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1Astral's Chill [to be trained] Empty Astral's Chill [to be trained] Sat Oct 11, 2014 4:01 am

Astral

Astral
To be trained spells:

Name: Shuriken Blizzard
Rank: A-Rank
Magic Cost: 40 and an up keep of 20 per post
Requirements: Snow Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Snow
Cooldown: 5 posts
Duration: 5
Effect: The user creates a number of shurikens of super condensed snow 5 inches in length and paper thin. These Shurikens are extremely sharp and due to their snowy nature make them like sandpaper and cause far more pain than just a clean cut.  Each shuriken can cause deep cuts and lots of pain.

There are several variations of this spell.

Variation 1:
10 shurikens are created each one can be controlled individually.

Variation 2: the user creates 160 shuriken which moves in one giant group.

Name: Snow Woman
Rank: A-Rank
Magic Cost: 40 and 20 upkeep per post
Requirements: Snow Magic
Class: defensive
Element: Snow
Cooldown: 5
Duration: 5 posts
Effect: The user creates a highly condensed armor of snow around the user. Its flexible so the user can still move in it. It even covers their face with only holes to see and breath. The armor can withstand the following attack ranks before breaking.
1 S-Rank
2 A-Rank
4 B-Rank
8 C-Rank
16 D-Rank

This is not cumulative. If the armor takes 2 B-Rank attacks then it would only be able to withstand one A-Rank attack after that rather than 2.

Name: Snow Serpent
Rank: B-Rank
Magic Cost: 30 and 15 upkeep per post
Requirements: Snow Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Snow
Cooldown: 3
Duration: 3
Effect: Creating a giant snake of snow 10 meters long (only a little less then 2 meters more than the largest recorded python) and 2 meters thick. The Serpent can be redirected if it misses or the target attempts to dodge making getting away from the thing very difficult. On impact the attack does minor internal bruising and fractures.

Name: Forest of Snow
Rank: B-Rank
Magic Cost: 30 and 15 upkeep per post
Requirements: Snow Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Snow
Cooldown: 8
Duration: 8
Effect:
Using Snow magic the user creates a large field of hard snow spikes each a meter long and 16 centimeters thick. The field spreads 15 meters out from the user in every direction. The spikes are so densely placed that stepping anywhere in this field is impossible without suffering deep puncture wounds. The spikes will actually dissolve to allow the user of the spell or anyone the user doesn't see as their enemy to pass freely through the field. After stepping out of harms reach of each spike they reform back in place.



Last edited by Astral on Sun Oct 12, 2014 6:22 pm; edited 2 times in total

2Astral's Chill [to be trained] Empty Re: Astral's Chill [to be trained] Sat Oct 11, 2014 12:16 pm

Ardere Kasai

Ardere Kasai
-How large are the shurikens? If they can move all in individual directions that number is going to be cut drastically, if they move in a large mass then you can just make a 25 meter mass of shurikens that you can sustain. Make the duration 5 posts.

-Make the duration 5 posts. Say "before breaking" not "without", just to avoid confusion. But thanks for putting the note below btw.

-Approved

-Make it a 15 meter radius.

Bump when done :3

3Astral's Chill [to be trained] Empty Re: Astral's Chill [to be trained] Sat Oct 11, 2014 3:13 pm

Astral

Astral
bump all edited

4Astral's Chill [to be trained] Empty Re: Astral's Chill [to be trained] Sat Oct 11, 2014 3:35 pm

Ardere Kasai

Ardere Kasai
-Im gonna need you to pick one single variation for this spell. It cant split up and do multiple things. Mages arent like shinigami where they have one spell that does many things, they have many spells that each do one thing. So just pick whichever variation is your favorite and state it can be destroyed by an A rank spell. Also state each shuriken deal moderate cuts, since they dont each individually deal A ranked damage, but as a collective, and if you pick one of the groups, then just split the damage between the groups. If you know what Im talking about

-Approved

-Approved

-Approved

5Astral's Chill [to be trained] Empty Re: Astral's Chill [to be trained] Sun Oct 12, 2014 6:24 pm

Ardere Kasai

Ardere Kasai
Looks good, approved. Have fun

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