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1White Lightning Demon Slaying Magic Empty White Lightning Demon Slaying Magic Thu Dec 11, 2014 6:04 pm

Knux Shi

Knux Shi
Description:The most Lost of all Slayer magics, Lightning Demon Slayer is the pinnacle of the element of lightning. The polar opposite of God Slayer, all sparks and bolts created by this magic are white in color, white the color of purity by which this magic's nature is derived.
Strengths: The versatility of this magic is unmatched by any other, allowing ridiculously powerful offensive capabilities as well as supplementary forms as well. This magic also allows a form of immunity to lightning, although it is only as powerful as the user himself. It is not until full power is achieved that total elemental immunity becomes reality. Like any other Slayer magic, the user is capable of consuming spells of the same element as well as nonmagical sources. Unlike other Slayer magics, however, Lightning Demon Slayer magic allows the consumption of any and all forms of lightning, including that of the Lightning Dragon Slayer or the Lightning God Slayer, but not vice versa, as users of other forms of Lightning Slayer magic cannot consume the lightning of a Demon Slayer. Upon consuming a spell of a lower form of lightning magic, the user is able to heal himself of one would per spell consumed, as long as said would is of a lower rank than the consumed spell. This magic, being lightning, is also elementally advantaged against water and ice magics.
Weaknesses: Being the most powerful form of Slayer magic, Lightning Demon Slayer magic does not induce the same weaknesses as other magics, not to say that it is without weakness. Even though it is Demon Slayer magic, it is also lightning magic and as such has an inherent weakness to metal and earth.




Name: Lightning Demon's Shock Wave
Rank: B
Magic Cost: 30 MP
Requirements: Lightning Slayer Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Lightning(White)
Cooldown: 4 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: A funnel shaped wave of lighting blast out of Knux's hands or feet that sends a violent shock of lightning into his target. If the target is Living(I.E. People animals and things of that nature) the shock wave sends a volt through out their body causing B ranked damage through out the body, then gives  the body of the target 2nd degree arcane burns.   Range reaches out to 20 meters, it travels at 12 meters per second. If the target is an object a powerful shock consume the object blowing it apart.(Object: a Door or something smaller then a 10mx10m  object) D

Name: Lightning Demon's Fist
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 20 Mp
Requirements: Lightning Demon Slayer magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Lightning(white)
Cooldown: 2 post
Duration: instant
Effect: The user punches the air, releasing a giant, high-speed lightning blast in the shape of a fist, which, upon contact with the target, generates a massive, sparking explosion. When the fist hits it becomes a static field which damages everything with B rank with in the 10 meter circle of the static field. Has a 10 meter range, travels at 12 meters per second. The fist itself is 1.5 meters tall and 2.5 meters wide. (Side effect of being struck by this attack is arcane burns of 1st degree.)

Name: Lightning Demon's Spear
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 20 Mp
Requirements: Lightning Demon slayer magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Lightning[white]
Cooldown: 2 post
Duration: instant
Effect: The user gathers lightning in his hand and creates a high concentration of electricity which he then releases in the form of an lightning spear extending from his hand. By concentrating the electricity into a spear like shape, ensures that the charge does not dissipate out too much as that would reduce the attack's potency. The spear is 8 feet long and travels at 10 meters per second.Upon hitting the target area it deals C rank damage and 1st degree arcane burns.

Name: Lightning Demon's Slam
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 20MP/ 10Mp sustain.
Requirements: Lightning Demon Slayer magic.
Class: Supplementary
Element: Lightning(white)
Cooldown: 4 post
Duration: 3 post
Effect: His body charges with white lightning increasing his speed allowing his body to move faster. Without this spell, the user can top out at about 10 m/s(D Rank), while with this spell they can go B Rank: Run 14 m/s, Dash 16 m/s. Can only dash once per post.

Name: Lightning Demon's Pull
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 20 MP
Requirements: Lightning Demon Slayer magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Lightning(White)
Cooldown: 2 post
Duration:Instant
Effect: Charging the target with a certain current of electricity that shifts their natural static  electricity into one that matches the wave of a near by metal drawing the two items together for 1 post.
Depends on the distance from the target and metal and the size of metal dictates the damage applied.

Name: Lightning Demon's Flash
Rank: B
Magic Cost:30 Mp
Requirements: Lightning Demon Slayer magic
Class: Supplementary
Element: Lightning(White)
Cooldown: 2 post
Duration:Instant
Effect: Charging his own body with enormous amount of lightning he flashes his body from one point to another with in 5 Meters of his last location. How this works is he zaps away with lightning, and zaps back to where he wants to be next. This DOESN'T Increase speed, however he does travel at spell speed. Meaning his movement isn't instant but rather at the spells speed which is 20m/s.

