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1Anei's Starter Magic Empty Anei's Starter Magic Fri Feb 14, 2014 12:04 am

Anei Kurosawa

Anei Kurosawa
Name: Sariel’s Fist
Sariel:
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 20mp, +10mp duration
Requirements: Takeover-God Soul
Class: Offensive
Element: Holy
Cooldown: 5 posts
Duration: Until dismissed/ out of mana
Effect: Anei’s left arm turns into that of the angel Sariel. The entirety of her right arm is covered in red feathers and her hands becomes larger and appears to be made out of stone. When it hits it deals bludgeoning damage 50% harder than a normal hit causing slight internal bruising from direct hits.


Name: Charmeine’s Wings
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10mp, +5mp duration
Requirements: Takeover-God Soul
Class: Supplementary
Element: Flight
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: Until dismissed/out of mana
Effect: Anei grows a small pair of wings that have a wing span approximately 4'6" from tip to tip that are the same light brown color of her hair. They allow her to achieve a 5 meters upward hover/float above the ground and slows done a fall from a slight height enough to prevent a crash landing, but the landing is still far from perfect. While hovering/floating she can not move other than down. They can be destroyed by a single D rank spells if hit directly and 2 D ranks if only glancing blows.


Name: Charmeine’s Halo
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10mp, +5mp duration
Requirements: Takeover-God Soul
Class: Supplementary
Element: Holy
Cooldown: 2 post
Duration: Until dismissed/out of mana
Effect: Some of Anei’s hair is transformed into a glowing halo that projects light in a 2.5 meter radius around her body. This light is infused with Holy energy/magic and as such can cut through both magical and non-magical darkness. It can only be destroyed by an attack that deals slashing damage that cuts the hair forming the halo. It does no damage and is solely used for a light source, primarily out of battle.


Name: Charmeine’s Razor Storm
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10mp, +5mp duration
Requirements: Takeover-God Soul: Charmeine’s Wings spell activated
Class: Offensive
Element: Holy
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The feathers in Anei's wings become razor sharp around the edges as she shoots them all at the enemy with a flap of her wings. The feathers fly forward in a cloud of chaos on the wind of the flab and slice at the enemy causing superficial cuts on any exposed skin they come in contact with. Casting this spell destroys the wings. The feathers as a collective mass deal a total of D rank slashing damage.


Name: Charmeine’s Shield
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10mp, +5mp duration
Requirements: Takeover-God Soul: Charmeine’s Wings spell activated
Class: Defensive
Element: Holy
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: Until dismissed/out of mana
Effect: Anei’s wings become completely rigid to act like a shield. While in use she cannot hover/float and the wings are stuck in the position they were in when the spell was cast, usually wrapped around Anei’s body. Usually they are about an inch or inch and a half above her chest when she casts this spell. They can with stand 2 D rank direct hits, 4 if glancing blows, spells and 1 C rank spell before breaking.



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2Anei's Starter Magic Empty Re: Anei's Starter Magic Sun Feb 16, 2014 2:14 pm

Aoi Mitsurugi

Aoi Mitsurugi
Hiya Anei~ I'll be grading your spells today~

Spell #1: -Make the cooldown 5 posts since it's a mode based spell.
-Please state the type of damage you can do to others. You only say you do twice as much with that arm, but thats' too broad.
-The 2x is going to need to change as well. C rank buffs for a non all-stat magic is 50%, so please change it to that.

Spell #2: -Limit the height you can float to 5 meters.
-State you cannot move while hovering, as at D rank it'll be all you can do.
(Side note: This spell may need full changing based on the rules of flight based spells. as there are none currently. Be aware and have a backup spell in place if you need to change it please.)

Spell #3: -What effect does this light have in combat?
-Can be destroyed? Can it even do damage? Please specify its use please.

Spell #4: -State the type of damage your wings do?
-Can these wings be destroyed?

Spell #5: -How many spells can this shield block?
-When the shield is destroyed, are your wings destroyed as well?
-How far from Anei are the wings when they wrap around her?

Bump when edited~

3Anei's Starter Magic Empty Re: Anei's Starter Magic Sun Feb 16, 2014 9:06 pm

Anei Kurosawa

Anei Kurosawa
~BUMP~



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4Anei's Starter Magic Empty Re: Anei's Starter Magic Tue Feb 18, 2014 5:23 am

Sayuri

Sayuri
Charmeine’s Wings: Turn 5ft into 5 meters.

Charmeine’s Halo: Change 5ft radius to 2,5 meters radius. Cooldown at least 2 posts.

Charmeine’s Razor Storm: State that the feathers alltogether are able to deal D-class damage.

5Anei's Starter Magic Empty Re: Anei's Starter Magic Tue Feb 18, 2014 9:58 am

Anei Kurosawa

Anei Kurosawa
~BUMP~

6Anei's Starter Magic Empty Re: Anei's Starter Magic Sat Feb 22, 2014 8:13 pm

Anei Kurosawa

Anei Kurosawa
~BUMP~

7Anei's Starter Magic Empty Re: Anei's Starter Magic Tue Feb 25, 2014 10:08 pm

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