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1Mio' starting magic  Empty Mio' starting magic Mon Nov 17, 2014 11:48 pm

Mio Hirasawa

Mio Hirasawa
Name: Lightning bolt
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10 MP
Requirements: Lightning magic
Class: Defensive/Offensive
Element: Lightning
Cooldown: one post
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user using lightning magic can make a lightning bolt come form the users hand. The Lightning bolt has a range of 5 meters and is 1 meter in width.

Name: Lightning cloke
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10MP
Requirements: Lightning magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Lightning
Cooldown: 3 post
Duration: 2 post
Effect: User makes tiny sparks of electricity around there body. Anyone that makes direct contact with them will take minor burns.

Name: Lightning run
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10 MP
Requirements: Lightning Magic
Class: Offensive/defensive
Element: Lightning
Cooldown: 2 post
Duration: 1 post
Effect:  The user is compressed and becomes a streak of lightning and travels in any direction he wishes within 5 meters. This can be used to run or for a attack doing D rank damage.

Name: Static cling
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10 MP
Requirements: Lightning Magic
Class: supplementary
Element: Lightning
Cooldown: 2 post
Duration: until dismissed
Effect: Lets user charge them self with electricity that allows you to climb walls and other thing with ease that most people can't. The spell cant climb anything above 5 meters high.

Name: Lightning Strike
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 15 MP
Requirements: Lightning Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Lightning
Cooldown: 2 post
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user summons down a 8x8 bolt of lightning that strike an opponent within 10 meters of them. The bolt deals C rank damage.



Last edited by Mio Hirasawa on Wed Nov 19, 2014 11:51 am; edited 5 times in total

2Mio' starting magic  Empty Re: Mio' starting magic Tue Nov 18, 2014 12:58 pm

Ardere Kasai

Ardere Kasai
You dont include your Cleric status in your magic app it only goes into effect when you actually use the spell. So just keep it normal until you use the spells.

-Give a range and width of the lightning bolt, take out the losing control bit.

-Make the duration a max of two posts.

-Do you stay the same size or do you get compressed?

-State you cant climb anything above 5 meters high.

-How large is the bolt?

Also: Did you copy Sion's spells? His name is in your spell. And a couple of your spells are similar. If you had his permission its no big deal, but if not Im going to have to warn you.

3Mio' starting magic  Empty Re: Mio' starting magic Tue Nov 18, 2014 3:18 pm

Mio Hirasawa

Mio Hirasawa
Sorry i forgot to put wip in the name the spells are not done well dump when ready

4Mio' starting magic  Empty Re: Mio' starting magic Wed Nov 19, 2014 11:52 am

Mio Hirasawa

Mio Hirasawa
Okay i have fixed the spell and yes i do have Sion's permission to sue the spells

5Mio' starting magic  Empty Re: Mio' starting magic Wed Nov 19, 2014 12:40 pm

Ardere Kasai

Ardere Kasai
Alright, looks good.

Approved.

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