Name: Lightning Demon's Energizer
Rank: D
Magic Cost:10 Mp
Requirements: Lightning Demon Slayer magic
Class: Supplementary
Element: Lightning(White)
Cooldown: 2 post
Duration: Instant
Effect: Charging a body part with his white lighting, he increases the cell movement in that area increasing the heal process of either himself or another. The spell does D rank Healing able to restore minor damage taken from basic attacks.



Last edited by Knux Shi on Mon Dec 22, 2014 12:58 am; edited 4 times in total

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2White Lightning Demon Slaying Magic Empty Re: White Lightning Demon Slaying Magic Tue Dec 16, 2014 8:50 am

Elizabeth Silvershield

Elizabeth Silvershield
Okay Knux. To begin with; Please leave the description of your magic in white, as the Staff will make write it instead of you. I was willing to point out that you are missing your starter spells, so you should make them. Besides that, your Free rank spells are 2D- 2C- 2B. You have 3 C Ranks, so I'd like you to remove one of them.

Bump upon completion so that we can get to the real Grading.

3White Lightning Demon Slaying Magic Empty Re: White Lightning Demon Slaying Magic Tue Dec 16, 2014 2:18 pm

Knux Shi

Knux Shi
I'm transferring the same number of spells as I have now for new ones like ardere did. So I'd have 3C ranks. One from starter spells and two others from my B rank spells and one b. I may have to look to my old spells to double check but that's what's going on.

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4White Lightning Demon Slaying Magic Empty Re: White Lightning Demon Slaying Magic Tue Dec 16, 2014 2:34 pm

Ardere Kasai

Ardere Kasai
I can vouch for this.

5White Lightning Demon Slaying Magic Empty Re: White Lightning Demon Slaying Magic Wed Dec 17, 2014 12:50 pm

Elizabeth Silvershield

Elizabeth Silvershield
I cannot grade your spells now, Knux, as you don't have the magic description. Magic descriptions for banned magic (God Slayer, Demon Slayer, etc.) are made by the staff, not the players, and thus, you will have to wait for a staff member to make the description of your magic so that you can adjust your spells to it.

6White Lightning Demon Slaying Magic Empty Re: White Lightning Demon Slaying Magic Sat Dec 20, 2014 10:45 pm

Tali Zorah

Tali Zorah
Assuming you have not gotten extra spells through Jewels or Points, you should have 4D and 1C from starter spells, plus 2D 2C and 2B from bonus high rank spells. This would give you a grand total of:

6D, 3C, and 2B rank spells. Your magic has also been put into your application and have the official green light to make your spells.

7White Lightning Demon Slaying Magic Empty Re: White Lightning Demon Slaying Magic Sun Dec 21, 2014 12:24 am

Knux Shi

Knux Shi
Description Updated. Spells ready to be graded

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8White Lightning Demon Slaying Magic Empty Re: White Lightning Demon Slaying Magic Sun Dec 21, 2014 8:25 am

Elizabeth Silvershield

Elizabeth Silvershield
Okay, so let's get to grade this finally.

- Remove the paralyzing part, or reduce it to 1 post. Please give a maximum size to the objects that can be blown up by this spell, because, essentially, you could blow up a pen, but you could blow up a ship too, judging by your description.

- State the dimensions of the fist, state the speed at which it moves, and state how big the explosion is. Clarify if the explosion deals any damage, and state how much damage is dealt by the fist, and how much is dealt by the explosion if it does any. State the range of the spell. Remove the part in which you state that you can decrease the speed on contact.

- I'd say reduce the size to 8 feet. State how big the explosion is, how much damage is dealt and erase the part in which you state that you paralyze your opponents for a post.

- Remove the part in which you state that the target goes numb for a post, since your spell is a buff, and that is a debuff, and here, multi-purpose spells are not allowed. State that it is sustained in the duration section, and state the max. amount of posts it can go on for.

- State the speed at which you can move. Explain better the part in which you state that lightning strikes from him into the air, and then back down withing 5 m from your character. Is this an offensive ability? If that's the case; remove it, because that would make this spell a both buffing and offensive ability, and that is not allowed.

- Clarify that it can only heal D Ranked damage.

Bump upon completion.

9White Lightning Demon Slaying Magic Empty Re: White Lightning Demon Slaying Magic Sun Dec 21, 2014 12:56 pm

Knux Shi

Knux Shi
BUMP and changed

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10White Lightning Demon Slaying Magic Empty Re: White Lightning Demon Slaying Magic Mon Dec 22, 2014 12:48 am

Elizabeth Silvershield

Elizabeth Silvershield
- Approved.

- State the size of the fist please.

- Approved.

- Approved.

- Approved.

- Approved.

- Approved.

11White Lightning Demon Slaying Magic Empty Re: White Lightning Demon Slaying Magic Mon Dec 22, 2014 12:58 am

Knux Shi

Knux Shi
Sized up ty

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12White Lightning Demon Slaying Magic Empty Re: White Lightning Demon Slaying Magic Mon Dec 22, 2014 3:20 am

Elizabeth Silvershield

Elizabeth Silvershield
Approved.

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