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Inukaiya Sliver · 1 Inukaiya's Starter Spells Fri Mar 21, 2014 12:13 am

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Name: Howling Wolf
Rank:D
Magic Cost:10mp
Requirements:Takeover:Beast-Soul Magic
Class:supplementary
Element:none
Cooldown:2 Post
Duration:Instant
Effect:Howling wolf allows the user to release a loud howl that will improve the users strength by 25% for a single post. The howl has no effect on opponents or allies and simply gives the user a temporary stat increase to their physical strength.

Name:Shadow Panther
Rank:D
Magic Cost:10/10
Requirements:Takeover:Beast-Soul Magic
Class:Defence
Element:Darkness
Cooldown:2 Post
Duration:Works for 2 posts or when bright light shines on it.
Effect:Shadow Panther is a spell that shrouds the user in darkness and erases their presence from visibility for two posts. The main function of the technique is to allow the user to get out of a bad situation, hide, or set up an ambush. It is dispelled by light sources and is more effective in areas with less visibility.

Name:Wolves Bite
Rank:D
Magic Cost:10mp
Requirements:Takeover:Beast-Soul Magic
Class:Offensive
Element:none
Cooldown:2 post
Duration:Instant
Effect:This spell is a d rank spell that lets that castor grow wolf fangs and bite the person. Since its a D rank it can't do much damage but like all wolves bite they hurt alot, if this spell is used with howling wolf the damage is increased.

Name:Eagle's gale
Rank:D
Magic Cost:10mp
Requirements:Takeover:Beast-Soul Magic
Class:Offensive
Element:Wind
Cooldown:2 post
Duration:1 post
Effect:Eagle's Gale is a wind based attack that use's a strong gust of wind to blow the person back and can pick up dust and what ever that is light enough to blind the attacker for awhile. Because of the castor having no wings yet it only pushes them back a few feet which gives the castor enough time to attack while the person is detracted.

Name:Gorillas Fist
Rank:C
Magic Cost:20mp
Requirements:Takeover:Beast-Soul Magic
Class:Offensive
Element:none
Cooldown:2 post
Duration:2 post or 1 post
Effect:Gorilla's Fist is a C rand attack that lest the castor change their arms into Gorillas arms and attacks the attacker with half of a real gorillas strength, it will pound the attacker into the ground but doesn't have much strength in it.
How long the castor can hold it depends on the attack, if they use one arm they have a another post to use the other arm, if they use both arms the spell is canceled after.

Last edited by Inukaiya Sliver on Sat Apr 19, 2014 4:17 am; edited 3 times in total

Azabel Poppins · 2 Re: Inukaiya's Starter Spells Mon Mar 31, 2014 10:22 pm

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Inukaiya Sliver wrote:Name: Howling Wolf <--- Ok!
Rank:D <--- Ok!
Magic Cost:10mp <--- Ok!
Requirements:Takeover:Beast-Soul Magic <--- Ok!
Class:supplementary <--- Ok!
Element:none <--- Ok!
Cooldown:1 Post <--- Ok!
Duration:Instant <--- Ok!
Effect:Howling wolf is a D rank spell that use's the wolves howl to call for backup or to gain more fighting strength. <--- It does what? The heck are you talking about?

Name:Shadow Panther <--- Ok!
Rank:D <--- Ok!
Magic Cost:10mp <--- Ok!
Requirements:Takeover:Beast-Soul Magic <--- Ok!
Class:Defence <--- Ok!
Element:Darkness <--- Ok!
Cooldown:2 Post <--- Ok!
Duration:Works for 2 posts or when bright light shines on it. <--- Ok!
Effect:It uses hide's to hide the castor for two post. It to give the castor time to think of a plan or for the castor to have sometime to heal or escape. <--- What?

Name:Wolves Bite <--- Ok!
Rank:D <--- Ok!
Magic Cost:10mp <--- Ok!
Requirements:Takeover:Beast-Soul Magic <--- Ok!
Class:Offensive <--- Ok!
Element:none <--- Ok!
Cooldown:1 post <--- Ok!
Duration:Instant <--- Ok!
Effect:This spell is a d rank spell that lets that castor grow wolf fangs and bite the person. Since its a D rank it can't do much damage but like all wolves bite they hurt alot.<--- Ok!

