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1Sammey's starter magic ~Done~ Empty Sammey's starter magic ~Done~ Mon Oct 20, 2014 1:57 pm

Sammey White

Sammey White
Name: Plow
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: Ice Make
Class: Offense or Supplementary
Element: Ice
Cooldown: 3 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: This spell creates a plow similar to a bulldozer 5 meters wide and 2 meters tall that rushes forward up to 5 meters. The plow pushing everyone or thing back in to 5 meters for when hit.

Name: Ice Slide
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: Ice Make
Class: supplementary
Element: Ice
Cooldown: 4 post
Duration: 1 post
Effect: User makes a slide out of ice it can go for as small as 5 meters tall.A speed boot Dash 12 m/s.

Name: Ice Shield
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: Ice Make
Class: defensive
Element: Ice
Cooldown: 5 post
Duration: 1 post
Effect: Creates a large 6 by 6 shield made of ice in front of her, whose shape is vaguely reminiscent of a flower, which shields everything behind it. It can endure up to 1 C-Rank spell or 2 D-Ranks before it is destroyed. C-Rank or high well destroy it in one hit.

Name: Ice Bow
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: Ice Make
Class: Offensive
Element: Ice
Cooldown: 3 post
Duration: 1 post
Effect: Creates a large bow out of ice, which can be used to shoot powerful ice arrows up to 5 meters at her targets at a mix speed of 10 m/s. the Arrows can be destroy by getting hit on the side or gets hit by fire magic. the bow can withstand up to 1 spell before it is destroyed. Arrows can deal D-Rank damage.Fire spells can destroyed it in one hit.

Name: Ice Sword
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 20
Requirements: Ice Make
Class: Offensive
Element: Ice
Cooldown: 3 post
Duration: 1 post
Effect: Creates a 1 meter sword out of ice for melee combat. The sword is very durable, being capable of cutting and parrying other weapons as if it were made of metal. the sword can be destroyed by 1 spell. The sword can deal C-Rank damage. Fire spells of same or higher lv can destroyed it.



Last edited by Sammey White on Mon Oct 20, 2014 7:29 pm; edited 5 times in total

2Sammey's starter magic ~Done~ Empty Re: Sammey's starter magic ~Done~ Mon Oct 20, 2014 3:13 pm

Kazuki Kobayashi

Kazuki Kobayashi
Please note that you have 5 D Rank spells. For starters, you are allowed 1 C Rank spell.

Ice Statue:
  • What exactly does this spell do? Please keep in mind that all spells have to have some sort of function in combat. Everyday uses like this are free to use without any MP.
  • D Rank spells all cost 10 MP to use. If you have the cleric class, you will deduct the 5 MP when you actually use the spell.


Ice Slide:
  • Increase the MP cost to 10.
  • What exactly does this spell do? If it increases speed when used, please look at the buffing spells under the magic rules section in the regulations.


Ice Shield:
  • Increase the MP cost to 10.
  • D Rank spells can only have a duration of one, I do believe. Please see the buff durations (as they pertain to all spells) under the magic rules in the regulations.
  • The maximum size of a D Rank spell is 5 meters. Please change this.


Ice Bow:
  • Increase the MP cost to 10.
  • The maximum range of a D Rank spell is 5 meters.
  • The maximum posts a D Rank can be sustained is 1 post. Please change this.
  • Because this is ice, fire of a lower rank would be able to destroy this. So if it was a C Rank, a D Rank fire spell could destroy this.


Ice Sword:
  • Increase MP Cost to 10.
  • The maximum amount of posts a D Rank can be sustained is 1. Please change this.
  • The maximum length / size of any D Rank spells is 5 meters.


Bump when the edits are made.

3Sammey's starter magic ~Done~ Empty Re: Sammey's starter magic ~Done~ Mon Oct 20, 2014 4:11 pm

Sammey White

Sammey White
ok i hope this is better ~Bump~

4Sammey's starter magic ~Done~ Empty Re: Sammey's starter magic ~Done~ Mon Oct 20, 2014 4:19 pm

Kazuki Kobayashi

Kazuki Kobayashi
Plow:

  • Remove the speed, as we do not use them here.
  • What does this do when it hits them?


Slide:

  • The maximum range you could slide is 5 meters, as is the maximum size of the slide. Please change this.
  • Use the speed buff, for how fast you move on the slide. It would be D Rank, since this is a D Rank spell. It is under buffs in the spell rules contained within the regulations.


Change all of your durations, as they are still wrong.

Bump when edited.

5Sammey's starter magic ~Done~ Empty Re: Sammey's starter magic ~Done~ Mon Oct 20, 2014 4:47 pm

Sammey White

Sammey White
Ok i think i got it this time ~Bump~

6Sammey's starter magic ~Done~ Empty Re: Sammey's starter magic ~Done~ Mon Oct 20, 2014 7:18 pm

Kazuki Kobayashi

Kazuki Kobayashi
[/b]Slide[/b]: Please take out the part about the time. If this is a speed boost, state how fast it makes you move. The time is measured in duration, which is 1 post.

Bump when edited.

7Sammey's starter magic ~Done~ Empty Re: Sammey's starter magic ~Done~ Mon Oct 20, 2014 7:22 pm

Sammey White

Sammey White
OK i think i got it this time ~Bump~

8Sammey's starter magic ~Done~ Empty Re: Sammey's starter magic ~Done~ Mon Oct 20, 2014 7:34 pm

Kazuki Kobayashi

Kazuki Kobayashi
Approved!

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