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1Inoko's Starters Empty Inoko's Starters Thu Apr 10, 2014 9:19 am

Inoko Sadismus


Name: Blut Sutoraika (Blood Striker)
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: Blood Slicer Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Blood
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: By generating a bit of blood with Blood Slicer Magic, Inoko can project up to 3 pressurized blood bullets of blood at high speeds at her opponents. They aren't anywhere as fast as a true gunshot, about 20 mph. A D rank spell can destroy this/these bullet(s) and a D rank shield can block them. This causes lighter bruising and a stinging pain if two or more bullets hit.

Name: Ketsueki Kochen (Bloody Boil)
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: Blood Slicer Magic, Bloody Ice not to be in use
Class: Offensive
Element: Blood
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: 4 posts
Effect: Having control over the temperature of the blood she produces and comes to a scalding temperature, however she must gradually change between temperatures so a bit of a cooldown is necessary. This technique causes light burning upon contact with the skin.

Name: Ketsueki Eis (Bloody Ice)
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: Blood Slicer Magic, Bloody Boil not to be in use
Class: Offensive
Element: Blood
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: 4 posts
Effect: Having control over the temperature of the blood she produces and comes to a chilly temperature, however she must gradually change between temperatures so a bit of a cooldown is necessary. This gives a numbing effect on the body of the target.

Name: Blutsauger (Bloodsucker)
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: Blood Slicer Magic
Class: Supplementary
Element: Water
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: Inoko stays true to her title of Raven Tail's Blood Countess by using this technique to heal small injuries up to D-rank by drinking the blood of her enemies, all she needs to use this technique is to lap up a drop up to a small stream of blood. She cannot however heal up to higher ranks by ingesting more, it will no matter what be a D-rank healing.

Name: Blutken (Blood Blade)
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 20
Requirements: Blood Slicer Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Water
Cooldown: 4 posts
Duration: 5 posts
Effect: Inoko generates enough blood and forms it in the shape of the weapon she wishes to creates and crystalizes the blood. It becomes a malleable source for weaponry so the user doesn't need to carry many weapons. It can be blocked by anything C rank and above as well as be destroyed by taking up to two d-rank hits and a single c-rank. This technique creates shallow lacerations into the flesh when in a bladed form and deep bruising when in a blunt form.



Last edited by Inoko Sadismus on Mon Apr 21, 2014 5:45 pm; edited 4 times in total

2Inoko's Starters Empty Re: Inoko's Starters Sat Apr 19, 2014 2:52 pm

Inoko Sadismus


finished

3Inoko's Starters Empty Re: Inoko's Starters Sun Apr 20, 2014 9:53 am

Aoi Mitsurugi

Aoi Mitsurugi
Hello Inoko!~ I'll be grading your spells today. However, for your starting spells you have to make your normal 4 D and 1 C rank before you can make these spells to train. I would keep these aside and work on your base spells first and bump when edited. Please and thank you!~

4Inoko's Starters Empty Re: Inoko's Starters Sun Apr 20, 2014 11:46 am

Inoko Sadismus


edited

5Inoko's Starters Empty Re: Inoko's Starters Sun Apr 20, 2014 12:19 pm

Aoi Mitsurugi

Aoi Mitsurugi
As a general note, all your spells can be clarified as Blood, rather than water. Please do change that!

Spell #1: -State how many bullets you fire.
-Also include a D rank spell can destroy this/these bullet(s) and a D rank shield can block them.

Spell #2: -Please make it so your blood either heats up or cools down.
-Having it both ways is two spells at once.
-Also include an actual duration number please.
-Include that this actual spell does not actually do damage.

Spell #3: I'm going to ask you change your spell entirely. This is a blood form of water body which is exclusively an S rank based spell.

Spell #4: Approved

Spell #5: -Change the duration to an actual post number. You can then take the durability of it and place it in the effect.
-Include the damage this spell can do and how it can be blocked.
-Increase the cooldown to 4 posts.

Bump when edited! Please and thank you!~

6Inoko's Starters Empty Re: Inoko's Starters Sun Apr 20, 2014 7:46 pm

Inoko Sadismus


edited

7Inoko's Starters Empty Re: Inoko's Starters Mon Apr 21, 2014 2:41 pm

Aoi Mitsurugi

Aoi Mitsurugi
Spell #1: Please include that if 2 or more bullets hit, you can cause D rank damage of bruising and slight stinging pain.

Spells 2 & 3: -Please state while one is active, the other cannot be used until the duration is over.
Ex. Cannot use blood boil until blood ice is over.

Spell #5: -Please edit the durability to 2 D rank spells and one C rank spell before it is broken.

Bump when edited.

8Inoko's Starters Empty Re: Inoko's Starters Mon Apr 21, 2014 5:45 pm

Inoko Sadismus


edited

9Inoko's Starters Empty Re: Inoko's Starters Mon Apr 21, 2014 5:58 pm

Aoi Mitsurugi

Aoi Mitsurugi
All approved. Spells will be added to your profile shortly.

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