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1Franatic's Starters Empty Franatic's Starters Thu Apr 24, 2014 4:46 am

Franatic Wolfgang

Franatic Wolfgang
Name: Light Star
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: Light Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Light
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: By moving his hands, he creates 10 small, round light around him. It has a range of 5 meters. Frantic shoot his opponent with this, the speed of the light bullets/stars isn't too fast. It moves at 3m/s. This causes small damage, bruising and a stinging pain if two or more bullets hit. A D rank shield can block them.

Name: Light Cannon
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: Light Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Light
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: Franatic aim his palms to his opponent/target, a small beam of light lunch at the opponent in an instant, the light could follow the opponent, the speed of the light beam isn't too fast. It moves at 3m/s. The beam will explode if it's hit something. If the beam hit a human, the human will knock back up to 4 meters, and the beam causes bruises, and cuts. The beam can be blocked by any D or higher ranked shield.

Name: Flash Bang
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: Light Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Light
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: Frantic formed a triangle with his hand, and when he spread his hand wide, a really bright light, a range of 2 meters, generated from his hands that can disable the opponent's sight temporarily, the opponent's vision will be reduced by 5%. The chance sometimes uses by Fran to attack his enemy.

Name: Light Sphere
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: Light Magic
Class: Defensive
Element: Light
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: 4 posts
Effect: Franatic can form a hard Light sphere, the sphere use to block an enemy's attack, the Light sphere is like a shield but from light. The shield can take 1 C-Rank or 2 D-Ranks before being destroyed. The sphere is 1.9 meters long, as tall as a human and with the width of 1 meter.

Name: Light Needle of Bomb
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 20
Requirements: Light Magic
Class: Offensive
Element: Light
Cooldown: 3 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: Franatic could generate 15 needles of light, really sharp that can create a lot of cuts if you hit it. The light needles will explode after it strikes something, the radius of the explosion is only 50 cm. The needle bomb can knock you back up to 6 meters and give you some bruises and cuts. The light needle can't follow an opponent, so, if the opponent is fast enough, they can evade it. It moves at 5m/s. The spell has a range of 10 meters.



Last edited by Franatic on Thu Apr 24, 2014 11:14 pm; edited 2 times in total

2Franatic's Starters Empty Re: Franatic's Starters Thu Apr 24, 2014 9:38 am

Inzei Mishima

Inzei Mishima
The name's Noah, and I'll be reviewing your spells.

Light Star:
- Remove 23mph. Add that it has a range of 5 meters.

Light Cannon:
- Remove the speed and mentions of mirror magic. It can be blocked by any D or higher ranked shield.
- Mention how far the human will be knocked back if hit by the spell.

Flash Bang:
- Change the duration to instant. State that your opponent's vision will be reduced by 5%, as is the norm for D-Rank debuff spells.
- Mention a range of 2 meters.

Light Sphere:
- State that it can take 1 C-Rank or 2 D-Ranks before being destroyed.
- Mention how big the sphere is. I don't think a small sphere will be able to protect a whole person.

Light Needle of Bomb:
- This is a C-Rank spell, therefore it's magic cost should be 20.
- State how many needles you generate.
- State how far the opponent gets knocked back.
- Mention that is has a range of 10 meters.

3Franatic's Starters Empty Re: Franatic's Starters Thu Apr 24, 2014 9:49 am

Franatic Wolfgang

Franatic Wolfgang
Thank you for checking it.. Fixed! :D

4Franatic's Starters Empty Re: Franatic's Starters Thu Apr 24, 2014 4:49 pm

Inzei Mishima

Inzei Mishima
Sorry about this, but you'll have to add just one more little thing, then I can approve your starters.

Light Star:
- Add that it moves at 3m/s.

Light Cannon:
- Mention that it moves at 3m/s.

Light Needle of Bomb:
- Mention that it moves at 5m/s.

5Franatic's Starters Empty Re: Franatic's Starters Thu Apr 24, 2014 11:14 pm

Franatic Wolfgang

Franatic Wolfgang
Ohh,, no problem! :) Fixed!

6Franatic's Starters Empty Re: Franatic's Starters Sat Apr 26, 2014 8:13 am

Inzei Mishima

Inzei Mishima
Approved. Your starter spells have been added to your profile.

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