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1The Ice Queen Shimmers [Magic]  Empty The Ice Queen Shimmers [Magic] Thu Feb 11, 2016 5:31 pm

Leo Halliwell

Leo Halliwell
The Ice Queen Shimmers [Magic]  Ace

"Let the Ice Queen Sing"

First Dance:


Second Dance:

Third Dance:

Fourth Dance:

Fifth Dance:

Creation Dance:
Earth Dance:



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2The Ice Queen Shimmers [Magic]  Empty Re: The Ice Queen Shimmers [Magic] Fri Feb 12, 2016 6:21 am

Leo Halliwell

Leo Halliwell
5 D-rank's and 2 C-rank spells completed

3The Ice Queen Shimmers [Magic]  Empty Re: The Ice Queen Shimmers [Magic] Fri Feb 12, 2016 9:22 am

Hikaru Nakamura

Hikaru Nakamura
Quick Check:

D-rank spells have a C-rank Cooldown
Foruth Dance: Frozen Blade: For the beginning don't open up with the spell allows the user to strike an opponent with a blade. Make it more like "When contact is made with the blade, this happens"

Fifth Dance: For the attack hitting the holy part it would really just depend on the size of the attack. a 3 meter fist is about half the size of a real life body.

Dragon Call: Make sure to add a sustain cost (10 MP per post it is out) Sustain is anything that doesn't happen immediately.

Ahh last spell is sick For the last and the first i'm waiting on debuff and paralysis rules

4The Ice Queen Shimmers [Magic]  Empty Re: The Ice Queen Shimmers [Magic] Fri Feb 12, 2016 9:59 am

Leo Halliwell

Leo Halliwell
Made the changes in description of Frozen Blade.
Edited the size of the fifth dance to a normal human fist.
Sustain cost put in to dragons call

I'm not sure what you mean by D-ranks have a C-rank sustain?

5The Ice Queen Shimmers [Magic]  Empty Re: The Ice Queen Shimmers [Magic] Wed Feb 24, 2016 6:55 am

Leo Halliwell

Leo Halliwell
Bumped now that buff/debuff rules are up

6The Ice Queen Shimmers [Magic]  Empty Re: The Ice Queen Shimmers [Magic] Fri Feb 26, 2016 10:05 pm

Rosencrantz

Rosencrantz
besides elemental affinity and other passive things, spells are only supposed to have a single ability. i.e. your first dance can only do ice things or whip things.

7The Ice Queen Shimmers [Magic]  Empty Re: The Ice Queen Shimmers [Magic] Sun Feb 28, 2016 12:53 pm

Leo Halliwell

Leo Halliwell
The extension of the ribbon is a part of the spell, it doesn't act like a whip, the ribbon wraps around the foes limb to freeze it. You say besides elemental affinity, the elemental affinity is ice the whole point is to freeze. The ribbon ability is an extension it does not damage, it causes no effect apart from being the medium in which the spell is channelled through

8The Ice Queen Shimmers [Magic]  Empty Re: The Ice Queen Shimmers [Magic] Sun Feb 28, 2016 7:58 pm

Rosencrantz

Rosencrantz
kk that was just an example, please go through all your spells to ensure each spell has a single function, and cannot be divided further into other spells.

o and try and make your spells suggest the level of damage they cause (i.e. your target might mitigate your damage by applying a defensive buff, etc.)

and, where you got spells like your ball crusher, could you describe the size of the fist/wtevr else is involved from your end too, pls

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