8-12 m/s
AoE: 0
Type: Supplementary/offensive
Magic: Requip
Element:Fire
Effect: The user generates a stream of fire reaching upto 5 meters behind the blade, it is primarily used for propulsion but it is also capable of causing second degree burns.
Cooldown: 2
Points:9


  • Damage: 3/5
    Speed: 3/5
    Size: 1/5
    AoE: 0/5
    Range: 1/5
    Duration: 1/5


Name: Flame twister
Class: D
Range: 0
Speed: 4-8 m/s
AoE: 0
Type: Offensive
Magic: Requip Magic
Element: Fire
Effect Shinzo places the points the blade towards his left foot and emits a stream of fire  from the hilt which spirals down the blade, this fire then spirals around Shinzo (10cm away from his body) obscuring approximately 45% of him. This cannot stops attacks but it will cause burns to meele attackers.
Cooldown: 4
Points: 9

[list]
[*]Damage: 3/5
Speed: 1/5
Size: 2/5
AoE: 0/5
Range: 0/5
Duration: 3/5

Name: Blade arrow
Class: D
Type: Offensive
Magic: Requip Magic
Element: Fire
EffectThe barrels on the gun fold out and the blade is released and set ablaze. The user can then fire the blade at the enemy. This will automatically return to the user.
Cooldown: 1
Points: 9

[list]
[*]Damage: 3/5
Speed: 3/5
Size: 1/5
AoE: 0/5
Range: 2/5
Duration: 0/5

Strengths: It is a very balanced weapon which can be used at all ranges, it's magic is also very diverse allowing it to adapt to most situations other than those where fire is ineffective.

Weaknesses: It is rather lacking in attack power due to it's rank and relies heavily on fire making it ineffective against water and ice.



Last edited by Shinzo Tama on Fri Jul 11, 2014 1:51 am; edited 3 times in total

Shinzo Tama

Shinzo Tama
Bumping this thread.

Warren Dent

Warren Dent
Fix your templates, add cooldowns to all spells. See guide.

Name: Hikin Kasai
Not about to look up what a hira zukuri is, state all the information about how the blade looks in terms of its blade specs. You can find blade specs online but you're going to need them. So do that. If it is a gunblade make that very clear.

Name:  Moeru you na sutookaa
You say that like they should be able to do a 180 degree turn in general. Anyway no homing projectiles. Its basically a autohit at higher levels due to the speed amount. If they aren't homing as much as I think then you really need to specify what you mean by mild homing. You'll never get full homing. Especially when you put things like "harder to dodge". So you need to either scrap this spell or explain it out in so much detail that no one misunderstands what it does.

Name: Toripuru kasai
But? But what? Did you forget what you were trying to say? Fix that. Plus the spell is too vague.

Name:Saidai no han
Spell is too vague. I don't even comprehend how it works. What does recoil have to do with propulsion in this instance? What exactly is being propelled? Wouldn't the recoil have a drawback? In terms of how guns work at least? I can't even fathom what you mean with this technique. More detail. If you're trying to say it speeds up your spells you need to reword it, and explain how that is possible.

Name:Kasai houyou
Approved, after you fix the template.

Name: Bureedo aachaa
It really might as well be automatic, we don't use that measurement of time here in terms of fighting. So fix that. This will be approved when you add in the specs for the blade like I mentioned above.

Shinzo Tama

Shinzo Tama
Made the amendments, sorry it was a bit sloppy before I must have been half asleep.

Koloktos Ghirahim

Koloktos Ghirahim
I'll approve these, but if you start doing some odd shit with it I'll revoke it. Approved.

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