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1Yitian's Starter Spells Empty Yitian's Starter Spells Tue Jun 10, 2014 7:47 am

Yitian Zuniga

Yitian Zuniga
Name: Crash field
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 20 mp.
Requirements: Crash Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: None
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 6 Posts
Effect: User will send a burst of crash magic forwards to try and throw the target off its feet, it can be blocked by a D-ranked shield or technique.

Name: Crash Blast
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10 mp.
Requirements: Crash Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: None
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 3 Posts
Effect: Will send a blast of Crash Magic towards the target in a circle with a diameter of 4 meter, which can bruise the target, it has a 5 meter range, can be blocked by a D-ranked shield or technique.

Name: Rolling Crash
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10 mp.
Requirements: Crash Magic.
Class: Offensive
Element: None
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Effect: Will send of a wave of Crash energy, anything catched in a 2 meter radius will be blasted back, can cause bruises and can be blocked by a D-ranked shield or technique.

Name: Crashing Attack
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10 mp.
Requirements: Crash Magic.
Class: Offensive
Element: None.
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 5 Posts
Effect: User creates a field of crash energy below the enemy to break the ground below, which could cause them to fall, this will not work on wet ground.

Name: Shatter Blast.
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10 mp.
Requirements: Crash Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: None
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 6 Posts
Effect: Will send out three blast of Crash energy which can cancel out another attack of the same power, if fired at the target itself it could cause bruising, all blasts have to hit to cancel out the attack, the same goes for the damage against the target itself.



Last edited by Yitian Zuniga on Tue Jun 10, 2014 8:23 am; edited 2 times in total

2Yitian's Starter Spells Empty Re: Yitian's Starter Spells Tue Jun 10, 2014 8:14 am

Kensei Murakami

Kensei Murakami
Kensei here, I'll be grading this.

Alright so for all of your spells, you will need to remove your 1 post duration because crash is an instantaneous magic. Meaning they are all used in the post of activation. Though it would be possible for you sustain an explosion of crash magic within a certain radius of yourself. In case you were wondering.

Yitian wrote:Name: Shatter Blast.
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 15 mp. <----- Change that to 10 mp.
Requirements: Crash Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: None
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 6 Posts
Effect: Will send out three blast of Crash energy which can cancel out another attack of the same power, if fired at the target itself it could cause bruising. <----- Please add that all three of the blasts must make contact to cancel out an attack, in addition to all three of them having to make contact with the target to deal full damage.

Bump when done.

3Yitian's Starter Spells Empty Re: Yitian's Starter Spells Tue Jun 10, 2014 8:16 am

Yitian Zuniga

Yitian Zuniga
Bump

4Yitian's Starter Spells Empty Re: Yitian's Starter Spells Tue Jun 10, 2014 8:18 am

Kensei Murakami

Kensei Murakami
Please remove the one post from the duration, and put "Instant" in it's place.

Bump when done.

5Yitian's Starter Spells Empty Re: Yitian's Starter Spells Tue Jun 10, 2014 8:23 am

Yitian Zuniga

Yitian Zuniga
Bumpez

6Yitian's Starter Spells Empty Re: Yitian's Starter Spells Tue Jun 10, 2014 8:24 am

Kensei Murakami

Kensei Murakami
Alright, everything looks good!

Start spells approved.

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