Warren Dent wrote:
Name: Rumble God's Thunder Kick
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: Lightning Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Lightning
Cooldown: 3
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user coats one of his legs with black electricity and strikes out normally with a kick causing D-rank damage to an opponent. Because of the nature of the magic the user is slightly burned as a result of being hit by direct "powerful" lightning.

Approved.

Warren Dent wrote:
Name: Rumble God's Thunder Punch
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: Lightning Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Lightning
Cooldown: 3
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user coats one of his arms with black electricity and strikes out normally with a punch causing D-rank damage to an opponent. Because of the nature of the magic the user is slightly burned as a result of being hit by direct "powerful" lightning.

Approved.

Warren Dent wrote:
Name: Rumble God's Flintlock
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 20
Requirements: Lightning Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Lightning
Cooldown: 3 <--- Increase to 4.
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user coats one of his finger with black electricity and fires out a large bolt of black lightning that travels outwards up to ten meters from where it is fired in a sporadic line. It will cause C-rank damage on collision with the first object that it touches and will electrocute a body of water equal to seven gallons. <--- Please state how big the bolt of black lightning is.

Warren Dent wrote:
Name: Rumble God's Trident
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 20
Requirements: Lightning Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Lightning
Cooldown: 3 < --- Increase to 4.
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user fires outwards from their body a bolt of lighting that reaches ten meters and then explodes covering the total distance traveled. It does C-rank damage to anything caught in the blast. <--- Please state how big the bolt of black lightning is.

Warren Dent wrote:
Name: Rumble God's Presence
Rank: B
Magic Cost: 30 / 15
Requirements: Lightning Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Lightning
Cooldown: 8
Duration: 7
Effect: The user coats his entire body head to toe in black energy that chaotically forms around him. It provides him no protection benefits but it does cause any of his melee hits to be able to dish out B-rank damage to a target for the duration of the technique.

Approved.

Warren Dent wrote:
Name: Rumble God's Treachery
Rank: B
Magic Cost: 30
Requirements: Lightning Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Lightning
Cooldown: 7
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user surges electricity into the floor or ground beneath them in a straight line up to ten meters, on commanded a ten by five by five meter column will fire upwards from the ground causing B-rank damage to whoever is within it's boundaries. It is a full body attack that will stun an opponent for a single turn. <--- I'd prefer if you put this into seconds or minutes or hours.

Warren Dent wrote:
Name: Rumble God's Extermination
Rank: A
Magic Cost: 40
Requirements: Lightning Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Lightning
Cooldown: 5 <--- Increase to 6
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user fires out a large beam of black lightning that acts like a large canon blast fro ma rail gun. It does enough A rank damage on impact with any object that is caught in the blast. It is a ten by ten by ten beam that hits an opponent with A-rank damage if they are anywhere within the 30 meter long blast radius. <--- Range should be 30 meters diameter not radius.

Warren Dent wrote:
Name: Rumble God's Unlimited Power
Rank: A
Magic Cost: 40/20
Requirements: Lightning Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Lightning
Cooldown: 9 < --- Increase to 10.
Duration: 8
Effect: The user raises both their arms with their palms open and fingers spread, bent to an angle. The user must scream "Unlimited Powah!!" The user pulls their arms back slightly and pushes out releasing black lighting from their hands that span 30 meters in a count outwards from their standing position. The lighting pulsates out and covers the enter 30 meter area doing A-rank damage stacking over time, making the technique itself deadly. It is able to shock half of a lake.

Warren Dent wrote:
Name: Rumble God's Will
Rank: S
Magic Cost: 50/25
Requirements: Lightning Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Lightning
Cooldown: 10 < --- Increase to 11.
Duration: 10 < --- Decrease to 9.
Effect: The user fires a single bolt of energy into any cloud that is present in the air, the cloud immediately expands outwards and engulfs a fifty meter area. For fifteen meters past the cloud the multiple bolts fire downward raining over the outer area on top of whoever may be within the area of effect, exploding into energy over a five meter radius individually. As a result the user is not able to move until the duration of the spell has peaked, and the spell will typically lead to the user being exhausted if used to its maximum potential. At any point the user will summon down a large column of "God's Willpower" that eradicates whatever it hits that is not strong enough to withstand it. <--- State the size of these bolts of lightning and the large column. How many bolts are there? Please give this a number. Remember to include how much damage is done with the bolts. Nerf the damage done by the column.