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1Inu Mustang's starter spells Empty Inu Mustang's starter spells Thu Feb 05, 2015 9:54 pm

Inu Mustang

Inu Mustang
Name: green flame shot
Rank: D
Magic Cost:10
Requirements: Green Flame Gun Magic
Class: offensive
Element: Fire
Cooldown: 2 post
Duration: instant
Effect: The user shoots a ball of green flames one meter in diameter. That has a range of five meters and travels five m/s. On impact it will cause light bruseing and cause first degree burns.

Name: flame vortex
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10 (5)
Requirements: Green Flames Gun Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Fire
Cooldown: 3 post
Duration: sustained(2)
Effect: The user fires a vortex of flame that is five meters tall and a meter diameter. that  surrounds the target in green flames. Making it so they cant move out of the vortex without receiving first degree burns. The spell deals D rank damage since if the target leaves the vortex the spell ends.

Name: Shotgun
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: Green Flame Gun magic
Class: offensive
Element: Fire
Cooldown: 2 post
Duration: instant
Effect: The user does a scatter shot of green flame magic with enough power that it will have knock back if hit of two meters. It also would cause first degree burns over a half a meter where it hit. Also deals light buriseing once its hit. It has a range of 5 meters and travels at 5 m/s.

Name: Flame javalen
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements:Green flame Gun magic
Class: offensive
Element: Fire
Cooldown: 2 post
Duration: instant
Effect: The user launches three flame spears that are a meter in length. Dealing 1/3 of the damage of d rank. But if all hit the target it would do D rank damage.

Name:  Green stream
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 20(10)
Requirements: Green Flame gun magic
Class: offensive
Element: Fire
Cooldown: 4 post
Duration: sustained(3)
Effect:  The user launches a stream of green flame at a target ten meters away at a speed of five m/s. When those are hit by this spell they will receive 2nd degree burns. and cost 10 mana to maintain the spell after the orginal cost.



Last edited by Inu Mustang on Wed Feb 11, 2015 1:34 pm; edited 2 times in total

2Inu Mustang's starter spells Empty Re: Inu Mustang's starter spells Wed Feb 11, 2015 10:41 am

Inu Mustang

Inu Mustang
ready to get looked at thanks

3Inu Mustang's starter spells Empty Re: Inu Mustang's starter spells Wed Feb 11, 2015 11:02 am

Elizabeth Silvershield

Elizabeth Silvershield
- Approved.

- If you want your spell to go on for more than 1 post, please state that it is sustained in the Duration section, and give it a maximum amount of posts it can go on for, which, in your case, considering your rank, would be 2. Then, state in the magic cost are the sustain cost as well, which is 5 MP Each post. State how big the vortex is, and that it deals D Ranked damage upon contact with it.

- State it deals D Ranked damage.

- The target can't recieve both dmaage and a speed debuff, since slowing them down is considering as a speed debuff. So please remove that part.

- If you want your spell to go on for more than 1 post, please state that it is sustained in the Duration section, and give it a maximum amount of posts it can go on for, which, in your case, considering your rank, would be 3. Then, state in the magic cost are the sustain cost as well, which is 10 MP Each post. State it deals C Ranked damage.

Bump upon completion.

4Inu Mustang's starter spells Empty Re: Inu Mustang's starter spells Wed Feb 11, 2015 12:49 pm

Inu Mustang

Inu Mustang
bump i think i fixed everything

5Inu Mustang's starter spells Empty Re: Inu Mustang's starter spells Wed Feb 11, 2015 1:02 pm

Elizabeth Silvershield

Elizabeth Silvershield
Magic Cost: 10 (5)

Duration: Sustained (2)

^ That is what I wanted you to do in the two sustained spells. So please fix that and Bump once corrected.

6Inu Mustang's starter spells Empty Re: Inu Mustang's starter spells Wed Feb 11, 2015 1:34 pm

Inu Mustang

Inu Mustang
bump i think i fixed what you wanted

7Inu Mustang's starter spells Empty Re: Inu Mustang's starter spells Wed Feb 11, 2015 1:59 pm

Elizabeth Silvershield

Elizabeth Silvershield
Approved.

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