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1Vladimir Okosan's Starters  Empty Vladimir Okosan's Starters Sun May 18, 2014 1:09 pm

Vladimir Okosan

Vladimir Okosan
Name: Blood Forgery
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: Blood Manipulation Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Blood
Cooldown: 3 post
Duration: 5 posts
Effect: A stream of blood flows from Vladimir's chest and into his hand forming a solid blood-red weapon of his choice, this weapon can only do D-rank damage.


Name: Sanguine Seuche
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: Blood Manipulation Magic
Class: Defensive
Element: Blood
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: 1 post
Effect: Vladimir raises his arms into the air as a stream of blood that comes out of his arms is vaporised into a mist that surrounds and protects him from 1 incoming C-Rank attack and 2 D-Rank attacks, after the attack is blocked the blood mist will be destroyed.

Name: Osmosis
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: Blood Manipulation Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Water
Cooldown: 4 post
Duratoin: Instant
Effect: Vladimir places his right palm on the ground, as his palm is on the ground particles of blood are released from his body, the blood particles form red blood cells the size of a balloon. Vladimir then clasps his hands together causing the water levels in the red blood cells to decrease, this decrease in water levels cause the blood cells to burst dealing damage.

Name: Hypertensive Crisis (180+)
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 20
Requirements: Blood Manipulation Magic
Class: D
Element: Blood
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: Vladimir charges up a ball of blood in his hands and increases it's pressure causing it to be dense and glow bright red, he then fires the ball of blood from his hands at 10 m/s dealing C-Rank damage to the enemy. Vlad can only fire one ball of blood.



Last edited by Vladimir Okosan on Wed May 21, 2014 6:40 pm; edited 2 times in total

2Vladimir Okosan's Starters  Empty Re: Vladimir Okosan's Starters Sun May 18, 2014 1:17 pm

Inzei Mishima

Inzei Mishima
Blood Forgery:
- Spells can be either offensive, defensive or supplementary, not two of the three, or three of the three. Change it to either just a shield or weapon. If you choose shield, state that it can block 2 D-Rank spells and 1 C-Rank spell. If you choose weapon, state that it does D-Rank damage.

Sanguine Seuche:
- State that it can block 1 C-Rank spell or 2 D-Rank spells before being destroyed.

Osmosis:
- One element.
- Word this better. Not really sure what you're trying to do here.

Hypertensive Crisis (180+)
- Remove where it says you can only fire five balls of blood. You only shoot one ball of ball with your spell.
- Give it a definite speed.



Last edited by Noah Starkk on Tue May 20, 2014 1:42 pm; edited 2 times in total

3Vladimir Okosan's Starters  Empty Re: Vladimir Okosan's Starters Sun May 18, 2014 6:42 pm

Vladimir Okosan

Vladimir Okosan
Le Bump

4Vladimir Okosan's Starters  Empty Re: Vladimir Okosan's Starters Tue May 20, 2014 1:49 pm

Inzei Mishima

Inzei Mishima
Apologies, just a few more adjustments.

Sanguine Seuche:
- Miscommunication on my part. 1 C-Rank spell AND 2 D-Rank spells.

Hypertensive Crisis (180+):
- 120m/s is too fast for even a S-Rank spell. Reduce this significantly. 7-10m/s sounds about right.

Everything else is approved.

5Vladimir Okosan's Starters  Empty Re: Vladimir Okosan's Starters Sun Jun 08, 2014 4:11 am

Sayuri

Sayuri
Hello, you have one week to finish this application or it will be archived.

6Vladimir Okosan's Starters  Empty Re: Vladimir Okosan's Starters Tue Jun 10, 2014 8:46 pm

Vladimir Okosan

Vladimir Okosan
Ah, sorry. I forgot to bump but the Spell app is now finished. I've made the final adjustments.

7Vladimir Okosan's Starters  Empty Re: Vladimir Okosan's Starters Wed Jun 11, 2014 11:06 am

Inzei Mishima

Inzei Mishima
Approved.

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