Inukaiya Sliver · 3 Re: Inukaiya's Starter Spells Mon Mar 31, 2014 11:48 pm

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Did i not explain right?

Azabel Poppins · 4 Re: Inukaiya's Starter Spells Tue Apr 01, 2014 1:23 pm

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For the first spell, take out the calling for backup. Instead give yourself a percent boost and state what you are boosting.

For your second one, I don't quite understand what it does. How does it let you hide per say. In what way would the spell allow you to hide from someone.

Inukaiya Sliver · 5 Re: Inukaiya's Starter Spells Tue Apr 01, 2014 10:06 pm

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Oh i see the second one is like a real panther they use their dark color fur to hide in darkness or dark places so i thought that was perfect but maybe i should change the effect alittle

Azabel Poppins · 6 Re: Inukaiya's Starter Spells Fri Apr 04, 2014 2:39 am

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Okay, so I am going to tell you exactly what your spells should say.

Inukaiya Sliver wrote:Name: Howling Wolf <--- Ok!
Rank:D <--- Ok!
Magic Cost:10mp <--- Ok!
Requirements:Takeover:Beast-Soul Magic <--- Ok!
Class:supplementary <--- Ok!
Element:none <--- Ok!
Cooldown:1 Post <--- Make that 2 Posts.
Duration:Instant <--- Ok!
Effect:Howling wolf is a D rank spell that use's the wolves howl to boost their strength. <--- Should say: Howling wolf allows the user to release a loud howl that will improve the users strength by 25% for a single post. The howl has no effect on opponents or allies and simply gives the user a temporary stat increase to their physical strength.

Name:Shadow Panther <--- Ok!
Rank:D <--- Ok!
Magic Cost:10mp <--- 10 | 10
Requirements:Takeover:Beast-Soul Magic <--- Ok!
Class:Defence <--- Ok!
Element:Darkness <--- Ok!
Cooldown:2 Post <--- Ok!
Duration:Works for 2 posts or when bright light shines on it.
Effect:It a D rank spell that use's the shadow's to hide the castor for two post. It to gives the castor stealth of a panther to ambush or hide. <--- Should Say Shadow Panther is a spell that shrouds the user in darkness and erases their presence from visibility for two posts. The main function of the technique is to allow the user to get out of a bad situation, hide, or set up an ambush. It is dispelled by light sources and is more effective in areas with less visibility.

Name:Wolves Bite <--- Ok!
Rank:D <--- Ok!
Magic Cost:10mp <--- Ok!
Requirements:Takeover:Beast-Soul Magic <--- Ok!
Class:Offensive <--- Ok!
Element:none <--- Ok!
Cooldown:1 post <--- 2
Duration:Instant <--- Ok!
Effect:This spell is a d rank spell that lets that castor grow wolf fangs and bite the person. Since its a D rank it can't do much damage but like all wolves bite they hurt alot. <--- Ok, however you need to state that if used with Howling Wolf the damage inflicted is raised.

<--- Add Fifth Spell here. You start with 5 not four.

You don't have to use these descriptions, but attempt to make them more descriptive. Vagueness is only allowed if your spell has 1 singular purpose and causes no harm/prevents no harm to others.

Bump when complete. <3

Inukaiya Sliver · 7 Re: Inukaiya's Starter Spells Fri Apr 04, 2014 3:38 pm

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<3
I did it, is this OK?

Azabel Poppins · 8 Re: Inukaiya's Starter Spells Fri Apr 18, 2014 7:02 pm

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Actually, redo the Gorilla spell. I don't see how that will work.

Make that spell C-rank, and make it some sort of attack spell.

Sayuri · 9 Re: Inukaiya's Starter Spells Tue May 06, 2014 1:58 pm

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Hello, you have one week to finish this application or it will be archived.

Inukaiya Sliver · 10 Re: Inukaiya's Starter Spells Tue May 06, 2014 9:55 pm

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How is it now ?

Azabel Poppins · 11 Re: Inukaiya's Starter Spells Wed May 07, 2014 6:11 am

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