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11st Batch Empty 1st Batch Wed May 04, 2016 5:54 am

Kaelyn

Kaelyn
Name: Overload
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: Static Genesis
Class: Offensive
Element: Lightning
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: Kaelyn creates an electrical charge after casting a spell, which is released in a burst (in a 5 m radius) on her next (usually physical) attack, dealing D-rank damage to anyone in range.

Name: Frost Spear
Rank: B
Magic Cost: 30
Requirements: Static Genesis
Class: Offensive
Element: Lightning
Cooldown: 4 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: Kaelyn generates a homing spear of lightning that is about 1.5 m in length towards her target from any point on her body. It can travel as far as 20 m from her and B-rank blunt damage.

Name: Plasma Field
Rank: B
Magic Cost: 30
Requirements: Static Genesis
Class: Offensive
Element: Lightning
Cooldown: 4 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: Kaelyn releases a single wave of energetic plasma from her body in circle that deals B-rank damage to enemy units caught in its path. The circle is 5 m in radius.

Name: Static Nova
Rank: B
Magic Cost: 30
Requirements: Static Genesis
Class: Offensive
Element: Lightning
Cooldown: 4 posts
Duration: Sustained
Effect: This spell creates waves of electrical energy around Kaelyn in a dome dealing B-rank damage to enemy units in a 5 m radius with Kaelyn being the center.

Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Overload
[b]Rank:[/b] D
[b]Magic Cost:[/b] 10
[b]Requirements:[/b] Static Genesis
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Element:[/b] Lightning
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Effect:[/b] Kaelyn creates an electrical charge after casting a spell, which is released in a burst (in a 5 m radius) on her next (usually physical) attack, dealing D-rank damage to anyone in range.

[b]Name:[/b] Frost Spear
[b]Rank:[/b] B
[b]Magic Cost:[/b] 30
[b]Requirements:[/b] Static Genesis
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Element:[/b] Lightning
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 4 posts
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Effect:[/b] Kaelyn generates a homing spear of lightning that is about 1.5 m in length towards her target from any point on her body. It can travel as far as 20 m from her and B-rank blunt damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Plasma Field
[b]Rank:[/b] B
[b]Magic Cost:[/b] 30
[b]Requirements:[/b] Static Genesis
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Element:[/b] Lightning
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 4 posts
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Effect:[/b] Kaelyn releases a single wave of energetic plasma from her body in circle that deals B-rank damage to enemy units caught in its path. The circle is 5 m in radius.

[b]Name:[/b] Static Nova
[b]Rank:[/b] B
[b]Magic Cost:[/b] 30
[b]Requirements:[/b] Static Genesis
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Element:[/b] Lightning
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 4 posts
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Effect:[/b] This spell creates waves of electrical energy around Kaelyn in a dome dealing B-rank damage to enemy units in a 5 m radius with Kaelyn being the center.

- 2D, 5C, 2B, 2A remaining.



Last edited by Kaelyn on Thu May 19, 2016 11:03 pm; edited 2 times in total

21st Batch Empty Re: 1st Batch Wed May 04, 2016 8:54 am

Uriël

Uriël
Honestly, can't find anything wrong with this. The ranges are stated as well as the damage, though I'm assuming none of these, although lightning, paralyze the opponent for a certain time?

31st Batch Empty Re: 1st Batch Wed May 04, 2016 11:16 am

Kaelyn

Kaelyn
No, I didn't mention that in any of the spell effects.

41st Batch Empty Re: 1st Batch Wed May 04, 2016 11:53 am

Uriël

Uriël
Juuust makin' sure. I don't see anything wrong with it, a mod'll approve this further for ya.

51st Batch Empty Re: 1st Batch Thu May 05, 2016 7:33 am

Sayuno

Sayuno
Overload

Okay, this could very much be an AOE so it would be good if you state that it does D-rank damage to one person, or all people who are within 5 m of you.

Frost Spear

Need to know what type of damage it deals (as in burns or physical damage) and how long the spear is.

Plasma Field

Okay, this is an AOE correct? If so, you need to reduce the size or the damage. The size for all aoe's is 10m diameter, 5m radius if it surrounds you in a circle. Thus for 20m is too far. Also, you didn't state how much dmg it deals, since this is B rank I'm assuming B rank dmg so yeah, reduce the size.

Static Nova

Same as with Plasma Fields regarding AOE. Also, state what type of dmg is does. Furthermore, please note that the sustain cost is 30mp and that the duration would be "up to 6 posts".

Your radius for this attack would be 5m as well.

61st Batch Empty Re: 1st Batch Thu May 05, 2016 9:00 am

Kaelyn

Kaelyn
Bumpity bump bump.

71st Batch Empty Re: 1st Batch Thu May 05, 2016 9:56 am

Sayuno

Sayuno
1st Batch KiOtOfN

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